[The heroine hangs up as a military advisor, occasionally ghosts take over the original body, abnormal quick travel perspective, the heroine's perspective➕omniscient]
For System 01, Ye Li is an uneasy host.
Its goal is to allow the awakened to find a safe place in the thousands of worlds, allowing them to spend their lives contentedly.
But when Ye Li arrived, she didn't know what kind of bug was stuck. The character who should have been replaced by her through time travel still retained consciousness.
Not only does Ye Li not grab the body, but he hangs by the character's side and acts as an instructor and a stickman.
It found many worlds for Ye Li. But Ye Li was not satisfied.
She seems to be addicted to hanging up!
Not only that, she also started kidnapping characters from each world!
It seems that more and more people are awakening...
If this bug is not fixed, I will work overtime until I die QAQ
For Ye Li.
The world is just a script that can be turned over.
No matter how wonderful life is, it will solidify into eternal stillness at the moment the story ends.
She was angry that her existence was being interfered with.
Therefore, of course she would not be satisfied with the scripts given to her by the system.
Not only that, she also wants to tear up those stories and make the characters lose control.
Looking forward to it, waiting.
One that belongs to her and everyone
…the never-ending future…
[Ye Li, the awakened one, the world needs rules, not a playground for your arbitrariness.
[I will correct you.
Reader comments
It's a nice and plain story. I just finished watching the first world. For the supporting characters, it is a very rare plot that allows the perpetrator to get appropriate punishment, rather than a strong emotional catharsis. Zhiyao gets the "special" she wants. We have seen Ruoxi's ending many times, but at least it is "happy" in the writing of her creator.
Although the second world has become emperor, there are too many male characters and there is not a large number of female officers and soldiers.
It looks good, the setting is very good and novel, the first world is very well written, I like Ning Zhiyao's character creation very much, this kind of relationship between teacher and friend is a bit annoying (cb), Ning Zhiyao felt that her parents were hers at first, but later her parents were a little cold and felt that Ye Li was hers. The heroine's role as an educator was really successful, making her understand that nothing really belongs to her, only the knowledge she has learned is hers. In the end, she broke through the script and completed her awakening. I really look forward to the meeting of the two later.
It's rare to find a good book! The female to male ratio is 8:2, there are no words that insult women, the writing is very good, and the action descriptions are vivid. It is a very special kind of quick travel. It does not replace the original owner or become a system, but stays with the original owner in the form of a soul. It is a form that has never been seen before. It is very innovative. The first story made me cry at the end, woo woo woo, the second story is from Shuang Wen, so cool! I will keep following up for updates, thank you so much for the author!
It is currently tied to the end of the second unit, which is very beautiful. The author is very creative and creative.
It is not a quick-release novel in the traditional sense. The heroine will not directly occupy the entire body of the heroine in the original book.
Rather, it acts as a bystander "soul body" to guide and inform the key plot at the appropriate time, but will not interfere most of the time, allowing the heroine of the original book to make her own choices and actions.
The relationship with the heroine of the original book is probably that of a teacher and a friend. And I think the best thing about the writing is that the female protagonist in the original book is also very well portrayed. Both her character and her own charm are very distinct, and there is no female rivalry or insulting words.
The writing is very good and fluent, and the plot is well connected, especially the second part about becoming emperor. Author, you write well!! I hope Tomato will provide more traffic. Come on, author, and urge more updates. Author, you must write like a cow! [Adore][Adore][Adore]
It's good to watch. I really like the setting of the "Second Personality" in the first world. I couldn't stand it a little bit later on. I had my fault. It was too old for me, so I decided not to watch it.
It's so beautiful, author, please keep updating [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]
I have seen a double time travel, and I have also seen the original owner come back after everything is completed. This is the first time I have seen this kind of symbiosis between the original owner and the host who came to help. Come on, author,
Spoiler alert for review content.
In short, if you like a sense of surprise, you can watch it.
I only watched the first world. The plot between Ye Li and Ning Zhiyao and Ning Ruoxi was very warm and beautiful, but overall it was both "ideal" and "realistic".
The ideal is that the description pays more attention to the brilliance of human nature, and would rather Zhiyao change her ways; therefore, the original heroine lightly exposed her evil deeds in her previous life; the family members who pampered the "evil heroine" unknowingly changed their behavior patterns, and the parent-child relationship improved The son is no longer a bitch and loves his daughter sincerely; both of them have achieved their ideals/goals when they grow up; Ning Ruoxi, as the "novel heroine" seems to have achieved a satisfactory life, her career in the entertainment industry is flourishing and she marries a passerby at the end.
It looks like a happy reunion, but
Brother Ning, who has vested interests, is self-righteous but inherits the family business beautifully. He has suffered nothing except being scolded by the heroine Ye Li. In contrast, the original male protagonist Zhong Chen, who has the complexity of the drowning plot, has always wanted to use the original heroine Ning Ruoxi to sow discord between the sisters. The original male protagonist Zhong Chen, who was only given the good guy card in the end and escaped death with the help of Ning Ruoxi, actually seemed to have a little bit of humanity. Moreover, although the two sisters were good at studies, their grades were lower than that of the male protagonist, and none of them happened to be studying in the company.
Uh...
To sum up, after watching the first world (without judging the plot of the original female protagonist transcending the plane binding system), I felt that it was so sudden and the plot was very surprising. If you like surprises, you can watch it.
(Stacked armor) I probably won't continue watching it. It's not satisfying enough for me personally. The plot is still too gentle. I'd rather watch something more vulgar and straightforward.
I just finished watching the first world, it was awesome, I almost missed it because of the title. The first world is very well written, the kind I like. Although the title is a bit cliché, it is also the story of a speed traveler saving the original vicious female protagonist. However, this speed traveler does not occupy the body of the original owner, but is more of a guide. In addition, the role of the speed traveler is not much, but it can be seen that she subtly changes the fate of the original owner and others. The relationship between the original owner and the original heroine is like running water, step by step. The story is plain but enjoyable to watch, and the ending of the first world story is also interesting.
It's good-looking, all the important characters are women, there's no competition between women. Compared with most fast-travel movies, the protagonist is just a bystander who drives the story. There is a golden finger but there is no embarrassing rainbow fart. It is very comfortable to read.
The heroine is both a participant and a bystander. She does not control the original heroine, but clicks at a critical moment to separate the original heroine from the original story line without changing the character's background. Usually when reading articles about similar situations, there is always one party with a weaker presence, but in this article the heroine and the original protagonist both have strong subjectivity, and the supporting characters are also very brilliant. It's beautiful!
It's really good-looking. The heroine of the story in the second unit is Jiang Wu. From the village girl who is more powerful than others, to the decisive general and future emperor. Ye Li acts like a mentor to the female protagonists in these units, guiding them to become better versions of themselves.
This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring scrape + Noxus guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are spot on!
The story is very interesting. I listened to the book. I remember that there are no obvious words that insult women or mothers. There are many female characters. The proportion of female characters in the scenes is about 7:3. I am not sure. It's good that women help each other, but the wording is male-oriented. Fortunately, the word "boy" was not compromised and was used for the protagonist.
It is relatively rare in the fast-travel genre to have a soul-body accompanying a strategist-type heroine. The female character is very comfortable. The connection between the female characters and the different character types are also well written. I like this kind of writing that writes a variety of female types. The writing is smooth and the stories are well written. I don't know why there are still so few people for the time being. I clicked in from the recommendation under the update page and immediately tied it up. Teacher, come on and wait for your update (ง •_•)ง
He is an author who easily makes readers like his characters. To be honest, there are too many rebirth and fast-travel novels nowadays. Most of them do not properly depict the emotions of the characters. They only briefly touch on the strange journey of the protagonist Bo Yun. I still like this kind of logical and process-oriented writing. If you don't have CP, you will win the game. If you love a girl, you will win the game.
I give the first story five stars. It's very cute and I like the delicate emotions in it. The plot doesn't matter, there aren't that many men that are an eyesore. If there were a lot of men in the story later on, I wouldn't watch it.
It's very pretty. I haven't seen my faults so far.
Ps. There is an article saying that the female protagonist can succeed because the heroine is helping them behind the scenes. Just like in reality, men are more likely to succeed because there are women at home to help them. How sad.
I didn't like the part after the 16-year-old in the first world (I didn't like it personally, I didn't guide the writing, and I didn't avoid lightning), but the development after the plot ended was a bit unexpected and interesting. I really like The Second World. It's not finished yet. I'll keep following it~
I felt so comfortable watching it. I could really feel that the women in it were all loved by the author. Moreover, the light plot was still very interesting. The author was very humorous and his writing was very good.
It's a very interesting setting. I quite like the setting of the first world and the third world. It's very interesting. Although the protagonist is taciturn, he has a little bit of bad taste. He is a very interesting character. The main characters are basically girls. There are no plots that use swear words. I feel that except for the number of chapters, which is not enough to read, everything else is very good [laughter]
It's really well written, and I couldn't help but give it a good review after reading the first story. The relationship between Ye Li and Xiang Yao touched me. Friendship or confidants, I can't explain the emotions inside, but I really hope they can meet again.
Beautiful, no need to say more
Why doesn't anyone seem to read it? Why are you mentioning something good?
I like to watch the story of the symbiosis between the tasker and the native. The tasker is like a mentor and acts as a guide in the direction.
It's pretty good, a very novel main plot setting for a fast-travel novel, and the author's writing style is pretty good. Judging from the characterization and wording, it is a love story about women.
The writing is so delicate and makes me my most inseparable best friend.
It's very interesting, I've already watched the first two. Fatten up the third one
It's so beautiful. Please update more!
It's a rare good book, and the protagonist made me feel very powerful. Not a word, but a temperament, she is like a chess player
Great praise! ! ! It's so well written, I say! ! ! Let me review it in a few days and praise it. Check out the update hahahahahahaha
It's a nice and plain story. I just finished watching the first world. For the supporting characters, it is a very rare plot that allows the perpetrator to get appropriate punishment, rather than a strong emotional catharsis. Zhiyao gets the "special" she wants. We have seen Ruoxi's ending many times, but at least it is "happy" in the writing of her creator. Although the second world has become emperor, there are too many male characters and there is not a large number of female officers and soldiers.
It looks good, the setting is very good and novel, the first world is very well written, I like Ning Zhiyao's character creation very much, this kind of relationship between teacher and friend is a bit annoying (cb), Ning Zhiyao felt that her parents were hers at first, but later her parents were a little cold and felt that Ye Li was hers. The heroine's role as an educator was really successful, making her understand that nothing really belongs to her, only the knowledge she has learned is hers. In the end, she broke through the script and completed her awakening. I really look forward to the meeting of the two later.
It's rare to find a good book! The female to male ratio is 8:2, there are no words that insult women, the writing is very good, and the action descriptions are vivid. It is a very special kind of quick travel. It does not replace the original owner or become a system, but stays with the original owner in the form of a soul. It is a form that has never been seen before. It is very innovative. The first story made me cry at the end, woo woo woo, the second story is from Shuang Wen, so cool! I will keep following up for updates, thank you so much for the author!
It is currently tied to the end of the second unit, which is very beautiful. The author is very creative and creative. It is not a quick-release novel in the traditional sense. The heroine will not directly occupy the entire body of the heroine in the original book. Rather, it acts as a bystander "soul body" to guide and inform the key plot at the appropriate time, but will not interfere most of the time, allowing the heroine of the original book to make her own choices and actions. The relationship with the heroine of the original book is probably that of a teacher and a friend. And I think the best thing about the writing is that the female protagonist in the original book is also very well portrayed. Both her character and her own charm are very distinct, and there is no female rivalry or insulting words. The writing is very good and fluent, and the plot is well connected, especially the second part about becoming emperor. Author, you write well!! I hope Tomato will provide more traffic. Come on, author, and urge more updates. Author, you must write like a cow! [Adore][Adore][Adore]
It's good to watch. I really like the setting of the "Second Personality" in the first world. I couldn't stand it a little bit later on. I had my fault. It was too old for me, so I decided not to watch it.
It's so beautiful, author, please keep updating [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] I have seen a double time travel, and I have also seen the original owner come back after everything is completed. This is the first time I have seen this kind of symbiosis between the original owner and the host who came to help. Come on, author,
Spoiler alert for review content. In short, if you like a sense of surprise, you can watch it. I only watched the first world. The plot between Ye Li and Ning Zhiyao and Ning Ruoxi was very warm and beautiful, but overall it was both "ideal" and "realistic". The ideal is that the description pays more attention to the brilliance of human nature, and would rather Zhiyao change her ways; therefore, the original heroine lightly exposed her evil deeds in her previous life; the family members who pampered the "evil heroine" unknowingly changed their behavior patterns, and the parent-child relationship improved The son is no longer a bitch and loves his daughter sincerely; both of them have achieved their ideals/goals when they grow up; Ning Ruoxi, as the "novel heroine" seems to have achieved a satisfactory life, her career in the entertainment industry is flourishing and she marries a passerby at the end. It looks like a happy reunion, but Brother Ning, who has vested interests, is self-righteous but inherits the family business beautifully. He has suffered nothing except being scolded by the heroine Ye Li. In contrast, the original male protagonist Zhong Chen, who has the complexity of the drowning plot, has always wanted to use the original heroine Ning Ruoxi to sow discord between the sisters. The original male protagonist Zhong Chen, who was only given the good guy card in the end and escaped death with the help of Ning Ruoxi, actually seemed to have a little bit of humanity. Moreover, although the two sisters were good at studies, their grades were lower than that of the male protagonist, and none of them happened to be studying in the company. Uh... To sum up, after watching the first world (without judging the plot of the original female protagonist transcending the plane binding system), I felt that it was so sudden and the plot was very surprising. If you like surprises, you can watch it. (Stacked armor) I probably won't continue watching it. It's not satisfying enough for me personally. The plot is still too gentle. I'd rather watch something more vulgar and straightforward.
I just finished watching the first world, it was awesome, I almost missed it because of the title. The first world is very well written, the kind I like. Although the title is a bit cliché, it is also the story of a speed traveler saving the original vicious female protagonist. However, this speed traveler does not occupy the body of the original owner, but is more of a guide. In addition, the role of the speed traveler is not much, but it can be seen that she subtly changes the fate of the original owner and others. The relationship between the original owner and the original heroine is like running water, step by step. The story is plain but enjoyable to watch, and the ending of the first world story is also interesting.
It's good-looking, all the important characters are women, there's no competition between women. Compared with most fast-travel movies, the protagonist is just a bystander who drives the story. There is a golden finger but there is no embarrassing rainbow fart. It is very comfortable to read.
The heroine is both a participant and a bystander. She does not control the original heroine, but clicks at a critical moment to separate the original heroine from the original story line without changing the character's background. Usually when reading articles about similar situations, there is always one party with a weaker presence, but in this article the heroine and the original protagonist both have strong subjectivity, and the supporting characters are also very brilliant. It's beautiful!
It's really good-looking. The heroine of the story in the second unit is Jiang Wu. From the village girl who is more powerful than others, to the decisive general and future emperor. Ye Li acts like a mentor to the female protagonists in these units, guiding them to become better versions of themselves.
This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring scrape + Noxus guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are spot on!
The story is very interesting. I listened to the book. I remember that there are no obvious words that insult women or mothers. There are many female characters. The proportion of female characters in the scenes is about 7:3. I am not sure. It's good that women help each other, but the wording is male-oriented. Fortunately, the word "boy" was not compromised and was used for the protagonist.
It is relatively rare in the fast-travel genre to have a soul-body accompanying a strategist-type heroine. The female character is very comfortable. The connection between the female characters and the different character types are also well written. I like this kind of writing that writes a variety of female types. The writing is smooth and the stories are well written. I don't know why there are still so few people for the time being. I clicked in from the recommendation under the update page and immediately tied it up. Teacher, come on and wait for your update (ง •_•)ง
He is an author who easily makes readers like his characters. To be honest, there are too many rebirth and fast-travel novels nowadays. Most of them do not properly depict the emotions of the characters. They only briefly touch on the strange journey of the protagonist Bo Yun. I still like this kind of logical and process-oriented writing. If you don't have CP, you will win the game. If you love a girl, you will win the game.
I give the first story five stars. It's very cute and I like the delicate emotions in it. The plot doesn't matter, there aren't that many men that are an eyesore. If there were a lot of men in the story later on, I wouldn't watch it.
It's very pretty. I haven't seen my faults so far. Ps. There is an article saying that the female protagonist can succeed because the heroine is helping them behind the scenes. Just like in reality, men are more likely to succeed because there are women at home to help them. How sad.
I didn't like the part after the 16-year-old in the first world (I didn't like it personally, I didn't guide the writing, and I didn't avoid lightning), but the development after the plot ended was a bit unexpected and interesting. I really like The Second World. It's not finished yet. I'll keep following it~
I felt so comfortable watching it. I could really feel that the women in it were all loved by the author. Moreover, the light plot was still very interesting. The author was very humorous and his writing was very good.
It's a very interesting setting. I quite like the setting of the first world and the third world. It's very interesting. Although the protagonist is taciturn, he has a little bit of bad taste. He is a very interesting character. The main characters are basically girls. There are no plots that use swear words. I feel that except for the number of chapters, which is not enough to read, everything else is very good [laughter]
It's really well written, and I couldn't help but give it a good review after reading the first story. The relationship between Ye Li and Xiang Yao touched me. Friendship or confidants, I can't explain the emotions inside, but I really hope they can meet again.
Beautiful, no need to say more
Why doesn't anyone seem to read it? Why are you mentioning something good?
I like to watch the story of the symbiosis between the tasker and the native. The tasker is like a mentor and acts as a guide in the direction.
It's pretty good, a very novel main plot setting for a fast-travel novel, and the author's writing style is pretty good. Judging from the characterization and wording, it is a love story about women.
The writing is so delicate and makes me my most inseparable best friend.
It's very interesting, I've already watched the first two. Fatten up the third one
It's so beautiful. Please update more!
It's a rare good book, and the protagonist made me feel very powerful. Not a word, but a temperament, she is like a chess player
Great praise! ! ! It's so well written, I say! ! ! Let me review it in a few days and praise it. Check out the update hahahahahahaha