Water Margin: I, Xu Chengzhuan, Can't Fight

It's okay so far, but the main character is a little conflicted about what he wants to do but is too lazy to do it. Then why doesn't Wang Jin accept him? What you in Liangshan are short of are people who can train troops. You have to wait a few years for Lin Chong to come up the mountain.

It looks okay, and the writing is very delicate. Although there are many sentences where traces of AI can be seen, it is probably just a partial polish and the overall quality is good. The problem is that since this book is a slow-burn article, and it is written in such detail, it is obvious that the author does not want readers to read it quickly like a fast-food article, so that readers can take their time to read and appreciate it. The author should be more rigorous. After reading more than 30 chapters, I still found several small problems and left comments. Although these problems are very small and do not affect anything, since it is a slow-burning article, I naturally have to read it carefully and slowly. However, there are always some detailed problems that make me feel that this book is not worth reading so carefully. In addition, I would like to ask which Water Margin fans the author currently plans to integrate into it. I think the later chapters will incorporate Dang Kou Zhi, but will Yue and Umemoto's Water Margin characters be integrated into it?

Come on, author✊I hope it's a single heroine, I hope it's Qiongying

It's okay, you can take a look

I want to fully present the heroes of Water Margin! ! !

It's really well written. It's a great book. I hope the author will keep writing. Come on.

Looks good, pretty good

You can take a look. Brewing is a bit toxic, just skip it.

The content is well written and the story has good coherence. Worth a look!

The writing is smooth and eloquent! Great book!

The article is concise and clear, not muddled, and the description is straight to the heart. I like this style very much!

Very beautiful and worth recommending

It's pretty and worth watching.

This book is really good

Well written. I haven't read a good book for a long time. Keep up the good work.

So far, the writing is pretty good, but it feels a bit like AI.

This book is well written and worth owning

It's well written, and the heart is carefully drawn.

See the true meaning in the plain, good book, non-toxic point

The story is okay, but the AI ​​flavor is a bit too strong