Brother*************

Let me give a purely objective evaluation. This book is very well written. This is the first time I have read a brother-in-law article. In my mind, it is nothing more than some corrupt plots and some gods who like this kind of book. But after reading this book, this is one of the few times I feel that it is very good written on Tomato. A good book, full of emotions. Whether it is Lao Su, Lao Wang or Lao Lin, they are inseparable. In the past, when reading romance novels, there was always a kind of god who said nothing, but when I read this book and get involved in the characters, I always feel like a lump in my throat. Whether it is the prisoner Lin Jue, the prison king in the hospital, or Lao Su in Aishan. In my opinion, only the male protagonist is worthy of them. The plot is very good. Although it talks about cultivating immortals, the author keeps it under control. The plot of cultivating immortals is just to make their transformation more reasonable and not to make it unclear. I hope the author can control the pace and write well. I really like this book.

This should be the first book review of this account. So far, the plot rhythm is good, and everything is serving the advancement of events. So far, the stories I have seen are as follows: Four brothers who live together, one is a marginalized person in society, and one day he is gone, only his friends will remember him. Because of the great changes, he has gained both life and emotional support. The other two were busy with their careers and emotionally empty, but they also gained their own emotional support under the great changes. As for the protagonist, before the great change, he was a man who was empty due to the death of a close relative, but because he was the only one of the four brothers who was not affected, due to his character, he was gradually filled with responsibilities and changed from a salty fish to a charming person. The highlight of this book lies in the various processes of the three brothers' psychological degeneration under the influence of the protagonist. As for the wonderful gadgets such as strange objects and Shushan that serve the plot, you don't need to pay too much attention. But unfortunately there was not enough food. Lin Chu, a twisted girl from an unfortunate family, only served as an appetizer. Although Lao Wang and Xiao Su always invited them via speed, what they served was still too little. My suggestion is to have more female-female interactions. Lao Wang and Xiao Su, who don't care much about their own emotions, can have more freebies, and Lin Chu can have more tsundere freebies. In a word, give me more food, it's not enough.

The author writes really well👍🏻. The writing is smooth and makes my aunt laugh and giggle at other times. The article is concise and clear, although it is all in vernacular, but it makes people yearn for it. The characterization is also very good, sometimes sweet, sometimes bitter and a little sour, of course, there are more sweet ones. (I hope the author writes more painful [punches], I want to see rivers of blood!) One more thing, I wish the author a smooth life and happiness every day. (There is one more thing I hope I can update more and read it in one day! Not enough is not enough!) There is one more thing Lao Wang is the best ꕤᴗ ᴗ)♡! ! ! There are billions more things...

It's a very good book, but why no one has read or commented on it?

The author's writing style is very good, and the witty parts will let you know that you are reading a novel, which will make you feel very relaxed; the delicate description will make you appreciate the author's talent. From the perspective of the novel itself, this subject matter is very new, at least to me; I have read sex stories before, but they were short, female-oriented works, and I always felt inexplicable when reading them. But this book gave me a sense of harmony. Whether it is the emotional bond between Lao Pu, Lin, Wang, and Su before the sexual transition or the emotional sublimation after the sexual transition, everything seems natural; the rhythm of the plot advancement is very comfortable.

It's strange. I can't find the contradiction and the goal? There is actually a story about cultivating immortals in the back, but the image is well grasped.

As of now, this account has only given five-star reviews to two books (if there is a follow-up review, the review will be subject to follow-up reviews), and this is the third book. Unfortunately, this favorable review could not revive the book. Since it's been so long that I can't remember the details of the plot, I won't comment on the pros and cons. Anyway, many readers have commented on it. I can only say that this book gave me an indescribable feeling. At first I thought it was Niku, but later I found out it was not Niku. It's a different feeling. This feeling more or less accounts for a large proportion of my five-star rated books.

I can't say how amazing it is, but this book suits my taste, and the writing style is good enough. There are also disadvantages, it is slightly poisonous. Some knives. But overall it's pretty good. The data of this book is indeed very poor. I am afraid that the author will not update it one day. Come on, author. Optimistic about you

I started reading it on the 17th and only read it for two or three days. I thought it was a very good work. I was still looking forward to the follow-up plot. Suddenly I saw that it was removed from the platform. I didn't know if it would be available in the future. I felt a sense of loss. I finally found a work that I was interested in but I didn't read it for a few days. At first, I thought it was a cool plot. After reading it, I felt that the characters were very delicate and three-dimensional. I still want to say that I hope the author can continue. Come on. I saw that the author on the 18th said that he might open a new book and would talk about the follow-up in the comments. Although I know that the author wants to give everyone an ending so that there will be no ending, I still feel empty. I haven't felt this way about a novel in a long time [laughing and crying]

We must win the resurrection match, author [crying]

Let's review it objectively. First of all, the score is a bit low, so I'll give it a full score. My personal opinion on the content: The characterization is good, and the emotional changes in the identity change are good, but the male protagonist seems to have little weight (I don't know how to describe this feeling). After the plot of Lin Chu's split began, the article became polarized: one was that the novel setting made me very interested in the following, and the other was that the procrastination of the process made me a little irritated. The more I read, the more confused I became, and I seemed to have not read it. Once this situation occurs, most people will choose to keep books or abandon books, but in fact the results are mostly the same. And I personally like this book. All the novel settings are eye-catching. I can't do much, but I can only spend a little time to post a comment and give some support.

As a straight man, I hate sexual reposting very much. But as the plot progresses, the author's ingenious conception gradually weakens the feeling of resentment in my heart. It turns out that love can really override everything. I would like to call it a masterpiece.

It's very good-looking. For children who have a deep relationship with their grandfather, they cried when they watched Lao Wang at four o'clock in the middle of the night. But author, can you stop being lazy? How can you sleep at your age and age? Alas, I hope the author writes better and better, and the more he writes, the more he writes. If it's not enough, it's simply not enough.

It's good-looking. It can be said that it's the ceiling of a novel like Tomato. The emotional development is very natural and all events serve the plot. It's just too little [cool]

Not bad, worth a look

Good luck, author, come on!

My brother will accompany you through life and death, you are a brother who will go through life and death [angry][angry]

Quick update, not enough to watch [almost crying]

It's okay, but it's a bit difficult to stretch out with Shushan coming out from behind. The characters are very three-dimensional, but not many people see them. I hope they don't die suddenly.

Among those cheesy tomato-based reposts, this is a masterpiece! Don't pay attention to the immortality behind the comment, I'm just explaining the sexual transformation, it's quite nice, I recommend it!

It's a very good book, why has no one commented on it? I've read a lot of transformations, and this one is acceptable. Come on, author

Let me make porridge. I'll place an order.

In some places, it feels like watching Dora the Explorer, where someone else smashes your car with a palm, and you encounter supernatural phenomena yourself, and you wouldn't believe it even if you beat me to death. . .

Very good novel

Come on, great author

I am Shennong, this is the grass jelly

Do you dare to update ten chapters a day?

The plot is coherent and does not drag on. It feels like it might be

I think it's quite interesting. The life of the gentle version of Lin Chu is still very desirable. Who wouldn't want to have a gentle sister by their side? After reading the latest chapter, I don't know how the plot progressed. Lin Chu and Wang Shunling went offline directly. The male protagonist has grown up in a loving environment, and such a person will be more caring and responsible. The character should be tough but at the same time insecure. The development of the story relies entirely on Su Lai to advance the plot, and the male protagonist cooperates with the action. There is no problem with this, but what happened during this period, I always feel that the male protagonist has a waxy personality and always flinches. I don't feel happy if you do this. In the latest chapter, you wrote a lot of adventure plots, but I didn't feel that there were too many emotional stimulation points between men and women in this plot.

It is undoubtedly excellent, but if you dare to cultivate immortality in the later stage and the protagonist becomes a female, I will assign you two stars. I have to admit it's excellent