Qiong Ming*************

It's so well written. It's fun to read the detailed descriptions of immortals, Qiongming, goddesses, and other little emperor uncles, but afterward, I always feel that those fallen fairies are not worth it. The purpose of this book is very good, to save these fairies, pure ❤️[Like][Like][Like] Come on [blow a kiss] [blow a kiss] [blow a kiss]

I thought I only used characters, but I didn't expect that I was actually the same person. How cool.

@Verylani is very beautiful. I like it very much. Keep up the good work, author! 1. Plot and Setting Highlights 1. Character situation with full contrast at the beginning The protagonist Mo Caihuan travels back in time with the memories of the original plot, but at the beginning he is a useless person with no spiritual roots. He can only hide in small villages and towns to save his life, and miss all kinds of fairy tales. The suppressed survival dilemma in the early stage fully pave the way for a counterattack; at the low point of his life when he accepts his fate to get married, the system is triggered to complete the turn of fate. The narrative rhythm of the classic online novel "Turnover from Desperate Times" is mature and easily grabs the reader's attention. 2. A dual-body setting with dramatic conflicts The system bestows the special talent of the pure lustful emperor body + the jade and phoenix marrow holy body: on the one hand, the speed of cultivation will continue to be eroded by the sexual instinct; on the other hand, he possesses the psychic energy that can help other monks break through the realm, making the protagonist a "walking heavenly material and earthly treasure" coveted by the entire world of immortality. This set of settings naturally creates a core conflict: external forces are constantly pressing for plunder, and one's own instincts are constantly pulling and falling, which forms a strong opposition to the title of the book "I don't want to fall into evil". The whole process revolves around the game of "keeping one's heart vs. Being forced to sink", which is full of highlights. 3. The character bonding and foreshadowing are interesting After entering the Cold Sword Palace, I met the aloof Master Pei Yuhan. Judging from the hints in the introduction, the Master himself also concealed the shackles of fate of being "destined to fall". The dual-line setting of the master and the apprentice being trapped in the quagmire of fate can not only create a delicate emotional line of the characters, but also expand the depth of the plot, and escape from the routine of cultivating immortals by simply fighting monsters and upgrading. 4. Advantages of integrating world views By splicing the logic of realistic and assiduous cultivation of immortality in "A Mortal's Story of Cultivation of Immortality" + the goddess's physique, grievances and grievances in the secret realm of "Qiongming Goddess", old bookworms can find feelings, and newbies can quickly adapt to the system of immortality cultivation, which lowers the threshold for understanding the world view. 2. Existing shortcomings and optimization points 1. Hidden dangers of homogeneous themes: Transformation + special physique, being hunted by the whole world, and relying on willpower to resist physical side effects are common routines in transformation and immortality novels. If the subsequent plot only piles up repeated plots of "being hunted and escaping with difficulty", it is easy to fall into plot fatigue. 2. Difficulty in setting scale and control: The erotic erosion setting of "pure lustful imperial body", if the description and control are unbalanced, can easily become a routine and sideline narrative, deviating from the core idea of "pure love does not marry and refuses to fall into evil", and weakens the arc of the protagonist. 3. The early stage preparation is thin: there are only 140,000 words at present. The protagonist's psychological growth, in-depth exploration of the two physiques, and the master's past foreshadowing have not yet been fully developed. The long-term plot structure is still unclear, and more original plots are needed to jump out of the original IP framework. , Overall comprehensive evaluation This is a niche online novel about cultivating immortals that relies on core contradictions to drive the plot. It takes "a physique destined to fall by nature + subjective persistence of one's true nature" as the spiritual core, and is paired with a mature background of cultivating immortals that combines dual IPs. The opening suspense and dramatic conflict design are very clever. It is suitable for readers who prefer "survival in adversity, inner struggle and games, and the bond between master and apprentice". However, whether it can become a high-quality work depends on how the author weakens the routine pursuit plot in the future, deepens the psychological growth of the protagonist, and maintains the main idea of ​​"pure love and rejects evil" to avoid becoming a homogeneous cool novel.

It's good to watch, I just hope the protagonist doesn't get bullied

After reading the whole book, the pace is quite comfortable, the protagonist is well portrayed, and the interactions with the main female characters are also well written. But why is the rating so low😦. . . .

Yes, it's a purely enjoyable article, a hundred queens, crazy ccb, ​​but it's a pity that there is a link of knotting the wings, which cannot be separated from the underlying logic of the original article, Star > Love

Oh my god, it's actually Uncle Xiao Huang [face covering]

The book has a weird title, a weird content, and an increasingly weird plot. It's very weird.

This plot adaptation is really good, and the writing is a bit tasteful. All I can say is hurry up and read it, otherwise you won't be able to see it again. I enjoyed watching it. The plot has a good rhythm and the writing is good. There's nothing wrong with it [shy]

It feels good to watch it, but people always have to go to heaven. Although I want to eat it slowly, I am still afraid that I will be punished by Shen He and not be able to see the wonderful things.

The writing is very good, and it is not a joke. The words are like spring water flowing through and infiltrating people's hearts. The rhythm is interlocking and the logic is smooth. The author describes another possibility of Pei, Lu..., And does not put it down as soon as it comes up, but moves step by step. For example, Pei is mentioned first. Upgrading his cultivation level, enlightening him to create a rift in his obsession with the Sword Palace, and breaking up the knots in Pei's heart one by one. These are mutual achievements. Of course, there are a lot of things that everyone wants to see [laughs] The author also knows why everyone clicked in in the first place. In short, his title may attract you to come in, but I think you will be left behind by the author's narrative rhythm and variety of words. If you are lucky enough to read this comment, then I sincerely ask you to stay and take a look. This author depicts beautiful possibilities.

There is nothing poisonous at the moment, I hope you don't turn to poison halfway.

Come on, the future is promising [Like] Good-looking, non-toxic, and a hundred years old.

In memory of the legend who was elbowed by Shen He

After watching it, it's okay. I just wish I didn't die suddenly without being green. . . . . .

Hey, why has the content of the novel changed completely?

No, I haven't watched it in four days. I finally saved a few, why are they gone? [Cry][cry][almost cry][almost cry][cover face][vomit][vomit][fear]

Why is it gone? [Crying] I thought I was raising [crying] [crying] [crying]

The writing is good, the story adaptation is very successful, and the readers feel comfortable reading it.

The pain of youth pierced my heart and made me understand the weight of protection and redemption in growing up. Come on Uncle Liu Huang

In remembrance, I haven't finished watching it yet

It can be written well without tricking people into killing them. Like it.

Good guy, the plane crashed suddenly, has it been changed now? Can't I still watch it if I have cached it before? [Face covering]

Uncle Lily, good-looking

Anywhere is fine, I just threw in the profile code of the unidentified author [grievance]

It looks good, don't be fooled by the gods in the comment area.

Pretty good, this type is pretty good. At that time, I felt quite uncomfortable when I saw the poor people. It was good to see such people who could be saved.

I came early, why are there so few [crying]

Yes, yes, yes, you have to write it like this

I was stuck every second after reading the original work. I hope you, the author, can be a good person [laughing evilly]