What Do You Mean I'm No. 1 on Honkai: Star Rail's Must-Eat List?

There are currently nine chapters, and the future is promising. I feel very comfortable with the protagonist's character, and there is no frivolous behavior like other books (it's really embarrassing to read, because I usually take on the role of the protagonist), including the casting of the heroine. I give it a good review. I have been short of books recently, and I hope the author can continue to do so. The more I watch it, the more weird it becomes. It starts to have little awkward moments, such as when Bronia calls her brother, it looks so similar 🍬

Objective evaluation (up to Chapter 37), overall I can give 4 points for the plot. The author's writing style feels a little immature, the sense of substitution is not particularly strong, and there is always a sense of alienation. In addition, the emotional line is not handled delicately enough (it always feels like the protagonist has given the heroine a hypnotic drug), and the characters are not polished enough (for example, the character of SDA's scheming rich lady is not fully reflected) Beauty, and Lang Bao. In addition to being an Internet-addicted girl who likes cheating, she is also a punk Lord Wolf. She has her own pride, which is not obvious yet), but I really like the author's plot. Among all the Bengtie fans in Tomato, I can give it a mid-to-upper rating, so I give it 5 points. I hope the author writes better and better books. Come on.

I will use the most straightforward, the least roundabout, the most direct, the most truthful, the least roundabout, the most heart-breaking, the most hard-core, the most straightforward, the least ink, the most poignant, the most ruthless, the most to the point, the most straight to the point, the most straightforward, the least foreshadowing, the least I am polite, the least sensationalist, the least nonsense, the least oblique, the least cryptic, the least pretentious, the least cliché, the least formalist, and the least pretentious way to tell you that this book is very interesting [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates]

So far it looks pretty good, except that the personalities of some characters are not fully revealed (which is difficult in itself), and it seems that the author has confused the fate of quite a few characters in the plot with the fate of the characters in the game. For example, the current appearance of March is definitely to open up a fate. , The destiny path of memory is hidden, and there is no basis in the plot of the destiny path of preservation; and Bai Lu, as a member of the Vidyadhara clan and a descendant of immortality, the main destiny path must be immortality (immortality is just the star god disappearing, and then part of it is torn apart by fertility and reproduction), but it is written in the book that Bai Lu is the destiny path of abundance.

It's good. It makes up for the regret. How can I put it? The male protagonist is like a humanoid succubus, and the female protagonists love each other inexplicably. Although there are reasons for "past life", it would be nice to write more stories before the reunion and polish the emotional lines. There is another one, I don't believe it is just with Aisi. Dawang was able to catch her while chatting, and the life-saving grace was a bit far-fetched. She can manage an entire space station, and her abilities will only increase, and she will directly become a love brain. Another one, Natasha, after falling in love with her, does not appear in dozens of chapters. What, the character is so in love with the pool, is she really a direct warehouse manager?? ——Of course, this book is still very good. The emotional line is just a little bit tough. Others, such as: Cocolia died thousands of times in Bengsan, it is not a pity, Bengtie died, it is a pity, she was also forced by despair, it is good to be saved here, and Liuying, she is finally not the only iron knight in the universe, I am very happy, OK, that's it, the author writes well, come on

How is Chapter 13 written? 🙂 Forget it, Chapter 13 has a lot of poisonous points. Every time I read it a few times, I don't want to read it anymore. I'll forget it.

The article is well written. Although the number of chapters is still small, it definitely has potential. Come on, author.

The writing is great, one of the best Star Iron fics I have ever read 👍. The plot is adapted very well, and there are a lot of daily love scenes, which are quite sweet [Blowing Kisses]

In fact, if Dan Heng's reincarnation was complete, Lao Ren would not pursue him. For TAIJAN, for now, I probably mean that I won't go out of my way to write certain plots. If you have such a need, you can just skip it. The overall quality is awkward in some places, but it's still acceptable to me. That's it. I plan to read this book instead.

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