[1v1 + two male leads + older love interest + both are chaste + Beast World + farming + world-building + golden finger]
Shen Mo transmigrates into the body of the weakest albino sub-beast in the Beast World and nearly freezes to death in a cave.
Luckily, the tribe's fiercest black panther chief takes him home to be his living hot-water bottle.
Looking at the fluffy animals, all skin and bones from hunger and shivering together,
Shen Mo quietly pulls out his golden finger and flips open A Guide to Building Houses:
“Want a house with heating and hot meals?”
Later, while other tribes are still fighting over scraps of meat, his tribe is already living in row houses and eating a four-dish meal with soup.
The once aloof black panther chief now brings home freshly caught rabbits every day and waits at the door, gazing eagerly at the slender figure drawing plans with a ruler.
He rubs his big head against Shen Mo's hand, looking hurt. When are you finally going to make me your mate?!
The World of Beasts has a regular start, but the difference is that the protagonist's golden finger only appears in ten or twenty chapters, and there is only a screen that he can see. This cheat is not very big, it is all theoretical knowledge, and the protagonist needs to practice it himself. Although there are some sentences that keep repeating in the following, it is not a big problem. There is no discriminatory or malicious character at first. After everyone gets along slowly, they have changed and recognized the protagonist. From the original hopelessness of survival to the visible good life gained through hard work. At present, I see that the emotional line in more than 30 chapters is developing slowly, so it is better to focus on survival and supplement it with emotion. I'm used to watching the intense and high-pressure Infinite Flow, and it's really pleasant to watch the heartwarming farming novel. Some details cannot be delved into. The protagonist or other characters have not yet transformed into human form, and hands appear in the article. It would be better to change them to claws. Similarly, when not transformed into a human form, the animal form is not as convenient as the human form, but this point is weakened in the article. At first, I didn't feel uncomfortable with the protagonist dressing up in the form of a beast. Later, when I looked down and used tools or made tools, they were all in the form of a beast, which gave me a human feeling. How to "take the package and hold it" exactly? How to hold it specifically? Instead, pick it up with your mouth, but how to hold it in its animal form with its four claws facing the ground? Wouldn't it be better to be hunched over? Using the hoe in Chapter 31 gave me a heavier human feel. "He stood up, raised the stone hoe, and dug down." Those who have not read the original text must think it is okay. This is just a person using a tool. But this is a world of beasts, and the protagonist can't even maintain his human form. Generally speaking, when writing about beasts, the author should change the subconscious description of human body parts, movements, etc., And add nouns for animal-shaped body parts, action nouns, and sensory behavior logic. Good article, look at the details
The overall style is very unique, more like a prose poem than a novel, with a bit of the rhythm of poetry and the leisureliness of prose. The overall rhythm is neither fast nor slow, giving people the feeling of flowing softly like running water. It's a very unique writing style. There are some small details and flaws that we cannot delve into, such as the front paws and hands are mixed, the golden fingers are not clearly stated, etc., But the daily writing does have a warmth of flowing water in the countryside. Compared with the current mainstream openness and closing of tomatoes, this article is more like an idyllic poem, with a touch of warmth.
It's okay. It's suitable for reading when you're bored. It's quite bland and can be used to hypnotize you. There's a sentence: "Silent's ears were licked so hard that he couldn't hide." It has appeared 7.8 Times. It's so uncomfortable to watch.
It's so comfortable to watch ww, Golden Finger is neither too big nor too small, not too obtrusive, but just right. The relationship between Xiao and Momo is particularly harmonious. It wasn't until Chapter 124 that I realized that these two are not together yet, but they get along very well as an old couple. It makes my heart warm to watch it. (I really like this kind of emotional line where you are in me and you are in me, although there is no excessive verbal expression) The plot is not too rushed, there will be no gaps, but each section will not go through very quickly. The group portraits are also very good, each character has its own position, and the scenes where it appears are very appropriate. I hope this article can be completed safely and will not be interrupted.
I have read more than 60 chapters so far, and the plot seems pretty good, but I would like to ask, what is the meaning of the existence of the other protagonist Bao Xiao? Is it like bringing the protagonist back? It feels like many decisions are made by Shen Mo and Lang Yi, and Bao Xiao is hardly involved in these. So what is the significance of being a leader? I feel like Lang Yi is the leader, and Uncle Tiger appears more often than Bao Xiao. I'm very confused 🙂
I want to know if they were in animal form from Chapter 1 to Chapter 25? I don't think I've ever seen a chapter where they were in human form, they were all written in the form of beasts. Basically all of them are quite detailed in content. Baby, I haven't updated for a long time. Did you abandon the article or have you been too busy recently? Something happened? Could you please separate yourself when talking? It sounds a bit like that diary article.
It's very interesting, the logic is very smooth, and the protagonist's golden finger is not as big as expected. It's a very good article.
The writing is pretty good, but I don't know if I can change into a human, because I have always been in the form of a beast. If I could change into a human, I would change it to five stars. You can change into a human being. The whole book has a warm and daily style, which is suitable for reading when you are bored. However, the only bad thing is that the author sometimes does not use double quotes or separate words when the characters speak.
Good! I like this kind of slow and steady life very much
Please update it quickly. The author really likes this style of writing.