Junior Brother, This Black Lotus

The setting is good, I like it. It's just that many of the author's adjectives are very "mysterious", which makes the whole book feel depressing and ghostly. But after using it too much, I feel that the writing is a bit lacking, unable to describe the feeling, unable to analyze the psychology of the time.

I have only read Chapter 44. I like the character design very much, and the ghost feeling of 1 is also well created, but there are really many repetitive sentences, and the feeling of déjà vu is always there. There are also a lot of short sentences that seem a bit weak, but changing to an audiobook makes the existence of repeated sentences more obvious. I read other comments saying that there will be improvements in the future, so I'll give it a try...

I think this book is very good, and I immediately tied it. The identity of the protagonist in the book is confusing, and his junior brother is very fond of him. I think the reason why few people read it may be because this is a serialized book, and many people like to read the finished book. Like me, I plan to read more books. I'll watch it when it's almost over [Thinking]

The plot is not procrastinating and the characters are distinct, making people want to keep watching. This is the only novel among the many novels I have read that allowed me to patiently read it word for word. It must be given five stars. The author put his heart into it, and I personally feel that the writing is very good. I highly recommend it.

I like this book very much. It gives me a feeling of making tea with spring water. The clear eyes of the senior brother and the strong desire of the junior brother. Whenever the two of them get along, I will savor it several times. Especially in the early stage, the seemingly indifferent relationship between the two of them is actually full of emotions. There are many articles about this kind of setting, but this one is really close to my heart. I really like it... The author understands that feeling... I hope they have a good ending and I support the author to continue his creation. [Love]

I haven't finished it yet, but it's so delicious, I'm rolling on the bed Actually, I clicked in after reading the introduction, because I thought it was very delicious, and it was actually very delicious. But after watching part of it, I felt: In fact, it is not impossible to slow down the love scene. Brother Ruan is really handsome when he kills everyone! I am a local dog, I am very low, and I love watching! Summary: Very very very very delicious The young couple is also very sweet🤓 Very awesome Klaas Thoughts after viewing: The whole class is noisy Me: Tsk The whole class tore their underwear in an instant.

I'm here as soon as the new article is published. [Shy] To be honest, I gave up on it for a while. Compared with the early pull, the part where the senior brother went down the mountain seemed a bit ordinary. I don't mean it was bland, but it felt like a familiar routine. I once wondered if the author was going to go into an assembly line plot [angry] and left. Due to the heat problem in the past two days, I opened it again, and the dank smell came back [Adoration] [Adoration] and the later logic suddenly came to me, and it was full of holes. It is a very interesting book. You are good to everyone, but in fact, the senior brother who cannot see his own feelings and the possessive little junior brother who is only good to you are still very easy to fight, and everyone comes to see it. [Salute][Salute][Salute] The author writes quickly ✍🏻I'm waiting for dinner [Please update]

It's really beautiful. The whole story is beautiful and handsome. It made me think that I was on the wrong side [shy][shy][shy][shy]. Moreover, the plot written by the author is not procrastinating. It ends when it needs to be finished. The plot will not be dragged out for the sake of popularity. Each picture has a new plot. This makes people feel comfortable watching it. Even after reading it, I still feel a little confused. Not finished, the only bad thing I feel is that the author's writing style is a bit monotonous, with many adjectives appearing repeatedly. Sometimes there is actually no need to focus too much on describing the appearance. After all, we all know that the protagonist is very good-looking, which makes people feel uncomfortable. Other than that, there is no problem. Overall, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, and it seems very addictive!

It looks good, but there are some repetitive parts. I hope they can be replaced. The characters of the two are very delicious, but there are a lot of foreshadowings and it feels like the Riddler is everywhere. I really want to know the follow-up soon, urgent😋😋😋

This novel can clearly show the author's growth. In fact, the novel felt too dull at the beginning, and the pictures were very fragmented and described in such a way that you could not get into the situation. I was originally not interested in reading it, but I really like this kind of subject matter, and the more I read, the more surprised I became. The author's writing style is becoming more and more smooth and natural, and the description of Yin Jue's male ghost is very full. Yue Li's portrayal is not fragmented, and everything is perfectly rounded.

Generally speaking, I like the relationship between the protagonist and the couple, but there is really nothing interesting about the rest. I kept jumping while watching it. . If you like the relationship drama between the protagonists, you can watch it, but if you are more focused on the overall plot, forget it [Blowing Kiss]

It's really beautiful. This character design is really in line with my xp. Although there are many novels with similar characters on Tomato, there are really few that I can read. This is one of them. It's really beautiful. Please update the author more.

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating when they see it🙄Women get crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression pictures😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘Yes God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world map meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony on the 0th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist. I am so cute that I can't shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water, the nemesis of depression 😋 It is an alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 It is so cute that it floods into the Qiantang River 😈 It sounds so good 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, and I realized that God does exist. I was so well-heard that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. Goddess update soon [Crying R]

This is the author's first work. There is no doubt that the writing style is a bit immature, but the setting is really amazing. You should keep creating. This is so amazing. The protagonist's character and behavior are completely logical, but there are small flaws in the text that make no sense. I believe the next work will be even better. I won't lose money by investing in it, so I won't spoil it. Just read it and finish it. This setting completely fits xp , once you see it, you won't be able to extricate yourself immediately, but with thousands of people and thousands of tastes, you have to watch it. My friends, this is the first time I have posted such a long comment, I am so excited [laughs]

It's good to watch, the plot is smooth, not draggy, and the writing style is very non-judgmental [blowing kisses] (the writing is very delicious). However, when I first watched it, I had a lot of doubts. The junior brother behaved differently when he met the senior brother for the first time, and then why he "fell in love" with the senior brother inexplicably. The master's attitude was weird, and the three relationships between them are thought-provoking... Now the plot development has been explained clearly one by one, and I look forward to the future development [Sending Hearts]

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It smells so good! ! ! ! ! [Love] I enjoyed watching it. I forgot why I only watched half of it a few months ago. I'm back again. It's so delicious ꜀(^. .^꜀ )꜆੭ I wish to win one heart, I wish to win one heart without separation, I wish to win one heart without separation, I wish to win one heart without separation, I wish to win one heart without separation, I wish to win one heart without separation, I wish to win one heart without separation, I wish to win one heart, I wish to win one heart without separation, I wish to win one heart without separation, I wish to win one heart without separation, I wish to win one heart without separation, I wish to win one heart without separation. Don't say anything, shocking and delicious, everyone chants: "If you don't love me, then my existence will have no meaning."

I've only read chapter 53 so far. To be honest, it's hard to read. There are too many repeated sentences. It's tiring to watch and even more tiring to listen to. But I really like this setting. I also read the comments and said that the later chapters are much better. I plan to read it again. After watching it, the overall feeling is still very smooth and fast-paced. It is much better later and there are no repetitive sentences (the setting is so cool). It is still very interesting.

I feel that there are too many descriptions of Gong's appearance, and he keeps emphasizing his gorgeous appearance. It makes me a little tired and exhausted, but other things are fine.

It feels pretty good. Even though I was confused when I read it, I still think it's good [laughing][laughing]

It feels like it has no skeleton. It seems like I just wrote whatever comes to mind. It feels weird, but overall it's pretty good. The characters in it are still attractive [laughs][laughs][laughs][laughs]

The four stars are for the characters. The characters are very interesting. From the looks of it, I feel that several characters are mysterious. I look forward to the foreshadowing in the later stage. But occasionally there are times when the writing is confusing. The description of beating up the gangsters in the "Liu Family" chapter is exactly the same as the previous chapter 18 of teaching the gangsters a lesson. When I saw it, I thought I had traveled through time. There was also the problem of missing punctuation marks, which made people uncomfortable. I hope the author can make some improvements. Come on.

Very beautiful! I really like this book! What impressed me most was that the ending of the story was handled very well. The fate of all the characters was clearly explained. Everyone had a happy ending. After reading it, I felt warm in my heart. The young couple in the main characters are completely to my liking. The more I watch them, the more I like them! It's really amazing to be able to write such a touching story. Thank you to the author for his hard work and bringing such a warm and beautiful work! Shockingly delicious! !

Well, it's really good to read, and the setting is very novel. I've read a lot of articles, and I'm tired of reading them. I still read the whole article. I haven't felt so good in a long time. I used to be bored when I read articles, and I would give up after reading half of them. I haven't read the entire article in a long, long time. After reading it, the character design of Shou is really attractive. There is no such thing as trying to please the junior brother at the beginning. It is very good-looking. I recommend it to people who have read a lot of fairy tales and don't want to read routines. This is really exciting in the early stage. I feel so refreshed after reading it! ! ! ! ! Well, there may be some repetitive plots in the front, but if you read it carefully, you will find it very interesting. Hehe, this setting is so cool, my God! Seeing the end directly, okay, it's great, it's great, it's so great! !

The beginning of this book has a sweet plot, and then as you read it slowly you will find many mysteries and a lot of foreshadowing. As we readers are reading, we are thinking about what are these? Why are there so many Riddlers? What did they hide from Ruan? The plot is very good. In the middle, I watched the explosion of the self-cultivation world and changed the infinite flow (⸝⸝ɞ̴̶̷ ·̮ ‹⸝⸝ᐡ) ⟡.·(Bushi I haven't read such a brain-burning novel in a long time. It's really well written. When I saw the back, I realized: Ah, is it a narcissus? After reading the explanation, since it has an entity and consciousness, it is not considered a Narcissus. Do you sometimes really doubt that they are attacking each other? [Laughing] Of course they are not mutual works. I really enjoyed watching it later. It looks good. This writing style As for this article, it is of a relatively fast pace, but even though it is fast-paced, you can also see that the article is very well written.

So pretty! The main plot is written very clearly 🥺I feel so happy when I read it. The whole characters of the main character and supporting characters are written clearly! The world view is also very interesting... I feel so good watching the dank male ghost! [Crying] [Crying] Goddess, I will always follow you

It's quite good. It has a quiet and faint sense of madness. The author laid it out so well that I wanted to skip chapters. It wasn't that the plot was boring, but it was that I was too looking forward to what happened next and felt powerless because I couldn't keep up with my reading speed! I'm afraid of missing out if I skip it, but my heart is itching if I don't skip it. I recommend it. The storyline is progressing well and has great potential.

I'm going to give it a thumbs up. It's so awesome. It's very beautiful. I hope more people will read it. The author is also very awesome and didn't write down the characters from the beginning to the end. I thought it was just an ordinary story at first, but I didn't expect it to be a relatively grand world view and timeline. When I read it later, I can clearly feel that the author has not given up any pitfalls, and can connect the front and back. It is really awesome to be able to read this for free [Love] [Love]

The little couple is really sweet. The character Yin Jue has a very different male ghost character. The author's writing style in the first few chapters is still a bit green, but I like the setting very much, so I read on. The more I read, the better it gets. The dull ending is the most interesting.

It feels good. The characters are very clear.