Stop Kissing Me! Isn't It Enough That the Villainous Female Lord Imprisoned Me?

Personally, I think the Chinese text is too long, and we were drawn in by the main text of the introduction. You could focus on the first story, but it would be too long. I would rather know the development of the text. My head was spinning when I saw it.

Can I write the main story directly? Is the main story better?

It feels like a unit novel. I may prefer the main plot, but there are too many descriptions of the content of the novel in the article, which is a bit overwhelming. It means that there are too many lazy words to describe Zai Zi, but I like Zai Zi's character very much.

Very beautiful! Very beautiful!!! Invincible Explosion is good to watch, I just hope that the main cp plot will be more paced and faster 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

The stories of the characters other than the protagonist are too long. It feels like a quick-release novel😭😭. I want to see the story of the protagonist more. Can it return to the main line...

My current state is a bit broken, madam. I have been waiting for Chen Wu, I have been waiting for him, I have been waiting for him, I have been waiting for him for a long, long, long, long time. As a result, after the last plot, you and I told you not to write it. Do you know how broken I was?!!! 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 I have been thinking about this thing week after week and I don't want to take the exam. I just think about this thing. OMG, that's why I really have to consider rewriting Shen Wu. I have to, [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying], otherwise it will collapse. I really, really, super, really like the original two protagonists, very, very much 💕 💕 💕 💕 💕 💕 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ Don't ever give up, teacher, it's not easy to find good articles these days. It's hard for me to find anything that suits my taste. Don't change everything. If you have time, just go over the main plot. 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻Please please, please. I will always follow you~

Hmm... It's okay if the text is written in Chinese, but I think it might be better to write it in parallel with the main plot? It feels like the stories are separate from each other. It's a good idea, but I think if it is in the process of the main plot, I will continue to discover some secrets, and at the same time, I will gradually come into contact with the protagonists of other stories, observe them, or get involved in the turmoil of other protagonists. , It would be better to intervene in their choices by writing novels. Otherwise, I feel that the writing is like a fast-travel novel. Gong has little contact with the protagonists of other stories. It makes me feel that Gong is like the god who created them. From the perspective of God, there is no sense of substitution.

The writing is very good, and each world is quite interesting. I feel that the writing style is quite good. The overall reading is a little boring because the Chinese language is a bit large in the text. I am quite looking forward to the main plot, and I will keep reading.

It's pretty good to read, and the content is also very novel, but it's weird when you read it. It feels like it's not as good as being divided into complete units. It can be set up as a system to provide limited reminders about rebirth, etc., But most of the time you don't participate, the effect should be much better. However, using the mode of writing a book by one person makes the content a bit confusing and cannot be strung together at all. , Because there is very little content about the main plot mentioned, and one world has been modified. The two worlds have the same world view. What about the other world? The existence of the Holy Crown should be constant, but why is it different? I feel that the setting is not very reasonable, such as some things under the Holy Crown, and sometimes the lack of words makes it a bit uncomfortable to read. If you are very willing, you can revise this article, make an outline, change the name, etc. And publish it again. It should be much better. Come on Dada, I will continue to chase you. I hope you will be happy every day.

Personally, I think it's quite interesting. I was attracted by my resume. The main story is interesting, and the stories in the article are also interesting. Each story is more like a unit building. There are stories on the first floor and the first floor, but each floor is connected. Compared with the Zerg articles I have read before, it is a little more novel. Every character in the article is very interesting to me! (Like 🥰), [Understood] I like interaction when reading novels, so I usually open barrages. The occasional barrage paragraphs in the article make me like it even more (they are barrages in novels written by the protagonist). However, the shortcoming is that there are too many Chinese words in the text, which makes the main story too monotonous (in my opinion). I think we can try to write more main stories. In fact, the small stories do not need to be written consecutively (here we use small stories to describe the Chinese version). Too continuous will tend to make people ignore the content of the main story and treat it completely as a unit building to jump around and choose what they like. But at the same time, the main story will meet the small stories. For example, the protagonist understands everyone's views on the villain in the eyes of the Zerg through the characters in the small story (this is also novel, I like it 🥰). Therefore, the author can make appropriate adjustments [please update]. Finally, I would like to say to the author, you don't really need to care too much about the ratings. I really think that ratings affect the push rate, but we can also recommend books for you. As long as you write them seriously, the good plot will naturally attract people 😘