Curse Return: Electrocution Huayu at the Beginning

Ken Suo really got the heroine. I feel that Kensuo is a perfect match for the prison deer described by the author.

It does look quite fun to fight, but some details can be optimized. For example, the part where the museum owner's daughter follows the protagonist is a bit far-fetched. It would be fun to add a protagonist to fight with the museum owner, so I agreed to the museum owner's request to help take care of his daughter. Overall, it's very good. It really satisfies my original imagination of a plus enhanced version of Laolu learning electromagnetism + reversal + non-disposable spells.

The fighting scenes are top-notch, which makes core fans look forward to them. The daily descriptions are also good, but in fact it feels very disconnected from the author's solitary love. If the author wants to lay the foundation for this character, I think the protagonist can be described more in flashbacks. The anguish in the hospital bed, the anguish of having no opponents after time travel, and the joy of gaining a healthy body after time traveling. Discovering that you can become endlessly strong after being unable to move, but discovering that you are still afraid of Su Nuo can also be described. A perfect character doesn't need to be perfect, and transformation always keeps people interested in watching it. It's not a one-size-fits-all fight scene, but at least everyone can watch it and be emotionally moved by the author, and the polarization is extremely serious. There is also the issue of the heroine. Once it is written, even if the idea is deleted, it will not be clear. There are suitors in Su Nuo's original novel. If you want to write it, write it according to your original tone. The heroine and the hero must love and kill me. If you want to love me, you must be able to kill me. Watching the heroine and the hero turn into a disobedient woman who enjoys fighting does not ruin your character. And looking at it this way, the title, introduction and content of the book have nothing to do with each other. Generally speaking, the sense of substitution and the depth of the combination with the original work are very harmonious. There are some flaws, but it is worth reading. Just think of these things, speak out what you feel, don't like to ignore them.

It's pretty cool, but the cp of Deer Skin Traveler and Tiger Mother Pi Mensuo is so weird that it made me sweat.

It's too late to be sad, the next one to appear is Lu Ziyun Yi! [Sinister smile]

A very good conjuration fan work, which makes up for the lack of previous conjuration fan works by Yang Persimmon that featured Lu Ziyunyi as the protagonist. The author's writing style is also good, and there are no paragraphs that are like a running account. You have to read it, it is a good book and worth recommending. [Praise]

Damn, this is the best spell-returning fanfic I've seen so far. The descriptions are so detailed, and the fighting is so exciting and cerebral. The main character is so handsome. I feel like the main character has become more lively since entering the modern era.

The writing is pretty good, the scenes are well described, and the character of Lu Ziyun is also very consistent. I look forward to the next plot.

I just realized that I haven't written a review yet. After looking through the book review section, I feel that there are a lot of bad reviews (at least I didn't understand them) that I don't understand, so I'll give it a five-star rating to offset this. I prefer the Edo chapter to the Huaitama chapter, and I hope the Shibuya Incident chapter can be more vigorous. What I like most about the Huaiyu chapter is the daily life with Kensuo, but in the Shibuya Incident chapter, Kensuo's wife has been taken over by Xia You (turning against Tiangang), and I don't know if we can still have such a soulmate chemical reaction. Looking forward to future developments. When the plot unfolds after the Shibuya Incident, it will be fun to have more battles, and everyone will like it. [Eat melon]

The writing by Naohua is really good. I highly recommend it to the female protagonist.

After reading this, I actually had a different kind of affection for Juansuo... [Crying], I think Xiaolu and Juansuo are also a pair of fateful mandarin ducks [angry]

It's a very good book, Curse to Return to the New Generation, and the combat power in it is also relatively reasonable. I was really nauseous and numb after reading other books. When I saw the reappearance of the classic in Chapter 19, I really couldn't stand it. The five-star review is great [like]

It's so interesting, Gao Kai, Kang Suo and Lao Lu make a perfect match. If you ask me to change Xia Youjie's sex and make Wu Jiao fall in love with her, then Xia You will rebel again and Wu Jiao will be beaten to death, and then Naohua will take over. In the Shibuya Incident, Wu Jiao had to fight Lao Lu in front of him before sealing him off. Oh, this is so interesting [laughter]

You just talked about it on the Internet. In reality, who doesn't want to join the Death Reincarnation Tour in a hurry, help Kensuo fuse the Tianyuan Great Curse Spirit, and then help Su Nuo defeat the Gaozhan?

Nice! But one thing is that there is a strong person like Lu Ziyun. There is no reason why everyone doesn't know him. After all, he has the record of exorcising Shuten Doji and killing the Six Eyes and Ten Shadows. After all, the family letters of the Gojo family and the Zenyuan family will record how the head of the family died. I hope there will be a patch in the future.

Overall, it is a good book. Logically speaking, it makes sense. I hope that the pitfalls that the author filled in the previous article can be filled in later. As for the lack of one star, I will look at it later. [Rolls eyes]

If I want to write a female protagonist, I feel that I can make Fenghua into modern times, but it feels a bit like Su and Wan, or Li.

It looks good, and the characters are quite restored, but too few. I hope the author can be faster. Although the ending was sudden, after all I had finished fighting Su Nuo, it was expected. This is also the first spell fanfic that I have been following. The writing is really good, the fighting is really fun, the plot is good, and the relationship is honest, I am still quite fascinated by the main story, but there should be a lot of sweet plots in the extras, and I will probably never forget this book in my life. I look forward to the author's next book, and I will also come to support it.

I found that the negative comments are mostly concentrated in the middle, that is, when the author wrote the modern chapter when he was a teacher and a short paragraph after that, and complained about the author's combat power setting and the problems left by the author when writing the ancient chapter, and there were also those that were purely malicious towards Lu Chu. Except for the last one, I still hope that the author will think about it seriously. There is also a final question I would like to ask, author, have you used AI? There are quite a few.

A very nice book that tells the story of a second creation. This fight is so cool! Authentic a… Very vivid character. Lu Ziyun! Thor ~ Feng Hua, Ju Suo, Nuo, Wu, Jie, Ni, Yi Gu... Each character is also portrayed very well. The plot direction is also good. It looks refreshing and not tiring. All in all, it is the first second creation of this genre that I have read. Very good! Looking forward to seeing you in the new book. In addition, I feel that the setting notes written down are very detailed, and you can basically read it without watching the original work/anime. Also, the book reviews in the book are very good [laughing] and the interaction is very interactive, and the literature application is quite good ~ [like] My reading time can be used as a reference without skipping reading. It takes about as long as it takes to read it word for word. Finished reading! Leave a 5-star review! Big cheers for the author [sending heartfelt wishes] I like it very much

It's good to watch. The battle plot is good to watch. The thinking is very out-of-the-box. The process is unexpected. Later, the role of the teacher also softens the flavor of the battle. It is very comfortable to watch. The rating should not be so low. I feel that there is a lot of love and hate in it [please update]

Some places have the same ending as the original work, and some are even more cruel, such as Fushiguro's death, and the protagonist, as one of the promoters, also seems a bit cruel. But other than that, Laolu can be regarded as a strong and lonely love throughout. It can be regarded as the least OOC work.

Not bad actually. How should I put it? The meat harvesting is not as brutal as before, and the original characters will be beaten to death. After resurrection, the main purpose is to fight Su Nuo, so why not make some big plans. Strengthen yourself

Except for the Edo part, where the relationship between the two women is a bit strange, the other parts are great, and the rhythm and fighting scenes deserve this rating.

It has been written very well. Generally speaking, if there is a female protagonist, it is considered to be there, but overall there is still no female protagonist. The most exciting part is that between 400 years ago and the return of death, it can only be regarded as a transitional plot or something. I thought that the female protagonist would be a brainiac or 99, but I did not expect that Fenghua has written the best for Xiaolu.

It's great. I became interested in Xiaolu through this book and then got to know the original Xiaolu. I fell in love with this character. The Xiaolu written by the author is really charming. It's also great that there is no emotional line.

This is the only novel written from Su Luo's era onwards. It's quite interesting and novel, but sometimes the protagonist doesn't understand the operation. He obviously has the Soul-Eating Knife in his hand, so he can just throw it away. Besides, it's his own trophy, so why not get it back from that girl's hand?

Not bad, I'm a little curious about the future development. If Zheyu Huaiyu is written, I'm a little curious about how to deal with the relationship between Xia Youjie and Kensuo. Otherwise, it feels a bit strange no matter what I think. Joining the High Expertise Group and Su Nuo's resurrection are in conflict, but if Su Nuo is not resurrected, there is no point in the deer receiving meat.

It would be great if the side effects of the technique could be weakened or eliminated through restraint. There is no time to mourn, the next person to appear is Ziyun Yi, the strongest deer from 400 years ago [laughing evilly]

It's good so far, don't write it as Must see the next number 2