Travel Through the Rocks Era and Start with the Vampire Fruit

It's not bad. I hope I can be more ruthless in the future. Don't be a licker, don't be a nanny, don't meddle in other people's business, be a pirate, and do all kinds of good deeds. Women who are strong can be strong, and they can play with feelings. The Valley of the Gods gives Kaido fruits to make him stronger. Grab more fruits for your future children. Don't do it for yourself. Heaven and earth will be destroyed. Actually, I recommend the Thunder Fruit➕Momo Fruit as the follow-up fruit. If you add the existing vampires, it will be perfect.

It's pretty good, I hope it won't be interrupted or unfinished (the last two fruits recommended are the natural type (Thunder) and the superhuman type (Momo, Luck, Sui Sui or create your own [smirk]), one each [thinking])

Either don't arrange for Sengoku or Cyborg to fight the protagonist. If you win, you must kill him. At least completely lose combat effectiveness, such as losing 99.9% Of life span. Note that they have completely lost their combat effectiveness, which means that they can only work as civilians in the future, and they cannot even defeat pirates with tens of millions of bounties on their heads. Don't think that you will win if you are seriously injured, only if you lose an arm and a leg and lose your fighting ability. 2 Stars if you don't kill It's boring. The plot behind it is just forced and lifeless. Brothers who come later should start reading directly from Chapter 134. If Alice or Teach is caught, just give it 2 stars.

Not bad, give me some encouragement Suppressing combat power, either getting beaten or on the way to being beaten

It's okay, but I still haven't eaten the Momo Fruit, but it should be called the Super Saiyan Fruit. No author can control the rhythm. If you eat it, you will become invincible. I don't know how to write the rest.

Why don't you arrange a superman-type door fruit like this nb fruit? Time does not leave the space to be king. Portable space and then any door. Go wherever you want. Teleport all over the world. Immune to physical damage. Develop multi-layered space. Space black hole. Space annihilation. Anyway, just imagine. Add vampires and immortality. You can't usurp the country.

The pace is good so far and the writing is very good.

The protagonist's strength has been improving a bit slowly, I feel like I can continue to fuck Crane in the second episode [laughs] The rating is a bit low

It was a good read in one sitting, but many pitfalls were not filled in. Many things were mentioned in one go, such as whether Rocks is dead or not, and I no longer believed it after Valley of the Gods, and why the protagonist was lying dead for decades has not been revealed.

Will the Crane be pregnant with an Oak child? But Oak didn't know that the navy was cultivating him behind.

It's basically an extension of the Rocks era. I'm looking forward to the plot of the old-age comic in the new era [face covering]

The subject matter is okay, but it would be better if the combat power is more clear.

The author has a good grasp of the rhythm of the story, and has not deliberately changed the characters of the original characters. It is much better than other fan fictions. The only flaw is that the updates lack bursts. They basically keep two chapters a day, which feels not enough.

Single heroine or multiple heroines? It's like the protagonist has never seen a woman before

The writing is pretty good. Don't know why the rating is so low. Come on, author

The rhythm is very good so far and the writing is good.

How should I put it, the configuration of the three fruits should be one superman, one animal, and one nature. You are afraid of the Phantom Beast and the Demon, but are you not afraid of the Demon with the Superman?

It's well written and there's nothing poisonous about it.

This book is very good, very interesting

It's quite beautiful! Why is the score so low? It can't be considered a masterpiece, but there is still food and grass. If you can continue to watch it, it must be at least 8 points or above. 6 Points is a bit too much.

The author continues to maintain

Looks good, please update soon

Okay, I think

It feels okay, not AI

I have a sense of expectation and always want to catch up on updates.

You are a time traveler, I don't believe it.

And the author will write more about women later, and then let him and his son fight,

It's okay. It's okay to read. I hope it won't be written as a nanny story later.

Come on, please update more

Soldier boy, huh? [Sinister smile]