Showbiz: The Laid-Back Mastermind Behind the Music

The behind-the-scenes stories are quite interesting, but they always compromise with the supervisor Zhang Xiaowen to release songs, several times. Her sense of coercion is too strong, and the protagonist has no temper at all.

The plot is very good and makes people want to watch it. However, the first person "I" is used too much. It would be better if the protagonist's name is used. Sometimes it feels a bit weird while watching it. I don't know why. Overall it's pretty good.

Saw Chapter 12, very refreshing work. This manuscript breaks away from the old routine, without those contradictions and Homo sapiens. It's very refreshing, and the character set up is also very stable. So far, every character who appears has a clear label, and the song selection is also great. The only two suggestions are: First, this book should have gone through major revisions, so there are many first-person paragraphs, and the author still needs to check for omissions and fill in the gaps. Secondly, when appreciating the song, the author uses a cross-presentation method of psychological feelings and lyrics, which is very good, but I suggest that the psychological activities be enclosed in parentheses and divided into paragraphs, not in one paragraph with the lyrics. It seems that if the reader has to think twice, it may affect the whole chapter and the perception of the plot. More comments will be given after reading The processing of 35 pictures is not very good. The character of the protagonist in this picture is a bit broken. Let me give you an analogy. Your monthly salary is 6,000 yuan. You negotiated a big deal of 10 million yuan for the company. The boss rewarded you with 2,000 yuan. You were so excited that you almost lost your urine. The protagonist has earned tens of millions in the past few months, so it seems silly to him that 30 million in just three years is just his monthly salary. I won't go into detail about the emotional line around Chapter 92, but I won't go into details after a few chapters, but the setting is still very annoying. Around Chapter 130, after being promoted to gold medal, he gradually became fluent. The plot is boring. Since you don't create a mentally retarded villain, you carefully polish the shock of the song to the world, and the various stories and bonds that arise from it. What does it mean to just dial the watch every month and finish it? There is a song every month, and it is written in such a gentle and gentle way, and there are no other plot points to remember. How can it retain readers? Either increase the shaping of the song, including feedback from the world, profound interpretation, some of your own original stories to put on it, etc. It's better than waiting to die.

This book is good. I have been working behind the scenes so far, and I have only written songs, no mess, no novels, no poems. It is very good and very focused 👍👍👍 This book was not very interesting at the beginning, but the follow-up is pretty good. I feel that the writing is getting smoother and smoother. The overall plot is not bad, and there are no messy things. I hope to continue to read it and give it good reviews and encouragement.

Give it five stars. To give newbies some confidence, Tomato barely passes the mark. It's good not to have so many slaps in the face, but the first person is very uncomfortable, especially when listening to the book, my character appears too frequently. I may change this a bit when I have a chance to open a new book in the future.

It's okay, but the pronoun is uncomfortable to pronounce.

The plot of the story is very soft, very comfortable, and not too messy. The only problem is that the song is written instead of the singing process. 99% Of people who read this kind of book are probably reading and listening to the song.

I really like the setting where the protagonist focuses on his identity behind the scenes. Well, since he has decided to be a behind-the-scenes person, he just needs to be a behind-the-scenes person. And the frequency of releasing songs is one song a month, which is really just right, not too fast and not too slow. I really just focus on writing songs.

Only read a few chapters. Overall not bad. There are also flaws. I hope the follow-up will be more attentive.

Let me give you five stars first. Let me tell you my opinion. The protagonist's system is completely useless. He only writes some popular songs. I think the protagonist should remember them all. Another thing is that the protagonist is a student of the composition department of Magic City Music. What is the role of this system? I don't quite understand. I personally feel that this system is unnecessary. It's my personal opinion.