When the Iron Collapses, Why Is It Difficult to Calm Down?

The first thing that makes a book good or bad is that you must be able to read it. If you can't read it yourself, don't publish it. This is my first book and I will try my best to perfect each story. I like the stories of many characters in Beng Tie. I just finished the main plot of the episode directed by Pinoconi Fireworks. When I was only over 50 levels in development, I was obsessed with the currency war, and most of the main storyline was skipped. I check the information before writing each character's story. I will try my best not to be OOC in every role In the Izumo chapter, I didn't write about some of the underworld settings, such as getting lost and bringing a makeup box. (I didn't have a very detailed understanding before writing the Izumo chapter) Some settings in the Izumo chapter are slightly different from the official version, for which I apologize. (After all, this is a fan, I hope everyone understands) Here I would like to thank you all for watching, thank you all Why am I writing so much because this is my first five-star review. I hope you will be merciful in my subsequent comments, thank you. Actually, my book is not very good [face covering] If there is a score, it should be about 7 points, it cannot be more than 8 points [laughing and crying] Readers who are demanding can read other novels, such as "The Disguised Genius of the Black Tower Space Station" [Like] I made this book for myself, just for everyone to read for fun [laughs] Thanks to the readers who are willing to read, thank you all [salute]

This is Mizore, not a good book [cool] OK, let me scold myself first As long as you don't say anything illegal or against your conscience. You can say whatever you want, after all, this is not a sweet potato. Life is already very tiring, and it's good for everyone to have a place to release stress. It doesn't matter what you think. But I don't want you to scold others in the book you are playing. Let everyone scold me. When there are more people, I will create a group to discuss the game. Then everyone can share happiness and complaints in the group.

It's okay. In terms of the plot, it feels a bit like watching a daily show, but the knife is dull. I'm looking forward to the reunion part later.

Very interesting😭I finally found a Bengtie fanfic that is non-romantic and suits my taste This touch of sadness really makes me want to keep watching.

The narrative method is plain, but it is very comfortable to read. I read a lot of books myself, but I am not very good at commenting. Please forgive me if I am offended.

Well, how should I put it? The protagonist has a divine beauty. There are seven characters in this book, and the author's writing style is quite good after matching the character design. The disadvantage is that the protagonist does not have much emotional ups and downs, and it feels a bit boring to watch. It is a bit regretful that I did not see the protagonist reunite with Kageryu Yomi and others, or the protagonist was promoted to a star god. It can only be said that the author still has many holes to fill. Secondly, regarding the system, that is to say, the Miracle Spirit appears more frequently in the middle period, and basically does not appear in the later period. It seems that this character is deliberately downplayed. I don't know why?

The narrative is bland but the story is great and I like the style. It gives people the feeling of listening to a story, as if they have experienced a grand adventure to save the world. At this time, an NPC comes from the corner. After talking to him, he sits on a chair, sips tea, and listens to a past event from afar. The story does not have the kind of ups and downs of adventure, and there is no exciting twist. There is just the sunset, the mountains, and a period of "that was a long, long time ago."

I like this book by the author, it is warm and healing

It's a very good book, with a light sense of daily life. I've read a lot of interesting articles. I'm good at reading daily life occasionally. There are only three daily books in my bookshelf that I recognize, two for Bengtie and one for Genshin Impact. They are all marked with stars. If you are interested, you can take a look.

The writing is very good, and it showed me how to think about life [face covering] [crying]

Yes, it's well written, but I don't know when they can meet.

I simply finished reading the first volume. It is very well written and expresses the emotions of the characters.

These two words are "good-looking"

How to say it? I find it more comfortable, but this only represents my personal opinion. If you look at it, you still have to rely on your personal feelings.

Damn it, the knife hasn't fallen yet, why? What if someone hits my eyes with a brick? [Cry][cry][cry]

Soothing rhythm, good

Keep writing, I'm optimistic about you

Come on, I hope this trip will eventually reach the stars

I just finished watching Fairy Boat and I feel like I need to take a break.

It's a pretty good book, but the writing style is relatively light. I hope the author will work harder.

The author writes so well, I like it very much

Yes, microblading, group portraits, very beautiful

It looks good, but when will the main plot start? I want to see the reunion! [Punch out][Punch out][Punch out]

It's very interesting. It's been a long time since I've seen Beng Tiewen that suits my taste.

Very well written, my friend, you will do it, do a miracle that you can't even imagine.

Gentle Knife is very well written.

This book looks very comfortable, prefers daily texts, and the writing style is also very good. It is the best fan book of Xingtie that I have read so far. [Like][Like][Like]

Very unique, I like it very much

Extremely delicious, beautiful and love to watch

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking