Lol: the Journey Begins with Heartsteel

Overall, it's pretty good and can be used to kill time. Before reading, please note that the writing style of this book is relatively old, probably a few years ago. This style has advantages and disadvantages The disadvantage is that some settings and dialogues are too simple and ideal, and some places are awkward (for example, when he was a kid, he talked nonsense about his family, and he calls himself "brother" and has a classic bastard attitude) Furthermore, the process of founding a country is too simple. I easily persuaded Jarvan and helped seal the deal. I originally thought that Dingtian would become a vassal state, but in the end, a republic was formed. Now it is fighting corruption. I feel that it is not as reliable as asking Jarwen's father to give him a title. What can I say, let's just read it. It's just fun to read lol novels. There's no need to worry about so many political settings. It's also good to watch the protagonist save the people in distress. After all, there are extraordinary powers in the world. These are just used to support the early content. The advantage is that the protagonist is more humane, has a complete experience and does not suffer from serious illness or death, and the emotional and psychological development is also very smooth. It was a bit sloppy in the early stage, but after training and fighting, it has improved a lot. The emotional line is not bad, rescue in despair, companionship and cooperation, the occurrence and resolution of conflicts, the writing is not bad. There are currently no big problems with the equipment. The current progress is the Heart Steel Overlord Blood Armor, extracting soldiers and earning money, and mercury shoe stretcher resistance. The author will continue to work hard and update 😉

It's quite good among books of the same type, and it's not a harem pornographic story. I originally thought I'd be the one to win at the beginning and limit the ultimate murderer [laughing] but it turned out to be Ai Xi.

Can't you buy salary clothes?

Although the front is a bit awkward, the plot arrangement in the back is okay. Is it a harem? It must be a harem, right? It can't be just a female protagonist, right?

It's quite sophisticated. It's my favorite novel with a League of Legends background. I like the restoration of the background very much.

I just realized that I haven't rated this book after reading it for so long. This book is definitely the highest level among all the League of Legends fanfics I've read. At least I can read it, and it can be said that I feel like I can give five stars to any book in the entire novel series that I can read.

It's okay. It's good that there are no slaps in the face or the villain jumping in the face. I like this style. The author doesn't want to be a eunuch.

Tomato is a rare good book, but there is a problem with the numerical value. If the Heart of Steel is used every day, 5 years is actually enough for the protagonist to punch through Runeterra. All in all, the flaws are not hidden, the plot design has its own thinking, and the various characters are in line with the original work.

Although the writing style is not too outstanding, the author probably also carefully checked the historical background, which made me feel that it is generally in line with my personal preferences. Maybe the author is also a newbie, so I would like to encourage you with four stars. Come on! !

This is a book based on the background story of LOL. It cleverly connects the story lines of various heroes. I have read many of them in the past six months, including Epi City, Zaun, Ionia, and Shurima. Only this book has kept me reading. The story line is reasonable and the plot is okay, from beginning to end. A very good book.

I feel very good, the writing is not bad [like][like][like]

Why is there no more update?

Things like pig's feet will usually be given out as salary equipment (ancient coins) at the beginning.

At present, there are only two problems, one is the ability to suppress the battle (understandable), and the other is that the protagonist likes to torture dogs.

Those who shouldn't be raising books will be raised to death [face covering]

Well, how should I put it? Creativity is more important than the exaggerated so-called poisonous points, and it's great not to use AI.

It's the first time I've seen it but it doesn't start with a bang. It's very well written.

It's not bad. So far, I can see that there are no bad points, but there are no particularly outstanding highlights. It's a relatively good light novel so far

It's good-looking, although it's a bit fanciful, but it's really rare to see fanfics with LOL backgrounds in Fanjie. Come on come on!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very good very good very good

Okay, ok, ok, ok

Good looking author, keep writing

Not bad, very nice and novel

Okay, temporary syphilis

This wine is very pure and smooth.

Very good, very beautiful

Very good and super pretty.

Very good, very interesting

Very good, come on, come on, come on