In Northern Song China, I Perform Daoist Arts in the Martial World

The story is well told, the literary skills are solid, and the quality of writing is rare to see in Tomato. But. . . The plot needs to be properly developed ~ the details are rich and the characterization is indeed in line with Lao Bai's appetite. But the story needs to be complete. The hook of the martial arts genre can only be when the plot develops to a node, and the various lines converge to reach a climax. I've written fifty or sixty chapters, but I haven't reached the opening point yet, and I haven't started the story of the subsequent chapters yet, which is a genre deviation. After all, this is not a red building or a mansion. And by this time, I wonder if the author felt that writing was becoming difficult. As a reader, I have obviously felt that the writing is fragmented, the plot is not concise, and it is quite difficult to read. If the world of martial arts loses its fierce style, it will immediately become dim. I hope the structure and chapters of this book can be perfect. Don't fall into the type deviation of longevity and righteousness. Wuxia has the charm of martial arts and has its own fun points. Personally speaking, I really have no interest in the Changshenggoudao genre. The plot can never be unfolded and the story has no integrity. The author and readers are not sure how long they can follow. What if we simply change the endings for the characters in the original text one by one, after the novelty is over? It is definitely not as satisfying as reading too much of the original text. After all, no matter what his character is, Jin Yong is indeed a real master in literature. As a reader, I still want to see new ideas in Tomato, which are different stories reimagined by the author. The author has such a level of skills, and there is no problem in choosing the subject matter. Don't pay too much attention to the bad reviews from those who don't mean anything, don't like this style, and don't get any pleasure. Give full play to their strengths, lay a solid foundation, and capture their favorite readers. These old whites are the most loyal among the group.

Invincible flow, the author's writing is profound, and the words have their own charm. The plot design is also good, but unfortunately the protagonist's portrayal is not my type. It is too frivolous and I don't like the protagonist with this kind of personality. However, it is rare for Red Persimmon to have an author with this kind of writing style, so I give it five stars.

An invincible article with a pyrotechnic atmosphere. Occasionally, a few characters from Tian Long Ba Bu will appear. Generally speaking, they have little to do with Tian Long Ba Bu. They are very interesting.

Not bad, a different kind of martial arts, written from the perspective of a common villain, very interesting.

Very well written! I just feel that something is missing... It's too similar to the immortals who play the game of mortals in ancient legends... For example, if you have great supernatural powers, can you look for corn, potatoes, sweet potatoes and peppers... Not to mention satisfying the appetite, it is also a matter of great merit... 😂😂😂

It's really interesting. It looks like a pyrotechnic, a bit like the book in which the blind man rides an ox and plays the erhu at the beginning. And the cover of this book, after reading the novel, I realized that the little girl is actually... [Crying with laughter] [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter] It made me laugh so hard╯∀╰

Don't be fooled by the rating of 7. This is a good book, there is no specific realm, there is no overstepping of levels to defeat monsters, the plot is very clever, and the writing is very sophisticated and humorous. Although they are the same person, the relationship is actually not very big. In the future, they may be related to each other in all the worlds.

The story is well written. It is said to be a martial arts novel, but in fact it is only used as a background. The stories are all independent and there are no celebrities involved. Looking forward to the follow-up.

Liangcao - The author's writing is very good, which is rare in Tomato. The story is told eloquently, with the atmosphere of the bustling market, and the choice of words and sentences has the feeling of an early storybook. Current progress → Tianlong World (End). Talking about my feelings, the author is very sophisticated and did not feel any obvious poisonous points. At the end of this world, I thought the whole book was finished. It makes sense, because I didn't expect much. If the protagonist building a Taoist temple at the beginning can be said to be necessary for survival, then after building the Taoist temple, it is just for the purpose of collecting "character cards". The protagonist's plug-in was not arranged well. Instead of being used as a supernatural "crowbar", it was used as a universal "wishing machine". I got whatever I wanted, and I was invincible. Obviously, invincible writing is not that easy to write. Throughout the entire story, the protagonist has neither practiced martial arts nor systematically cultivated immortality. Just use the Taoist classics of the predecessor to mobilize the energy in the body. Causes the effect of the spell. There is no growth in mind or body. Not even a single step. He pretends to be a celestial being who hides himself in the city, but in fact, he always talks about the mentality of a small citizen. The main plot is quite vague, plus there are all kinds of spells to make your wishes come true. There is no "upgrade" and no in-depth development. Without routines, there is no expectation. In the end, he mentioned collecting martial arts in Tianlong and deducing the techniques, but he didn't go into depth. Maybe it will be mentioned later in the world. No reader likes power that does not belong to oneself and cannot be controlled. In the second world, Tianlongli finally married two wives and lived together for many years. After traveling through time, I didn't even mention my psychological activities. Tsk tsk... Save a few worlds and come back to see

Great book! Taoism is free and easy, playing in the world, and fireworks in the market, to name a few.