As of Chapter 42, there are basically no poisonous points, the writing is smooth, the emotions are delicate, the characters are not stereotyped, the story is interesting, the pace is relatively not that fast, the protagonist's current combat power is invincible, and there is considerable development.
In summary, the potential is huge and the future is promising. The protagonist is a mother-level senior succubus who enjoys fighting and sacrifices everything for hope. The highlight is that the protagonist, a succubus, inadvertently stirs up his juniors to compete for the protagonist's Shura field.
A very good book, each description of magical girls is unique. Magical girls are also human beings and will not be perfect. They will have shortcomings and selfishness. This is something that most works do not have. I feel very happy that it makes the characters in my novels more human and more like flesh-and-blood people🔞
Hakimi first sends a good review to himself [exploration]
Too much sugar will give those readers diabetes! So listen to me and write a knife later, for example, let the protagonist "die" in front of them! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
The characters are innovative and not stereotyped, and the inner activities are deeply and delicately portrayed. Being able to read such magical girl novels is simply a blessing that I have cultivated in three lifetimes [][][] Being able to see such magical girl novels is worth the price of admission! You must keep writing, author, I can do anything!
The plot level of Sirius is very, very high. If you don't seek to surpass it in the follow-up, just maintaining the same level is enough to get a five-star rating [Like] [Like]
What does it mean to raise books to support death? ! The story of "Breaking Dawn" is too legendary. The huge world view and characters of this book can be grasped by both hands for a short time. Unfortunately, this writing method is too tiring, and it is judged as a flashy and superficial area.
The next book is very good, Mi Meow recommends it here ദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧
Wow, it looks good. This is what I want to see.
Ahem, the more I read, the more I enjoy it, especially the chapters about Sirius. I hope the author can maintain this state. And I particularly like the feeling of the following chapters starting with a metaphorical story and then transitioning smoothly. Come on, author, update quickly😋😋😋
Very pretty, I wish there was more sugar and less knife
Currently Chapter 46
①This article does not start from the time when the protagonist has traveled through time, but after the protagonist has already traveled through time and experienced some things.
②The system of the protagonist of this article is physical and is a cat. Although it cannot communicate with the protagonist at any time, it adds a certain degree of joy.
③The writing style I am currently doing is very good, at least it looks good to me.
④ If it's not enough, please update it quickly.
It's a pity. When I came back to read it, it had already been cut in half. Overall, this book is still good. The sweet text in the front is very comfortable, and the back part is just like the author said.
The logic is smooth, the description is good, and the plot and characters are also quite good. I just feel that the speed in the early stage of reading is very fast, and then I am a little bit sharper with me later. I suggest everyone pay attention.
It's very good. The emotions and conflicts of each character are well highlighted. The protagonist always has the gentleness of his predecessors. The overall sense is good [laughs][laughs][laughs]
It's quite good, and it's already better than most books of the same type. The story isn't too cliche, and I haven't seen any bad points so far.
Worth a look
The introduction says that the protagonist turns Zhi Yu into a cool story, but is it really a cool story? Why do I feel depressed again now [face covering]
Gua, it's so delicious [Admiration]
Great, great, great!
Where did this come from? Is this still a tomato? Why did a book of gold suddenly appear on my homepage [crying]
Gua, if you can read such a powerful novel, even if you die, it will be worth the price of admission!
A very good book. It made my eyes feel hollow. I have been reading this book for so long. This is the only story telling that made me feel a little nauseous. The author is really great. It's beautiful. [Like]
Love it, love it, recommend it more
In this way, I am an old fan.
The plot is pretty good.
OK, you did a good job
Immortal product Needless to say
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Looks good, come on, meow
Strong and powerful, blessed and awesome
Delicious, needless to say [Adoration]
The sense of distortion is undeniable. Praise!
So cool! I want to see it, I want to see it!
It feels wrong, I feel like I was tricked into taking a knife [Petrochemical]
As of Chapter 42, there are basically no poisonous points, the writing is smooth, the emotions are delicate, the characters are not stereotyped, the story is interesting, the pace is relatively not that fast, the protagonist's current combat power is invincible, and there is considerable development. In summary, the potential is huge and the future is promising. The protagonist is a mother-level senior succubus who enjoys fighting and sacrifices everything for hope. The highlight is that the protagonist, a succubus, inadvertently stirs up his juniors to compete for the protagonist's Shura field.
A very good book, each description of magical girls is unique. Magical girls are also human beings and will not be perfect. They will have shortcomings and selfishness. This is something that most works do not have. I feel very happy that it makes the characters in my novels more human and more like flesh-and-blood people🔞
Hakimi first sends a good review to himself [exploration]
Too much sugar will give those readers diabetes! So listen to me and write a knife later, for example, let the protagonist "die" in front of them! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
The characters are innovative and not stereotyped, and the inner activities are deeply and delicately portrayed. Being able to read such magical girl novels is simply a blessing that I have cultivated in three lifetimes [][][] Being able to see such magical girl novels is worth the price of admission! You must keep writing, author, I can do anything! The plot level of Sirius is very, very high. If you don't seek to surpass it in the follow-up, just maintaining the same level is enough to get a five-star rating [Like] [Like]
What does it mean to raise books to support death? ! The story of "Breaking Dawn" is too legendary. The huge world view and characters of this book can be grasped by both hands for a short time. Unfortunately, this writing method is too tiring, and it is judged as a flashy and superficial area. The next book is very good, Mi Meow recommends it here ദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧
Wow, it looks good. This is what I want to see. Ahem, the more I read, the more I enjoy it, especially the chapters about Sirius. I hope the author can maintain this state. And I particularly like the feeling of the following chapters starting with a metaphorical story and then transitioning smoothly. Come on, author, update quickly😋😋😋
Very pretty, I wish there was more sugar and less knife
Currently Chapter 46 ①This article does not start from the time when the protagonist has traveled through time, but after the protagonist has already traveled through time and experienced some things. ②The system of the protagonist of this article is physical and is a cat. Although it cannot communicate with the protagonist at any time, it adds a certain degree of joy. ③The writing style I am currently doing is very good, at least it looks good to me. ④ If it's not enough, please update it quickly.
It's a pity. When I came back to read it, it had already been cut in half. Overall, this book is still good. The sweet text in the front is very comfortable, and the back part is just like the author said.
The logic is smooth, the description is good, and the plot and characters are also quite good. I just feel that the speed in the early stage of reading is very fast, and then I am a little bit sharper with me later. I suggest everyone pay attention.
It's very good. The emotions and conflicts of each character are well highlighted. The protagonist always has the gentleness of his predecessors. The overall sense is good [laughs][laughs][laughs]
It's quite good, and it's already better than most books of the same type. The story isn't too cliche, and I haven't seen any bad points so far. Worth a look The introduction says that the protagonist turns Zhi Yu into a cool story, but is it really a cool story? Why do I feel depressed again now [face covering]
Gua, it's so delicious [Admiration]
Great, great, great!
Where did this come from? Is this still a tomato? Why did a book of gold suddenly appear on my homepage [crying]
Gua, if you can read such a powerful novel, even if you die, it will be worth the price of admission!
A very good book. It made my eyes feel hollow. I have been reading this book for so long. This is the only story telling that made me feel a little nauseous. The author is really great. It's beautiful. [Like]
Love it, love it, recommend it more
In this way, I am an old fan.
The plot is pretty good.
OK, you did a good job
Immortal product Needless to say
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Looks good, come on, meow
Strong and powerful, blessed and awesome
Delicious, needless to say [Adoration]
The sense of distortion is undeniable. Praise!
So cool! I want to see it, I want to see it!
It feels wrong, I feel like I was tricked into taking a knife [Petrochemical]