She was an ordinary person in the modern world, weary and disillusioned.
After falling asleep one night, she woke in the snowy mountains of Ambarino in 1899, a young Chinese man named Claude Lee, living in the West dressed as a man.
She knew how Arthur Morgan’s story ended.
She knew the Van der Linde gang would collapse.
And she knew this era had never been kind to outsiders.
To survive, she lowered the brim of her hat, hid her identity, and gripped her revolver.
For his sake, she walked again and again into a fate that should have been impossible to change.
This is not a heroic tale about saving everyone.
It is only the silent vow left behind by a quiet person in the last winds of the Old West.
“She used to watch him through a screen, always thinking it was just a player’s affection for a character. But now she sat beside him and heard his steady breathing, and only then did she realize there was something deeper in that affection: an obsession with pulling him free from fate.”
[American West] [Late 19th Century] [Video Game Transmigration] [Double Identity] [Changing the Ending] [No Golden Finger]
[Realistic] [GB Romance] [Canon-Faithful] [Literary] [Not Wish Fulfillment] [Serious Narrative]
I have been reading pure sweet novels recently, and I suddenly felt a bit overwhelmed by the ending with a bit of regret. It has been a long time since I have seen such a deep work that dissects the heart of the characters. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into describing his characters to make them more complete. It also impressed me deeply. It is a great work. If there is a new book in the future, I will follow it again.
I have seen a lot of Big Cousin 2 fanfics, but they are more or less unsatisfactory: they are either programmed and cool, or they are written as Yimeng love stories; the original characters are either seriously OOC, or they are just the skin of the original characters but with the original core replaced; the original characters either exist as super warriors, or are bystander pendants or love warriors. But this fanfic does not fall into the above categories. First of all, its writing style is cold and restrained, and it does not deliberately pile up too many gorgeous words, but it can vividly depict the visual sense of each camp chapter and the original image of each original character; although the plot development highly overlaps with the main line, under the author's pen, various essences are The carefully designed details and foreshadowing, as well as the progression of emotional levels, give it its own style of "Silent Oath"; the original heroine Xiao Li is first and foremost herself: she has her own life experience, her own roots, her own blood feud, as well as her unyielding strong character and tenacious will. I think that if she really existed in the world of Big Cousin 2, and if she really would be the one who stayed with Arthur until the end, it would not be inconsistent at all. It is very rare to find a fanfic that is not OOC with the characters in the original work; but it is even rarer to find a fanfic that can perfectly integrate the original character into the original work and write a fanfic about Arthur changing his life in such a way that it has such great stamina. Finally, I saw in a comment that the author said that he wanted to write a truly original literary work. I believe you can do it. Judging from this fanfic, you really have a certain literary foundation. You only need to know the frequency of using rhetorical techniques, and your plan can be realized!
It's good to read. Originally, there were very few fan fictions about Big Cousin 2, so I didn't expect it to be good before I clicked on it. I just hoped that it could make up for the shortcomings. But I was deeply moved. I found a treasure when I read Big Cousin 2 fan fiction for the first time. The writing becomes more and more exciting. The writing is really good. I hope the teacher can stick to it ❤️
There are still many problems. For example, the original plot seems a bit too little at the moment, but when I reviewed it, it was only nineteen chapters. I don't know how long the author plans to write. Then the rhythm feels a bit strange, that is, the plot does not match the growth rate of the characters. The plot advances a little faster but the character changes are a beat slower. I think more original plots other than plot tasks can be added, such as the continuation and adaptation of various small events on the map and Easter eggs. The writing is there, and it is quite good on Tomato, but for the creation of the story The writing seems to be a little bit worse, which means that the level is limited. It can be written a little more refreshingly, which is not only simpler but also better-looking. If you keep writing according to the current tone, it will be difficult to write well, and even more difficult to write fire. But I personally like the game Big Cousin very much, and I also like it. I am very keen to explore the world, plot and various easter eggs in the game, so I am very happy to see the fans of the original Big Cousin. In addition, the writing seems to be pretty good in various aspects. I would like to give you a five-star encouragement. I hope more players who like Big Cousin will check it out.
I don't know why there is no rating for such a good work. The plot is very good, not to mention too much, and the feelings are very sincere. It's just that in the early stage, the heroine almost became a mute online 😄 Looking forward to the author's next book 👍
Alas, it was so well written... I don't know how to praise it. The ending where the heroine returns to modern times is really good. There is a slight sense of blankness. It is best to stop here.
Obviously Arthur survived, but I still feel regretful. Will Little Plum appear later? Because we have already reached the end of the Western Conference. Will he or she appear again in the manner of Red Dead Redemption 1?
The writing is quite good. The plot of the original work and the personal settings are well combined. I hope it will be happyenging.
A rare Big Dart fan, come on
Pretty good, in line with the knife-edge style of doing things.