The Miaojiang Holy Son Comes Down the Mountain to Be His Wife's Dog

After reading the author's previous version, I personally liked the description of the previous version better 🤭 I also like this version, and the plot is a bit bland, but the content is not much, which just makes up for my problem of reading bland articles for a long time and I can't stand it 🤭. It's about Miao territory, but I don't think it has much to do with Miao territory (mainly when I think of Miao territory, I feel like there are a lot of bugs and so on, but in that case there would be a lot of plot content [awkward laughter]) But it just so happens that a society governed by the rule of law can't mess with those things hahaha😂 Some of the content in the whole book has a high degree of overlap, but it's okay. It only overlaps two or three times, which is acceptable (I have read a book before and wrote the same paragraphs more than a dozen times). There are some places where the author may have revised the text later, so there are a few minor bugs, which do not affect my reading. There are also some places where two people are talking back and forth but are not divided into paragraphs. It is very tiring 🤦 (I personally like to divide the paragraphs into more detailed ones). There are no other big problems 🤭

Very sweet, the character is also good, keep it up... It's just a little less meaty hahahaha, a little too pure 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

The writing is very nice and sweet, and the character is well developed. However, some parts are always repeated. For example, "pull the sleeves" is repeated many times, and the reaction is the same after pulling the sleeves. It feels like it is always emphasizing this, and it will feel very strange if you read it too much 🤔 (can't describe it) ps: I'm just giving a suggestion, not saying that the novel is not good. [Sending my heart]

After reading the first dozen chapters, it was okay, and the writing style is indeed a bit immature, but the rhythm is not suitable for me. I mean Yang Yanchen's growth, it seems too simple, and I can't accept it. My problem. I hope the author will get better and better in the future.

This is such a delicious article, why don't you come and take a good look at it? How can it be so warm and sweet? OK, I have fallen deeply in love with this author too, okay? The babies of the two protagonists are so nice, loving, and cute. There are so many cute things... Doesn't anyone understand? Come read this delicious article, okay?! 😳

It's really beautiful. Good luck to the author.

It's more everyday, with a plain feeling, very nice 👍👍👍👍👍

Super pretty(⑅˃◡˂⑅)sweetฅ( ̳• ◡ • ̳)ฅ

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It's ok, the plot is ok too, Little Couple 99, Shen Zhe 99