The new book’s rating hasn’t had time to climb yet [Dual female leads + transmigrate into a book + girls’ love + high martial arts fantasy] [Slow-burn romance]
Su Xiao transmigrated into a face-slapping novel.
She was both a failed experiment of the organization and the future villain who would destroy the world.
After one chance encounter with the heroine, the other woman activated a System.
Su Xiao didn’t even know she had transmigrated into a book, and was instead affected by the heroine’s aura.
Following the System’s guidance, the heroine found Su Xiao and tried to save her.
At first, under the influence of that aura, Su Xiao became a docile little kitten.
But Wen Xi was the one who fell deeper and deeper.
As Su Xiao grew stronger, the influence would weaken more and more.
In the end…
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“Please, don’t hit me! I was wrong!”
From the front, it looks like a super mechanic.
It's very interesting, but isn't this cognitive distortion a little too outrageous? Now let's talk about my current evaluation of this work: Advantages: The setting is relatively new, the encounter between the protagonist and the heroine is relatively late, and the protagonist's experience in being studied by the organization laid more foreshadowing in the early stage. Disadvantages: All disadvantages except the above. The first is the emotional line, which is a little sweet at the beginning. After the heroine misunderstood that the protagonist was unclean, there was no progress or waves, and there was no push and pull. Then there is the battle plot. The description of the battle is better than the description of the protagonist's escape from the organization and the battle at the academy. After that, there is basically no sense of graphics. It was written purely to promote the plot. As for the description of the environment, it is still good in the early stage. When it comes to the secret realm, there is basically no sense of picture. Finally, there is the daily plot and plot development. In daily life, I mainly write about the protagonist and supporting roles or about the heroine. There is very little about the two protagonists getting together, and they are framed together to show the occurrence of misunderstandings, which is basically useless. All that's left is to write the villain's story line. The plot development is relatively bland. There are no conflicts in the college life, fighting, making love (there is no description since the heroine misunderstood, just pity, no pulling at all) and famous scenes that are relatively memorable (but if I insist on saying it, the heroine misunderstands the protagonist and makes people faint, and then runs away after doing something reckless, it is also a famous scene). Generally speaking, everyone does their own thing without interfering with each other. However, the plot has now developed into the secret realm, and I hope there will be some ups and downs.
Why do you feel that the previous plot borrowed from the budding organization in "Super Mechanic"? It becomes less and less immersive later on, and the secret realm can be skipped directly without affecting the reading. The overall logic is also a bit strange.
It's pretty good. Do you have any concept drawings of the heroine? I saw one of Wen tide, but I couldn't find one of the heroine.
Not bad, very pretty It has a main plot and shaping. It is recommended to watch. Unfortunately, there are so few people watching it. Why not push it? 😢
The foreshadowing in the front is relatively bland, but the escape plot in the back is very good and not enough to watch👀
Let's give the protagonist a little trick, I feel so bad 😢
No one has read such a beautiful novel 😢
I like it, cheers for the author
Nianghua Baiye? That's interesting. When will the overlord battle be scheduled?