Concave and Concave World: Seat of the Old Gods

The author's writing style is quite good, but the character is a bit OOC. The author should have adopted the character of Jin from "Concave and Convex World·Rebirth", but the Jin he wrote is too rational. The Jin in the original novel is very cheerful and lively, at least on the surface, regardless of his heart. He may suddenly become a charlatan at times. The Jin in this novel... Just lacks that charlatan feeling (?) And has no soul. In addition, Jin should be a little more surprised when he sees Gray. In the original work, Jin immediately pounced on Gray when he saw Gray. Gray was a bit too cold. In the original work, Gray was set to be Jin's friend, but his personality was colder. In the novel, Gray said to Jin, "You are as stubborn as Sister Qiu said." It was a bit strange. After all, they had been together for a while, so it was replaced with "You are indeed as stubborn as Sister Qiu said." "Just as stubborn as before" is better [Thinking] (I have only read the first 5 chapters and haven't read the rest yet. There may be something wrong with what I said, please forgive me🙏🙏🙏(><)) (The author DaDa does not seem to have many readers. Although the novel still needs improvement, I also give a five-star praise to encourage the author DaDa(≧∇≦). I hope the author DaDa will write better and better as he writes [laughs])

Of course your own work should be better.

Now that I have read Chapter 5, I feel that there is something wrong with the weapons and principles of Montezuma and Red, but it feels fine. I can't remember the single player version. She is tired. She uses a whip. Montezuma's one is a bit like the wind blade, but overall it's pretty good. It should be much better if you can see it in the later stages.