"It's not a cool novel, it's not systematic, it's not super brainy. The protagonist is just a normal person who makes mistakes occasionally. This article is very brain-burning, starting from the first chapter. Anyone who cares will be asked to quit!"
These people hate me! But this group of people want to help me!
These people are going to kill me! But this group of people want me not to die! I take everyone's hope to kill myself!
I was obviously saved, but I died in the memory of the past...
My name is Jiang Cheng, who am I?
Reader comments
It seems that suspense writing is really not suitable here. Brothers, let's see how the traffic is with 150,000 words. If it doesn't work, I really have to finish it...
The foreshadowing is well laid and there is a twist. The pacing is just not very good, and I look forward to when the truth is revealed.
There is still hope for the plot. A little more mystery would be more attractive, and there could be more props and characters. The description of the atmosphere could be more intense
It seems that suspense writing is really not suitable here. Brothers, let's see how the traffic is with 150,000 words. If it doesn't work, I really have to finish it...
The foreshadowing is well laid and there is a twist. The pacing is just not very good, and I look forward to when the truth is revealed.
There is still hope for the plot. A little more mystery would be more attractive, and there could be more props and characters. The description of the atmosphere could be more intense