"The Day the Double Stars Arrive": Three months before the story begins, two mysterious "disaster stars" passed by the Blue Star. It didn't impact, but the unknown energy particles it released, called "R-rays," revolutionized the world. This energy not only brought magical creatures called "Pokémon", but also activated or created the terrifying "Void Infected Body" - that is, zombies. At first, humans were crazy about the appearance of Pokémon and tried to conquer them. But as the first batch of infected humans and Pokémon turned into zombies, the civilized order collapsed in just a few weeks.
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Just take it as encouragement, I suggest you change it. Some things are written incorrectly. I will definitely not say the color of the flash. After all, each Pokémon's heterochromatic color must be different, just like albino and melanistic animals in reality. But some are more complaining, that is some The description of the Pokémon is not correct at all. There are some minor errors that can be corrected. In addition, you can try to introduce a Pokémon infected by zombies. After all, if zombies cannot infect Pokémon, that would be too outrageous. Otherwise, Pokémon will be used as blood. It has been cleared, so you can try to infect a Pokémon with the three-dimensional virus. If it reaches the later stage, you can even let the legend come. Of course, it must not be the powerful one, like the three dragons of time and space, the God of Creation, this kind of thing is basically impossible, Rayquaza Groudon Gaeo Cards are impossible, no, Kyogre may be polluted by the water source, and the Marines may be able to hide away from Emperor Yan. After all, there is the inheritance of the Phoenix King. Thunder God is very fast and usually appears during thunderstorms. For the Elf Center, it can be set up in some canyons. There are no Pokémon, and the nurse only has some equipment. Then, my idea for this book is that the author should keep writing, but it is necessary to figure out how to deal with the Pokémon, and some details of the Pokémon. Don't get confused, and don't make mistakes. This is the only sticking point suggestion, which can be changed. And from this point of view, it feels like the protagonist is taking the rigid route (actually, I still There is something else, can the author make a little Nebula Kosmengu appear in the protagonist group? Teleportation is super easy to use. And if it evolves, it will be the Sun and Moon Gods. In the future, Neknozma can be adjusted. Of course, it all depends on how the author writes it. I just mentioned it. There is no need to change it. Of course it must be changed, otherwise you will always feel that something is wrong.)
The background of the story is good, but the writing is too slow, with too much unnecessary sensationalism and communication. I can't get to the point for a long time. The words and sentences are too similar to those old problems of AI. Take another look and identify them.
It is indeed written by AI. The iron dumbbell is 1.2 Meters tall and weighs 202 kilograms. You can just put it in your bag or hold it in your arms. What kind of extra-dimensional backpack is this with mutant humans and a wagging little tail? Was it mutated after being bitten by a zombie? [Awkward laugh]
Just take it as encouragement, I suggest you change it. Some things are written incorrectly. I will definitely not say the color of the flash. After all, each Pokémon's heterochromatic color must be different, just like albino and melanistic animals in reality. But some are more complaining, that is some The description of the Pokémon is not correct at all. There are some minor errors that can be corrected. In addition, you can try to introduce a Pokémon infected by zombies. After all, if zombies cannot infect Pokémon, that would be too outrageous. Otherwise, Pokémon will be used as blood. It has been cleared, so you can try to infect a Pokémon with the three-dimensional virus. If it reaches the later stage, you can even let the legend come. Of course, it must not be the powerful one, like the three dragons of time and space, the God of Creation, this kind of thing is basically impossible, Rayquaza Groudon Gaeo Cards are impossible, no, Kyogre may be polluted by the water source, and the Marines may be able to hide away from Emperor Yan. After all, there is the inheritance of the Phoenix King. Thunder God is very fast and usually appears during thunderstorms. For the Elf Center, it can be set up in some canyons. There are no Pokémon, and the nurse only has some equipment. Then, my idea for this book is that the author should keep writing, but it is necessary to figure out how to deal with the Pokémon, and some details of the Pokémon. Don't get confused, and don't make mistakes. This is the only sticking point suggestion, which can be changed. And from this point of view, it feels like the protagonist is taking the rigid route (actually, I still There is something else, can the author make a little Nebula Kosmengu appear in the protagonist group? Teleportation is super easy to use. And if it evolves, it will be the Sun and Moon Gods. In the future, Neknozma can be adjusted. Of course, it all depends on how the author writes it. I just mentioned it. There is no need to change it. Of course it must be changed, otherwise you will always feel that something is wrong.)
The background of the story is good, but the writing is too slow, with too much unnecessary sensationalism and communication. I can't get to the point for a long time. The words and sentences are too similar to those old problems of AI. Take another look and identify them. It is indeed written by AI. The iron dumbbell is 1.2 Meters tall and weighs 202 kilograms. You can just put it in your bag or hold it in your arms. What kind of extra-dimensional backpack is this with mutant humans and a wagging little tail? Was it mutated after being bitten by a zombie? [Awkward laugh]