The Eldest Lady of the Black Family

It's interesting to write, but it has a lot of bugs. First, the timeline is a mess. . In terms of the age of the characters, those who go to Hogwarts must be 11 years old or older. Taking Harry's class as an example, they are children from September 1979 to August 1980. Harry is in the end of July, so he is 11 years old in the first grade, and he does not turn 12 until the first grade summer vacation. It can be roughly understood that the first grade is a teenager. And because he is a child born on July 31st, the protagonist can only be within one month younger than him in the same class as him, otherwise it will be Ginny's class. In addition, the Hogwarts branches are sorted by the first letter of the last name, and the second one with the same first letter is used. This is a very common sorting method. For this reason, Ai Bo who starts with ab is the iron hat king. But Blake's b is also quite high up (if we use names, the protagonist's c is also quite high up). Five stars for encouragement, come on.

Please keep updating the author, the writing is really beautiful, I like the heroine's character [Adoration]

It looks good. It looks good. The author will update soon.

Nice! ! ! Why isn't it popular? [Facepalm] I really like the character of the heroine, and the author doesn't write a particularly cookie-cutter version of school life, and the major events are written very clearly. Then I saw that there is no OOC now, and the characters are well developed. I really like the occasional extras in the middle. The warm daily life of the Potter Black family is particularly heart-warming [smirking] The extra of Rael and Sirius breaking up broke my heart. The author wrote it very much like brothers hating each other... I suggest the author write a good introduction. It's really not attractive. I didn't plan to read it when I saw the introduction. I only came in after the book review said it was good [face covering] I also suggested adding an hp in front of the title of the book, so that it is more likely to be found by readers [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's quite interesting. I hope there are more wonderful extras [laughs]

It deserves high marks. Come on, the author. It's better than many HP novels I've seen.

The span of the previous content is a bit too big. I suggest you write more about the plot to make it better [Like]

The plot of the first few chapters is quite coherent. From the chapter where I saw the unicorn, I felt like too much plot was omitted. It was weird to read () but overall it was quite interesting!

The story is very fascinating! The character design of the protagonist is also very novel, and I'm really looking forward to the follow-up storyline of the dance party! The author must finish writing it! ! Great!

It's good to read, but I had a heart attack when I saw the chapter about the leave request. Please don't give up, author! Will all the cooks I like leave me? [Crying]