Collapse of Iron: the Two Phase Paradise Will Never Fall

I gave this book five stars for several reasons [Chigua] 1. The author's writing style is very warm and looks very comfortable (little sweet article) 2. The content of the novel is relatively warm (there is basically no description of the dark side) 3. There are no exaggerated words or redundant descriptions (not that the article is lacking in quality, but the wording is more like the novels of famous writers) 4. The emotional line of the article is well written, and the emotions are not too abrupt. Compared with other books, it is slower. It can be said that the protagonist is really talking to the bird (personally, I think it is not time to confess yet) 5. The protagonist has a very vivid image. When reading, it feels like reading a true story. The protagonist has a brain and is not an accessory to any character. He is an independent individual. She has her own ideas, her own character, her own career, and her own specialties. She is not someone who often causes trouble to others and is annoying and stupid. (But the protagonist will be very sad to leave Xiaoniao). If the protagonist falls in love with Xiaoniao, he will be a good partner who will be good for Xiaoniao, relieve Xiaoniao's worries, and will not delay Xiaoniao's career (at least you don't have to worry about Brother Zhou Tian's Taichu promising) 6. The author loves his characters very much. There is no abuse for the sake of abuse, and there are no bad memes on the Internet (this is very good) Summary: It can be seen that the author really put his heart into writing this novel. It is highly recommended. (This is my first long review, I hope it will be helpful to you)

Do you want to guess how many literary classics I quoted in this book? ()

There are many little ingenuities (tell me something that everyone doesn't know) Qiyue has a strong sense of being alive (the person who wrote this comment has a strong sense of being human and machine) Quotes from scriptures (although I have never read them) It vividly shows Qiyue's reality as an ordinary person, Miss Mockingbird's beauty, Mr. Immortal Path's handsomeness, Silver Wolf girl's coolness, Master Scott's... (I can't think of any) What impressed me the most was the protagonist's sense of absurdity and powerlessness when he saw the nature of the game. He felt oppressed by being immersed in the game, and it made me feel a little nauseous🤢 After that, there was the long-lost quiet time and the peace of mind of being with family in the aftermath of the disaster. I wish everyone who reads this sentence safe and sound There are dangerous behaviors in the novel, please do not imitate it [Please update]

Personally, I feel that the image of Qiyue has become very full with constant supplements. A life that is living in struggle will become more painful the more it advances, but in the end there will definitely be an ending of her own. Good or bad are all part of her, right? However, stream of consciousness is too easy to suffer from literary youth disease, and it is quite difficult to master. It tests both the author and the reader. This thing really looks good after finishing it. As far as the current look and feel is concerned, it is still very comfortable. It can be seen that the author's literary skills are not bad. You must hold back. Don't use stream of consciousness for the sake of stream of consciousness. Ps: When will our prison month be strengthened? Now we are either crashing or on the way to the crash. I am yelling every day that I can't do anything and I don't give any cheats.

First of all, this book is very beautiful! It can be seen that the author writes seriously! With this kind of writing and style, as well as the intention of writing an original novel, I guess the results will not be bad, but unfortunately this is a fan, and your participation in the main plot is almost zero. You just saw and understood it, without any sense of participation. Most people who read fanfiction come here for the plot, worldview, or characters, and most people who read online articles probably want to see a fuller emotional experience. The story content of this book is relatively plain and a bit dull. There are stickers but not much writing (or there is nothing I want to read) (In fact, when I saw the stickers in your introduction, I thought it would be a big do-do, or something ambiguous, but it turned out not to be the case (at least until chapter 60, I didn't see a plot that made me excited, maybe it's a slow-burn type)) In reality, people who seriously want to fall in love probably have this kind of plain and warm relationship, but the article didn't make me feel that they were emotionally attracted. Another point is that after being attracted by the introduction, until Chapter 60, I didn't seem to see much of a robin singing, but I saw the protagonist recording it (but it was to apologize). All in all (the above is all illogical nonsense, write whatever comes to mind), shortcomings: the protagonist grows slowly and has no other embellishments, making the book boring. Those who came after Mockingbird will find that there is almost no progress in the relationship between the two. Advantages: The author writes well, has a comfortable writing style, and has profound literary skills Another point is that the stream of consciousness in some places seems to be a bit literary. It's not a bonus if the fanfic is too obscure (of course, if it can be perfectly combined with the plot, just think I'm farting)

A very good story, very natural, and gives me a very comfortable feeling when reading it

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Good looking feel very comfortable

It's very comfortable to watch. I like the teacher's narrative rhythm and writing style. Please encourage me (*=ω=*)

Nice [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss] (I am full of human-machine feeling)

It's a beautiful, well-written book! !