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It's good to watch. The calm protagonist is awesome. Finally, he's not the disgusting protagonist who thinks he's a conceited or fun-loving person at the beginning.

Normally I hate criticizing stories, but since this one is about Shuten, I came in to see how it goes. After reading it, I felt more like Shuten being stuffed with the Holy Grail in comics than criticizing stories. It was good, but I felt that the interaction with the characters was a bit lacking. When Gojo asked Shuten to meet Otoko, I thought it would be like Shuten getting close, making Uraka jealous and then fighting. I felt that Shuten would be funny. Because I have to write a lot of heroic spirits, I rush to work on the main story, and there is not much in daily life. It feels like the protagonist playing a game. He usually fishes, and occasionally interferes to prevent mission failures. There is not much bonding with the characters. The author is not a single recommendation person. There is no way to be excellent in character creation and description. The shortcomings are obvious and the advantages are obvious. I don't see the daily life that I imagined in other worlds. It's nothing. It's interactive, but it's originally a criticism story, and if you add some unpopular ones, it's good. The advantage is that some people eat it, and it should be considered good in a criticism story. The protagonist's personality is not clear.

There will be a special chapter tomorrow, if anyone can see it now, you can look forward to it [shy]

Personally I think it's very beautiful. It has that pleasant and restless taste and feeling. Ying Ying Ying.

Looks good, looking forward to the follow-up

Moi! When it comes to returning to the battle with spells, I think Lou hope is more suitable than Shuten.

Well written, Shuten and Ibaraki