Don't Laugh, I'm Really Invincible

The story is well told, the literary skills are solid, and the quality of writing is rare to see in Tomato. But. . . The plot needs to be properly developed ~ the details are rich and the characterization is indeed in line with Lao Bai's appetite. But the story needs to be complete. The hook of the martial arts genre can only be when the plot develops to a node, and the various lines converge to reach a climax. I've written fifty or sixty chapters, but I haven't reached the opening point yet, and I haven't started the story of the subsequent chapters yet, which is a genre deviation. After all, this is not a red building or a mansion. And by this time, I wonder if the author felt that writing was becoming difficult. As a reader, I have obviously felt that the writing is fragmented, the plot is not concise, and it is quite difficult to read. If the world of martial arts loses its fierce style, it will immediately become dim. I hope the structure and chapters of this book can be perfect. Don't fall into the type deviation of longevity and righteousness. Wuxia has the charm of martial arts and has its own fun points. Personally speaking, I really have no interest in the Changshenggoudao genre. The plot can never be unfolded and the story has no integrity. The author and readers are not sure how long they can follow. What if we simply change the endings for the characters in the original text one by one, after the novelty is over? It is definitely not as satisfying as reading too much of the original text. After all, no matter what his character is, Jin Yong is indeed a real master in literature. As a reader, I still want to see new ideas in Tomato, which are different stories reimagined by the author. The author has such a level of skills, and there is no problem in choosing the subject matter. Don't pay too much attention to the bad reviews from those who don't mean anything, don't like this style, and don't get any pleasure. Give full play to their strengths, lay a solid foundation, and capture their favorite readers. These old whites are the most loyal among the group.

Invincible flow, the author's writing is profound, and the words have their own charm. The plot design is also good, but unfortunately the protagonist's portrayal is not my type. It is too frivolous and I don't like the protagonist with this kind of personality. However, it is rare for Red Persimmon to have an author with this kind of writing style, so I give it five stars.

An invincible article with a pyrotechnic atmosphere. Occasionally, a few characters from Tian Long Ba Bu will appear. Generally speaking, they have little to do with Tian Long Ba Bu. They are very interesting.

Not bad, a different kind of martial arts, written from the perspective of a common villain, very interesting.

The story is well written. It is said to be a martial arts novel, but in fact it is only used as a background. The stories are all independent and there are no celebrities involved. Looking forward to the follow-up.

It's really interesting. It looks like a pyrotechnic, a bit like the book in which the blind man rides an ox and plays the erhu at the beginning. And the cover of this book, after reading the novel, I realized that the little girl is actually... [Crying with laughter] [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter] It made me laugh so hard╯∀╰

Great book! Taoism is free and easy, playing in the world, and fireworks in the market, to name a few.

Don't be fooled by the rating of 7. This is a good book, there is no specific realm, there is no overstepping of levels to defeat monsters, the plot is very clever, and the writing is very sophisticated and humorous. Although they are the same person, the relationship is actually not very big. In the future, they may be related to each other in all the worlds.

Liangcao - The author's writing is very good, which is rare in Tomato. The story is told eloquently, with the atmosphere of the bustling market, and the choice of words and sentences has the feeling of an early storybook. Current progress → Tianlong World (End). Talking about my feelings, the author is very sophisticated and did not feel any obvious poisonous points. At the end of this world, I thought the whole book was finished. It makes sense, because I didn't expect much. If the protagonist building a Taoist temple at the beginning can be said to be necessary for survival, then after building the Taoist temple, it is just for the purpose of collecting "character cards". The protagonist's plug-in was not arranged well. Instead of being used as a supernatural "crowbar", it was used as a universal "wishing machine". I got whatever I wanted, and I was invincible. Obviously, invincible writing is not that easy to write. Throughout the entire story, the protagonist has neither practiced martial arts nor systematically cultivated immortality. Just use the Taoist classics of the predecessor to mobilize the energy in the body. Causes the effect of the spell. There is no growth in mind or body. Not even a single step. He pretends to be a celestial being who hides himself in the city, but in fact, he always talks about the mentality of a small citizen. The main plot is quite vague, plus there are all kinds of spells to make your wishes come true. There is no "upgrade" and no in-depth development. Without routines, there is no expectation. In the end, he mentioned collecting martial arts in Tianlong and deducing the techniques, but he didn't go into depth. Maybe it will be mentioned later in the world. No reader likes power that does not belong to oneself and cannot be controlled. In the second world, Tianlongli finally married two wives and lived together for many years. After traveling through time, I didn't even mention my psychological activities. Tsk tsk... Save a few worlds and come back to see

Can you believe it? There is actually an innovative novel in Tomato. It has a lot of daily life and pays attention to characterization, but it lacks the conflicts of Tomato and its unique violence, bitterness and hatred. If you're looking for something exciting, don't click in. That's asking for trouble. If you feel tired of life and want to show off your lust in the Northern Song Dynasty martial arts world, you can come in and take a look. If I am dragging you, just click on my personal information to find out. Having said so much, it is purely a paid novel to read for free, so support the author.

I haven't read the last few chapters yet, so I'm just thinking about them. After reading this book, there are two words: "like reading". There's nothing wrong with using words and phrases from beginning to end, turning and combining words to form sentences, but once you've seen it, it's just as plain as water. Cheers to a four-star author.

Not bad, a rare martial arts book Hey, it's a pity. After seeing one hundred and eighty, it becomes more and more boring later. You have already become an immortal and you are still running around to recruit people. Shouldn't others come to you for help?

After reading Chapter 100, I feel it's okay. The protagonist is invincible throughout the whole process, and the story is basically about daily life, the protagonist appearing in front of others, and some side stories about plot tasks. It's just that the ancient relics appeared later, and the expansion of the worldview made me feel a little panicked, fearing that the author would not be able to grasp it.

It's wonderful, combining tradition and modernity, and the plot is compact [Like]

Plot design, ancient and modern Character portrayal, penetrating and penetrating [Like][Like][Like]

The scores are about the same. In fact, it's good to read, at least it's okay at first, but after reading too much, it becomes boring. There are no surprises or conflicts. It's the kind of novel that you can open accidentally and continue reading, but you can put it down at any time.

It's so beautiful, refreshing and refined. I hope the author will add more updates.

The author's writing skills are great👍🏻It's very beautiful

8.5 This is a fairy tale in the guise of a heavenly dragon. A refreshing novel about Taoist magic overpowering the martial arts of a heavenly dragon. The writing is very good in the early stage, there is humor, and the story is quite interesting. Later on, the pace starts to drag a bit, and it is too day-to-day, which is a lot of shortcomings for parents. Mainly because the author himself said that this is not a story about fighting and killing, but a story about monasticism. So naturally, the story loses its quality, and I can only read it quickly, but the same sentence is still there. The author's writing skills are still good.

The writing and storyline are very good, so why is it so low?

In the past half month, I have been addicted to short stories, sexual transformation, and those fast-travel short stories. My nerves have atrophied from reading them. This book finally brought me back from that state to the state of Taoism and nature [laughter]

More updates from the author. Several of the novels he has written are very good. I look forward to more works.

It's very interesting to write, what a great guy, a really great guy!

The supporting characters are well written, lively and interesting

Good book, the author's writing is good and fascinating [Like][Like][Like]

Invincible and independent, the plot can use strengths and avoid weaknesses, which is good.

It's interesting, quite good-looking, and the protagonist's personality is quite likable. It's pretty good without being pretentious.

It's pretty good. The writing is smooth, the plots are connected in an orderly manner, and there are no mindless conflicts. Maybe it's because I read the book too sloppily, and the descriptions in Golden Finger were too shallow and I didn't understand it. It's readable.

It has the potential to be a big hit, and it has the feeling of a gold-based martial arts movie that I saw in print more than ten years ago. You have to look calmly to see it in.

So far, it seems to be a good book. The writing is smooth and not laggy. There is basically no nonsense. The author is a good storyteller. You can read it with confidence. I have found a good book again!