[Two male protagonists + daily orientation] (If you don't like it, don't enter)
Him, Zhang Qiling. After his parents died, he was betrayed by his master, who said he was an evildoer. Zhang Qiling fell from the altar. He lived outside and became a beggar. He was later captured by the Zhang family and used as a blood jar. He was bullied by the Zhang family since he was a child.
He, Lin Ye, has no father or mother. He was imprisoned by the Zhang family in a voodoo jar since he was a child, and he battles wits and courage with countless poisonous insects every day.
He opened the lid of the altar and saw him for the first time. He was covered in bloodstains, with a centipede in his mouth, a snake in his left hand, and a lizard in his right hand. When he saw him, he showed a bright smile.
When he was ten years old, he gave him a date and they became friends.
A hundred years later, they met again, but the younger brother had forgotten him... From then on, he and Wu Xie, Fatty Tie, traveled across the Qixing Lu Palace, Xisha Undersea Tomb, Yunding Heavenly Palace, Qinling Sacred Tree, Xiwangmu Kingdom, Siguniang Mountain, Zhang Family Ancient Building...
In the end, I accompanied my brother to search for memories of his life experience...
Reader comments
Well done, your introduction and beginning successfully attracted my attention. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
From the introduction, I felt that Lin Mo and the little brother were a couple, but I didn't notice it in the middle, and even after skipping to the last few pictures, I didn't find that they were in love. Wu Xie and the little brother discussed the child issue, and in the end, both Audio-Technica and Lin Mo lived in Wushan. The little brother also said that Wushanju is a home. I didn't understand it when I read the book for the first time, so I walked away.
Hey, it's beautiful, but why are there so few people?
I think the protagonist's role is concentrated in the beginning, but in the middle, he is almost like a supporting character, with a very low sense of presence, and there is little development in the emotional line with the younger brother. I think the others are all very good, and the writing is also pretty good, so keep up the good work!
It's so beautiful, but not many people see it! Super recommended! Come and see! ! !
With Jin Changan's movie "Love Is Anger" Accident in Dacheng and Many Souls Ferrying for Ten Years
Well done, your introduction and beginning successfully attracted my attention. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
From the introduction, I felt that Lin Mo and the little brother were a couple, but I didn't notice it in the middle, and even after skipping to the last few pictures, I didn't find that they were in love. Wu Xie and the little brother discussed the child issue, and in the end, both Audio-Technica and Lin Mo lived in Wushan. The little brother also said that Wushanju is a home. I didn't understand it when I read the book for the first time, so I walked away.
Hey, it's beautiful, but why are there so few people?
I think the protagonist's role is concentrated in the beginning, but in the middle, he is almost like a supporting character, with a very low sense of presence, and there is little development in the emotional line with the younger brother. I think the others are all very good, and the writing is also pretty good, so keep up the good work!
It's so beautiful, but not many people see it! Super recommended! Come and see! ! !
With Jin Changan's movie "Love Is Anger" Accident in Dacheng and Many Souls Ferrying for Ten Years