The new book has just come out and the ratings have not come up yet [Two heroines + Chuan Shu + Lily + Gao Wu] [Slow-paced romance]
Su Xiao traveled to a slap-in-the-face novel.
He is a failure of the organization and a future world-destroying villain.
Because of a chance encounter with the heroine, the other party activated the system.
Not only did Su Xiao not know that she was wearing a book, but she was also affected by the halo of the other party's heroine.
Found Su Xiao through system guidance and tried to redeem him.
Su Xiao, who began to be affected by the halo, turned into a docile kitten.
However, Wen tide fell deeper and deeper into the situation.
As Su Xiao's strength grows, the influence will become weaker and weaker.
Finally...
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"Please, don't touch me, I was wrong!"
Reader comments
From the front, it looks like a super mechanic.
It's very interesting, but isn't this cognitive distortion a little too outrageous?
Now let's talk about my current evaluation of this work:
Advantages: The setting is relatively new, the encounter between the protagonist and the heroine is relatively late, and the protagonist's experience in being studied by the organization laid more foreshadowing in the early stage.
Disadvantages: All disadvantages except the above.
The first is the emotional line, which is a little sweet at the beginning. After the heroine misunderstood that the protagonist was unclean, there was no progress or waves, and there was no push and pull.
Then there is the battle plot. The description of the battle is better than the description of the protagonist's escape from the organization and the battle at the academy. After that, there is basically no sense of graphics. It was written purely to promote the plot.
As for the description of the environment, it is still good in the early stage. When it comes to the secret realm, there is basically no sense of picture.
Finally, there is the daily plot and plot development.
In daily life, I mainly write about the protagonist and supporting roles or about the heroine. There is very little about the two protagonists getting together, and they are framed together to show the occurrence of misunderstandings, which is basically useless. All that's left is to write the villain's story line.
The plot development is relatively bland. There are no conflicts in the college life, fighting, making love (there is no description since the heroine misunderstood, just pity, no pulling at all) and famous scenes that are relatively memorable (but if I insist on saying it, the heroine misunderstands the protagonist and makes people faint, and then runs away after doing something reckless, it is also a famous scene). Generally speaking, everyone does their own thing without interfering with each other. However, the plot has now developed into the secret realm, and I hope there will be some ups and downs.
Why do you feel that the previous plot borrowed from the budding organization in "Super Mechanic"?
It becomes less and less immersive later on, and the secret realm can be skipped directly without affecting the reading. The overall logic is also a bit strange.
The foreshadowing in the front is relatively bland, but the escape plot in the back is very good and not enough to watch👀
Not bad, very pretty
It has a main plot and shaping. It is recommended to watch. Unfortunately, there are so few people watching it. Why not push it? 😢
It's pretty good. Do you have any concept drawings of the heroine? I saw one of Wen tide, but I couldn't find one of the heroine.
No one has read such a beautiful novel [crying]
Let's give the protagonist a little trick, I feel so bad [crying]
I like it, cheers for the author
I feel like my writing is pretty good [laughs]
Is the simplified score of Chapter 14 "Little Dragonfly"? (The focus is strange)
I'm a little curious about who was the last person to be punished [Thinking]
Nianghua Baiye? That's interesting. When will the overlord battle be scheduled?
From the front, it looks like a super mechanic.
It's very interesting, but isn't this cognitive distortion a little too outrageous? Now let's talk about my current evaluation of this work: Advantages: The setting is relatively new, the encounter between the protagonist and the heroine is relatively late, and the protagonist's experience in being studied by the organization laid more foreshadowing in the early stage. Disadvantages: All disadvantages except the above. The first is the emotional line, which is a little sweet at the beginning. After the heroine misunderstood that the protagonist was unclean, there was no progress or waves, and there was no push and pull. Then there is the battle plot. The description of the battle is better than the description of the protagonist's escape from the organization and the battle at the academy. After that, there is basically no sense of graphics. It was written purely to promote the plot. As for the description of the environment, it is still good in the early stage. When it comes to the secret realm, there is basically no sense of picture. Finally, there is the daily plot and plot development. In daily life, I mainly write about the protagonist and supporting roles or about the heroine. There is very little about the two protagonists getting together, and they are framed together to show the occurrence of misunderstandings, which is basically useless. All that's left is to write the villain's story line. The plot development is relatively bland. There are no conflicts in the college life, fighting, making love (there is no description since the heroine misunderstood, just pity, no pulling at all) and famous scenes that are relatively memorable (but if I insist on saying it, the heroine misunderstands the protagonist and makes people faint, and then runs away after doing something reckless, it is also a famous scene). Generally speaking, everyone does their own thing without interfering with each other. However, the plot has now developed into the secret realm, and I hope there will be some ups and downs.
Why do you feel that the previous plot borrowed from the budding organization in "Super Mechanic"? It becomes less and less immersive later on, and the secret realm can be skipped directly without affecting the reading. The overall logic is also a bit strange.
The foreshadowing in the front is relatively bland, but the escape plot in the back is very good and not enough to watch👀
Not bad, very pretty It has a main plot and shaping. It is recommended to watch. Unfortunately, there are so few people watching it. Why not push it? 😢
It's pretty good. Do you have any concept drawings of the heroine? I saw one of Wen tide, but I couldn't find one of the heroine.
No one has read such a beautiful novel [crying]
Let's give the protagonist a little trick, I feel so bad [crying]
I like it, cheers for the author
I feel like my writing is pretty good [laughs]
Is the simplified score of Chapter 14 "Little Dragonfly"? (The focus is strange)
I'm a little curious about who was the last person to be punished [Thinking]
Nianghua Baiye? That's interesting. When will the overlord battle be scheduled?