Undertale: A Heavy Redemption

Come on, don't be discouraged. One failure means nothing. Everyone makes mistakes the first time, but don't give up on the entire ocean because of this drop of black ink! (｡ò ∀ ó｡)

I will always support you, a lover of the same game.

The writing is quite good, and the descriptions of various characters, details, etc. Are good, but there are some small problems. For example, in the first two chapters, the protagonist feels very powerful, but after two chapters, he is beaten to the ground again, which is a bit fragmented (not a big problem, after all, the protagonist is still a child, and I have not read enough AU to understand the specific combat power). All in all, the writing is quite good and there are really very few UT articles nowadays. I hope the author can keep writing it (the author once said that he would write more than 1,000 chapters).

Yes, the characters are full and really comfortable. Although the processes of several UTs are similar at present, after all, most of them are derived from the original version. The author still writes the characteristics of different UT characters to distinguish them. It is quite interesting [Learned]

Not bad, not bad A little more It's pretty good, the storyline is very good

Let's enter the text together. I vaguely remember that incident. Everyone remembers it. Don't let that incident affect your future novel career. This book is good no matter what. I will slowly improve in the future. I quite believe you can write better chapters. After all, after "Undertale: The Forger of My Perfect Ending", there aren't many ut novels that arouse my love (there's a shortage of books).

Looks good so far

Too arrogant, too arrogant to be offended

Come on, it's beautifully written.

The fight is over, I feel so peaceful and happy