Locke***********

I have read Chapter 42 so far. Let me tell you my opinion. Apart from dark energy, I have not encountered any major twists and turns. Small twists and turns (such as lack of money) can be overcome by the protagonist quickly. The author hasn't said yet whether there is a female protagonist, but I think if there is one, it will probably be Ling Shuang. At present, there are two mistakes that are both big and small. One is that the elves were taken away for treatment in the last chapter, but they have not been taken away in the next chapter. The other is that in the previous chapter, it was said that the elves were to be sent back to their original habitats, but in this chapter, the protagonist has to send the elves back to their habitats alone. These two errors appeared together in the update on the same day. The big one is because it made me wonder whether this book was written by a real person or an AI; the small one is that these two wrong authors can correct it with just a few clicks of their fingers.

It's very interesting, with warmth, battles, and daily life. You can witness the growth of the protagonist and his elves step by step. Compared with the systems in other novels, the protagonist's biggest "golden finger" may be himself - it comes from his love and dedication to the game, which gives him the possibility of Doudou as a partner and the experience that helps him live better in this world, and time travel gives the protagonist a chance to realize his dream. The protagonist himself is also very talented. He can make plans, work hard to improve himself, and love his elf companions. I hope that the two years before entering school can fully show the protagonist's experience and growth.

As a fan of my first mobile game, although the game itself is not very good in terms of plot, it is a bit of a no-brainer, but I can look forward to it in the future.

My personal suggestion is to add a little plot to the web game, because the plot of the mobile game is actually for a younger age than the web game. Although they are all for children, I can clearly feel that the night game is better than the mobile game. In terms of story line alone, another thing is that the web game itself does not have much plot. Now it is mainly provided in the gameplay. I finished the academy plot today. It is indeed different from Ye, but not much. And considering that there are still a bunch of maps that have not been released, I personally think that referring to the plot of the web game is a really good development direction. At least it is more reliable than what you rely on in other aspects.

If you think it's good, please post a review of the book. 4 Or 5 points is not too much, and 3 or 4 points is not too little. Please, comrade.

Come on, there are very few Locke themes in the world. Write it carefully and don't stop updating it. I can talk about the special setting of this book after the chapter.

Not long after the 666 game was launched, the novel came out. The author is awesome. So far, the writing is pretty good. I even saw Catherine. She is really awesome. Also, I want to ask, did you really participate in all three tests? I want to catch ducks. Those people who joined the group before said that they can catch ducks and fight pets for free. They are all lies. Wuwuwu, they lied to my feelings [crying][crying][crying]

I have a few questions to ask. The author said that there is a heroine, but he won't write too many emotional scenes, so who is the heroine specifically? How long will it take to write the college chapter? Have you decided what you want for Doudou's final super evolution? If you were Xue Ying Bing Ling, I wouldn't be interested in watching you. Another bonus point is that the author has accompanying pictures. Many authors do not include pictures for Pokémon, which is easy to search for. For a game like Rock Kingdom that doesn't have a picture book, it's nice that the author has illustrated it.

Okay, keep going.

Come on, be optimistic about your author

So far, it seems that the plot line is planned, which is good, but there is a problem that the author's writing style feels very immature, it feels like a composition written when he was in school, and it feels inexplicably awkward. However, it can be seen that the author still likes this game and wrote it seriously. I don't have many suggestions. I just hope that the writing style can be improved [blowing kiss]

It feels good, five-star support

I'm not very good at writing reviews, so I'll just give a five-star support and hope the author will keep updating.

It looks good, but I won't watch it in the middle of the game. I'll watch it again when I can ride the Elf King to school [laughing evilly]

Very good Locke text. Enzo will probably become darker in the future. I don't know how the author will deal with it [Blow kiss]

The book is very good, but a little short. Is it finished? So fast?

There are a lot of details and it's a slow-burning plot. It's just right for me to watch and I can play Rock Kingdom for a while.

Looks good

Beautiful, no need to say more

Needless to say, five-star praise, very beautiful, love watching it. The author is very diligent in updating it. Five-star reviews are the upper limit of Tomato, not this book.

The author is hungry

When will the main plot start? I want to see when Dimo ​​comes out.