After Sucking My Blood, the Cold Long Ji Acted Like a Spoiled Child

The first book Meow. Going all out. Hope you like it.

I can only say that the author said that the rating will go up. I firmly believe that I have not found any traces of AI creation. The writing and story structure are very good. There are currently no poisonous points. It is a pretty good book.

A very rare novel in Tomato: The setting is novel, the world view is perfect, the conceptual logic is smooth, and some subtle settings really poked me, so give me a big score; the writing style is very good, the writing style has an indifferent but deep feeling, it is definitely not a simple white text with straightforward description, a big score; the description of the characters' emotions is delicate, although the previous emotions are a bit stretched and twisted (some people may like this), but the emotional description is reasonable and very good It's meticulous, it's not the brainless industrial saccharine articles that throw away logic in large quantities on Tomato, extra points; and there is no trace of AI for the time being (some novels written by novice authors on Tomato overflow the flavor of AI after reading more than ten chapters, but this one doesn't), extra points; it can be seen that the author is ambitious, and often responds to readers' comments, so he should have put a lot of effort into this book, keep up the good work for you [Love] [Please update]

There are many elements. The loser's counterattack and the love party struggle are the main ones that are fun. I have read 20 chapters and the writing is still good. The pace of the plot is advanced. The author's writing is very good. I just hope that the author will accept everything if he wants to start a harem. If he wants to have pure love, don't waver.

A good book, the writing is powerful and the emotions are delicate. I haven't seen a novel with great care on Tomato for a long time.

The writing style is very delicate, and the description of the characters is very vivid, giving people a feeling of being alive on the page. However, the line breaks are too frequent, and I suspect that the author is lazy [smile] I have to say that this is a good book, and the author's skill ranks among the top three novels I have read in recent years. The shaping of the worldview is also okay, it is not too grand, and the interweaving of some character details makes it easier to understand. Good book good book good book

Although I personally feel that there are pacing problems (for example, when Ao Qingjin sneaks into the ward, the information density of the chapters is too small), but he is an author who writes seriously and does not make bad jokes. This is an attitude that I approve of. I will give it five stars. It has a single female protagonist, and there are so many other emotional lines. I can accept a harem, and I can also accept a single female protagonist, but the in-between approach is a bit uncomfortable, and that doesn't mean it's necessarily bad. Everyone's acceptance level is different, and the writing is quite good. But if you are as uncomfortable with this kind of plot as me, you should consider it carefully.

Very pretty. There is a problem with the protagonist's relationship with the character Ao Qing. Can we say that Ao Qing is the protagonist's Bai Yueguang? A person with a personality like Ao Qing might be attractive to the protagonist. The main reason is that there is too little foreshadowing. If there is only that story-telling memory, I feel it is a bit abrupt. And Nono, the character is well created, and the protagonist's emotions and obsession with Nono can also be explained, which is pretty good. The protagonist won't ascend in the later stage, otherwise I don't know how to live in his body.

Author: Is Noela a arrogant loser? [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] Also, is there a single heroine or multiple heroines?

It is a perfect reflection of real life, the scenes and characters are described delicately, and there is a sense of reality.

Full marks, hurry up and buy this pure potential stock. I am a new author but my writing skills are strong enough. I will follow up for more updates😋😋😋😋

There is a suspicion of showing off the writing, but the plot development, narrative, characters, and the authenticity of the world view are quite well controlled.

I know this book has a single heroine, but I don't want it to have two heroines. I didn't watch for long But I think Ao Qing is very cheerful and cute Reminds me of my sister, I feel like my QQ is bouncy So I think Ao Qing can be beautiful in the end

The author's writing skills are very good, and the various shots and illustrations have a strong sense of expression. Highly recommended. The book is indeed very good, but the title is too stereotyped and not attractive enough. I just clicked on it and read the reviews. There are too many similar books with similar titles, but I just said casually that I didn't think of any better titles.

The plot is quite good, and the overall quality of the book can be rated at about 8.5 Points. However, there are a lot of illogical contents in the second volume that I hope the author will pay attention to (such as: what is pushing the sensor door; what is drinking in the virtual world and the real body will smell of alcohol)

The setting is eye-catching, and the characters are well-drawn. It's been a long time since I've seen a work on Tomato that combines writing, plot, and characters. I haven't seen any bad points so far. The latest fighting scene is a bit uninteresting. I hope the author will work hard and make more updates. I'm optimistic about you [Chigua]

It's amazing. Chapters 32, 33, 34, and 35 are so well written, and the titles are also very interesting (from her and me at the beginning, to her and me, and me and her). The events are narrated completely and transparently from the perspectives of two people. The emotions between Yaya and Little Rabbit are also clearly expressed. It's really perfect. The duration is a bit short because I read this book first on another account.

Has the author not decided who will win between Noela and Ao Qing?

It looks good, I must keep writing it [Like]

The background is very grand and the author has good writing skills. Come on [please update]

The writing is quite good, with the background of Western fantasy and steam era.

Noela, you must win😭😭

Not bad, very delicious Oh my God! I was undoubtedly happy when I came across a book that suited my taste... But the portion of this spiritual food was too small, and I was undoubtedly angry... When the author worked hard to update it, I was undoubtedly ecstatic... Oh, my God, may the compassionate tomato owner improve the rating of this novel and increase its traffic [laughs]

Goodgoodnicenicegreatgreatwonderfulwonderful, the big brother who writes about Dragon Girl, you must keep writing, and you must organize your outline, don't collapse after writing, otherwise I will punch you.

The writing style is very comfortable, and there is no deliberately disgusting plot. It's nice to read.

Is the heroine only Nono?

This is the best! I give 10⭐! Divine book! It's truly a divine book! The third young master of the Tang family was about to cry when he saw it, and Tiancan Tudou was amazed when he saw it! This It is the reincarnation of the Four Great Classics and the leader of the literary world in the 21st century! "Holy Ruins"? I lost some of my literary talent in front of it! "Dou Po"? It lacks some connotation! "Zhu Xian"? In front of it, my feelings fade away! "Covering the Sky"? In front of it, I lost three cents of my imagination! "Buddha's Book"? Half of the layout is missing in front of it! This is a once-in-a-century classic of online writing! The greatest literary masterpiece of the 21st century! From Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Chengsi, Cao Xueqin, to Kong Mo Laozhuang, Shixian Shisheng, Sansu Jiaxuan; from Qin Emperor Hanwu, Tang Zongzu Songzu, Genghis Khan, to Sakyamuni, Plateau, Copernicus, Aristotle --Who wouldn't be in awe after reading this? ! This book by the author is truly the work of heaven and man! Excellent literary talent, Zinc Algae Essence Wonderful, inheriting the style of the Wei and Jin Dynasties, and promoting the charm of the Tang and Song Dynasties, it is profound! It is truly a blessing to read this book in my lifetime! However, after reading this book, a feeling of sadness suddenly emerged: If I never have the chance to see such a masterpiece again in the future, what would be the point of my life? What's the point of my life? ! Fortunately! Make a decision immediately and put it on your bookshelf! A restless heart can only find a moment of peace. Otherwise! If these masterpieces are covered in dust and the world cannot see them, wouldn't it be a waste of resources and the author's efforts? ! After a battle between heaven and man, I finally made up my mind: sacrifice the small self to fulfill the greater self! This book is dedicated to the world for everyone to enjoy! This book must be read again and again. Reach up to the sky and let the whole world know! Walking between heaven and earth, the scorching sun and bright moon are witnesses: Is this book enjoyable enough? No Traveling across the rivers and lakes, rivers and seas serve as evidence: Is this book enjoyable? No Standing on the top of the fairy mountain, Qionglou Yuyu echoes: Is the update fast enough? Not enough! Not enough! Far from enough! Not enough chapters! Not fast enough! Not enough content! Not enough! [Come on] [Come on] Come on J Come on] Come on] Author update soon The author's soul returns. The soul has returned, driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles. The soul comes back. Comes over the mountain and sings. Comes back. The soul comes back. The soul comes back. It sings loudly and triumphs. It is the same robe and glory. The soul is back, the soul is back. Tao: Rebirth Mantra The Supreme Lord's decree transcends your lonely soul, all ghosts and ghosts, and makes you think about it all your life. Those with heads will rise, those without heads will ascend, grab the sword to kill, dive into the water and hang on the rope. Death is overt and dark, grievances are due to death, creditors are enemies, friends are begging for life. Kneel down in front of my stage, the Eight Diagrams will shine, stand out from the threshold, and transcend other places. As a man or a woman, you are responsible for your own responsibility. Whether you are rich or poor is your own responsibility. Edict to rescue etc. Everyone, hurry up and be reincarnated. Please save everyone, hurry up and be reincarnated. (Curse: Your Majesty's decree transcends your lonely soul. You can just recite these eight characters. If you can add: escape from the sea of suffering and reincarnate as an adult, even better)

Why does such a beautiful book have such a low rating?

Do you want a good book? I have it here! I have found a treasure, the author continues to work hard [send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's okay, but the emotional line is a bit slow. The unnecessary characters can be written in less detail and slow down the pace. It can be seen that the background is well thought out.