In Project Moon, I'm a Retired Magical Girl

There is nothing wrong with the story so far. The author has a great imagination and the character of the protagonist is also well established. She is probably the kind of narcissistic and big-hearted little girl. She is the straightforward type who will definitely fight back on the spot if anyone dares to look down on her. She does not hide her identity and has no scheming. I think the only problem is the author's writing style. Various words are used incorrectly. There is an extra word here, a word missing there, and there are piles of vernacular descriptions. So my evaluation is that you can watch it, but don't look too closely when watching it. It's quite comfortable to simply immerse yourself in the world described by the author. It does what a qualified and refreshing article should do, and it is enjoyable enough to read. So if you just read it to relax your brain, this article is worth recommending.

It's okay so far. The writing style is relatively concise, without a lot of embellishments. So far, some unreasonable parts have been blurred + the originally unreasonable city has made me not feel that my brain has been insulted.

Alternative cool articles For a magical girl of the creation type, letting her work as a support person is the most reasonable choice. You will know if there is a stable environment to open a workshop later. Magical creation only requires magic power (equivalent to physical strength) + understanding of the structure. In comparison, combat ability is really not good. For example, the condensation of magic power can produce enkephalins without any damage, and the physical strength is very abundant when not fighting. If you don't research and only create things, it is not very energy-consuming to use singularity to create things. The ability to create things is equivalent to when you are in a company. As long as you have the ego blueprint, you don't have to produce it. She will make a set for you 24 hours (yes, it is not calculated by days, but by time). There is no upper limit. The only thing you have to take care of is her mood. It's just that the magical girl's character is quite pure. If you mind, it's best not to watch it. Second supplement: In the city, there are only big and small traps, overt traps and covert traps. It is better to be cheated more often in the early stage and have a longer memory than to be cheated later when the color is revealed.

Give yourself a good review, I hope you can get a rating, and please leave more messages. Thank you to everyone who corrected my typos. I no longer use my mobile phone to code. I will proofread more in the future. Thank you for still having the patience to read my books. ❤️

What you wrote, author, made me see the trend (maybe because I am a person with strong empathy). I was attracted by the cover at first, and I couldn't stop once I saw the content (is this adulterated?). The characters are very three-dimensional, the protagonist and the supporting characters have their own characteristics, and the author's plot is not too stiff, and it flows slowly like flowing water. The reading threshold of this book is also very low, and even those who don't know about monthly calculations can understand it. I have only read Chapter 171 so far (I read it on another account), so I will express my feelings after reading it. (If anyone bullies Qianna again, I don't mind listening to the fairy music of the singing machine for a while longer) Let's talk about Qianna at the end. Summary: strong, kind, confident, loyal, and straightforward. Obviously coming into the world alone is the greatest tragedy, but you experienced it twice. It's as if fate has made a joke. There are no relatives or friends, which makes you feel more intense about not believing in and accepting true love. The magic obtained in desperate situations makes you live in deception. You only think about the happiness of others, making you ignore your own situation. These are sources of tragedy. Is it difficult to go through so many setbacks in the end? It's really amazing that you can withstand a mountain of pressure. Your ability to carry it while holding on to your faith proves yourself. Although as a bystander I cannot make my own conclusions, but in the end I want to say to you, "China! As a real magical girl, you are the cutest!!!" (My comments are all my personal thoughts, please correct me if there are any mistakes. Complaint: I am obviously looking for a novel that I hate! Author, your cover made me miserable 😢 😢 😢 I swallowed it in one gulp and found that my mouth was full of knives 😢 😢 😢)

After reading it, I can only say that it is perfect. I have read it several times before, and I always felt that this book just moved the magical girl to the city. However, the author integrated the setting of the magical girl very well, and the taste of the city is also very positive😋😋😋😋, delicious! Pain, you are my only one~

Yes, the plot arrangement and the protagonist's personality are very interesting. After all, the protagonist is a child, and he is relatively dependent on others and easily fooled by adults, but he is very clever. I hope that in the future, I will not continue to play with the Xichun family, but I will be affiliated with a few more companies, so that the protagonist can have more subjective initiative. Otherwise, I feel like I am always working for others, which is less qualified.

It's great, the writing style is acceptable, the plot is smooth and reasonable, the setting respects the original but is not as complicated and in-depth as ordinary monthly novels, and outsiders can read it as an urban novel with special powers and high martial arts from another world. Rating: A+

Super big cup! Extra Large Cup has been added to my Extra Large Cup bookshelf group. The content is non-toxic and the writing is excellent. (Hey, it's been so long since I've written a review of a book about a super-large cup. I forgot how to write it before.) Anyway, it's very worth reading.

Five-star praise. It's been a long time since I've seen a fan who can respect the urban worldview. I just don't know if I'll meet the protagonist group [laughing] (Heathcliff: The haircut coupons are still chasing me/Yoshihide: It's random weapons again, and Hermes is looking for a substitute again?)