[Two heroines + atypical "quick time travel" + blackening + imprisonment + two-way redemption + a very small amount of counterattack plot + he]
[Protagonist: Ling Jing×Lin Zhao]
[Fake tenderness, true madness × Fake restraint, true affection]
Lin Zhao's mission is to prevent the leader Ling Jing from "blackening".
But the first second she came in, she became the undercover "Zero One" who was about to take poison and die.
In order to survive, she said: "I am yours."
"This sentence..." Ling Jing stared into her eyes with a deep look, "You'd better... Say the truth."
What Lin Zhao didn't know was that from the moment she appeared, their fates were entangled - so tight that they could never be undone.
Reader comments
This is so cool. I enjoyed the plot, but I just couldn't watch it. It looks like what I thought. A Yuan is Lin Zhao when he was a child. Zero-One was involved in the quick travel game and then brought Lin Zhao back. Or maybe Lin Zhao's memory was tampered with. In fact, I really want to see Lin Zhao counterattack and train the yandere to be a g. Only when the yandere is under his control can he be safe. Otherwise, with the yandere's desire for control, Lin Zhao will wither sooner or later.
The text is finished and I feel it is more reasonable after reading it. The book is short and has a compact plot. There are no obvious plot bugs. The character descriptions of Lin Zhao and Ling Jing are also very profound. There are not many knives in the whole text. In the later stage, it is basically just sugar. It is worth reading. However, due to the length, the book may have a low rating. However, the author's writing style is still good.
(Contains minor spoilers)
The author wrote this two-female protagonist article purely for love. This type of paranoid person pretending to be gentle and a restrained person gradually sinking is very interesting to me. If you also like it, then I am very happy! If you don't like it, it doesn't matter. After all, everyone has different reading aesthetics. However, any form of comments that slander the characters will not be accepted. They are all the author's blood and flesh and blood, and no brainless comments are allowed!
This novel is not perfect, and some readers may wonder why Lin Zhao doesn't directly seek refuge with Ling Jing. What I want to say is that for a character who faces great threats just after time travel, she will not directly trust the person who controls her life and death (even if she is very powerful), and the system provides very little information and is basic. Originally in a state of disappearance, Lin Zhao needed time to think and gradually see who was the one who really cared about her in the process of getting along - this process would not always be sweet, just like Ah Qi's crying made her feel empathy, but the leader only showed dissatisfaction with the tear stains on her clothes, which formed a kind of value Lin Zhao felt that the leader's sense of separation made her very frightened. In addition, from her perspective, she believed that she was A Yuan's "substitute", so the gentleness given to her by the leader would be misunderstood. It was given to her, but she couldn't accept this illusion. At this time, the south offered an olive branch, and the reward after the event was completed made her a little excited. In fact, at this time, she was actually quite conflicted. The main reason for choosing to go to the south was to calm down (although she was taken back later). I think this is more reasonable.
The author hates torture for the sake of torture, and hates sweetness for the sake of sweetness. All plots must be traceable, and try to fill in all the pitfalls to form a logical closed loop.
Finally, I want to say thank you to all the readers who are willing to persist in reading this novel!! The author actually did not expect that anyone would come to follow up... Now that the main text is over, the next step is to release the extra!! Let everyone enjoy it!! [Send heartfelt]
Writing novels is really a waste of time... I'm exhausted... I admire those authors who can persist in publishing multiple novels. They are like gods...
This novel is my attempt to break out of my comfort zone. It's quite surprising that I can persist until this point. I feel very good!
That's all! You can have a good rest.
[Lin Zhao x Ling Jing] The plot is compact and exciting. I feel that the relationship between them is quite delicate, but there is a twist later. Lingjing knows that she has always been her, and has never been a substitute. They are really just two poor little people. Two-way redemption is so easy to fight.
It's ok except for a little water. More than a dozen updates a day. You deserve it.
The characters are full of characters, and I can't wait to see the follow-up development (forgive me for being uneducated [laughs]). I observe that this is the author's first book, and it will be good if he insists on a steady update flow. I wish it a great success.
It's so beautiful…I can't get enough of it
Looks great, highly recommended
I'm going to review it later, it's so beautiful, the flashback technique is amazing, and it's so well written.
This is so cool. I enjoyed the plot, but I just couldn't watch it. It looks like what I thought. A Yuan is Lin Zhao when he was a child. Zero-One was involved in the quick travel game and then brought Lin Zhao back. Or maybe Lin Zhao's memory was tampered with. In fact, I really want to see Lin Zhao counterattack and train the yandere to be a g. Only when the yandere is under his control can he be safe. Otherwise, with the yandere's desire for control, Lin Zhao will wither sooner or later. The text is finished and I feel it is more reasonable after reading it. The book is short and has a compact plot. There are no obvious plot bugs. The character descriptions of Lin Zhao and Ling Jing are also very profound. There are not many knives in the whole text. In the later stage, it is basically just sugar. It is worth reading. However, due to the length, the book may have a low rating. However, the author's writing style is still good.
(Contains minor spoilers) The author wrote this two-female protagonist article purely for love. This type of paranoid person pretending to be gentle and a restrained person gradually sinking is very interesting to me. If you also like it, then I am very happy! If you don't like it, it doesn't matter. After all, everyone has different reading aesthetics. However, any form of comments that slander the characters will not be accepted. They are all the author's blood and flesh and blood, and no brainless comments are allowed! This novel is not perfect, and some readers may wonder why Lin Zhao doesn't directly seek refuge with Ling Jing. What I want to say is that for a character who faces great threats just after time travel, she will not directly trust the person who controls her life and death (even if she is very powerful), and the system provides very little information and is basic. Originally in a state of disappearance, Lin Zhao needed time to think and gradually see who was the one who really cared about her in the process of getting along - this process would not always be sweet, just like Ah Qi's crying made her feel empathy, but the leader only showed dissatisfaction with the tear stains on her clothes, which formed a kind of value Lin Zhao felt that the leader's sense of separation made her very frightened. In addition, from her perspective, she believed that she was A Yuan's "substitute", so the gentleness given to her by the leader would be misunderstood. It was given to her, but she couldn't accept this illusion. At this time, the south offered an olive branch, and the reward after the event was completed made her a little excited. In fact, at this time, she was actually quite conflicted. The main reason for choosing to go to the south was to calm down (although she was taken back later). I think this is more reasonable. The author hates torture for the sake of torture, and hates sweetness for the sake of sweetness. All plots must be traceable, and try to fill in all the pitfalls to form a logical closed loop. Finally, I want to say thank you to all the readers who are willing to persist in reading this novel!! The author actually did not expect that anyone would come to follow up... Now that the main text is over, the next step is to release the extra!! Let everyone enjoy it!! [Send heartfelt] Writing novels is really a waste of time... I'm exhausted... I admire those authors who can persist in publishing multiple novels. They are like gods... This novel is my attempt to break out of my comfort zone. It's quite surprising that I can persist until this point. I feel very good! That's all! You can have a good rest.
[Lin Zhao x Ling Jing] The plot is compact and exciting. I feel that the relationship between them is quite delicate, but there is a twist later. Lingjing knows that she has always been her, and has never been a substitute. They are really just two poor little people. Two-way redemption is so easy to fight.
It's ok except for a little water. More than a dozen updates a day. You deserve it.
The characters are full of characters, and I can't wait to see the follow-up development (forgive me for being uneducated [laughs]). I observe that this is the author's first book, and it will be good if he insists on a steady update flow. I wish it a great success.
It's so beautiful…I can't get enough of it
Looks great, highly recommended I'm going to review it later, it's so beautiful, the flashback technique is amazing, and it's so well written.