The Economy Dad Arrives on Rhodes Island, and Slowpoke Little Cautuses Miss Out

It looks good, but it omits a lot of things. For example, the protagonist's formation of forces is inexplicably completed, he is inexplicably connected with other forces, and he communicates with Kelsey and Rhine Life inexplicably.

It's pretty good. As long as you don't make any inexplicable love lines, it will be a high-quality fanfic. What I hate most about reading novels is that I don't know what love is.

The first few chapters are okay, the protagonist appears in Yamato farming behavior, but in the next dozens of chapters, almost every time two or three chapters have to be written about other characters before the protagonist appears. I came to see the protagonist farming, not to see the author simply write about the life of the operators. I can believe that half of the content of the more than 70 chapters is purely about the daily life and exchanges between operators, marginalizing the protagonist, and It is best to mark the group portraits in the introduction, which can save the time of readers who only like to read farming articles but not group portraits. I came to see the protagonist farming, not to read half of the content about the life of the operators. I think it is very dull and boring, probably because of this. No wonder there are so few people, it is probably because of this. Every time I see simple exchanges about the life of the operators, I skip it directly. Too much communication means it is dull. I don't know if the protagonist accounts for half of the content in the back. Anyway, it's hard to stick to the front, and no one cares about the back. Adding a tag group portrait may help the author attract a few people, and it can also save readers' time. 🤔🤔[laughing][laughing]

It's also the latest one. It's quite interesting. It develops the economy based on the comic book Tikalendo. It's a little weak in the early stage, but it's invincible later on. Hilda is cute too So far, there is no trace of AI The author's basic skills are very solid It's just that sometimes I'm immersed in my own art The current plot development speed is quite good. The author should be planning to write a long article comparing the book on Bai Mao All in all, you can look forward to it. It's a good article. Suffered the loss of introduction and title

It's so exciting, the most interesting thing about Ark is still the hardcore ruthless humanities 🥺

It's a good Ark fanfic. The protagonist has a distinct personality and has his own plans and understandings. The writing style is relatively brisk and the rhythm is well controlled. It just feels like a few chapters of Kjerag are lacking, but most of the articles are still good and worth reading.

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It's pretty good, although it feels a bit immature, and the writing is not top-notch, but the main thing is that it doesn't follow the plot, and there are a lot of originals. It took me two days to finish it, mainly the ones about White Haired Dog, I've watched them all, and I've also watched the plot of Ark, so it's so original and full of life, I think it's still very good d(´∀`*), keep up the good work and don't crash halfway.

What do Chapters 351-354 and 365-369 mean? In the ring with Wei District, he suddenly cut into the small lines and children's lines. It felt as uncomfortable as being suddenly called to eat by an old mother while taking off.

Developing society doesn't feel like learning from history, it feels like development in a strategy game. It was so smooth. Where did you find the technical personnel? They promoted the development process on the spot without mentioning any possible difficulties or lack of resources. Just like the game, I need it, so there it is. However, the overall outline can be given 5 points.