[Mortal flow + family development + farming + no system + decisive killing + space]
A mortal family accidentally obtained the relics of an immortal cultivator while hunting in the mountains, and they embarked on the road to cultivating immortals.
Develop power, run a family, struggle in the world of immortality with the help of a mysterious space and a fairy vine, and grow step by step...
There are thousands of sects in the sky, and the vast fairyland is like a lone boat sailing against the waves!
It started at a young age, broke out of the cocoon in the world, and emerged in the world of immortality!
This is the history of the struggle and development of a mortal family in the world of immortality, a turbulent journey of a mortal family growing into an immortal imperial clan!
Cultivation realm: Qi refining, foundation building, golden elixir, Yuanying, spiritual transformation...
Reader comments
It's pretty good so far. Although there are still some flaws in the handling of the characters, it is still a good online article in Tomato. Since it is a family article, the subsequent author should use more brains. Don't be like many authors and write a lone ranger under the guise of a family article. Group portraits must be arranged, even if they are pseudo-group. Everything is fine, but don't revolve around the male protagonist. In a real family story, everyone is actually the protagonist, and the male protagonist plays a role in promoting and leading. It doesn't matter if the development of the family story is slower. The more detailed the writing, the more people will give it a high score. The step-by-step development of the family, how it develops, and everyone's contribution, etc., Are the main lines. Not many people who can read the family story want to see you write as the Lone Ranger in the end.
By the way, I have also read the Purple Mist Villa you wrote, but I couldn't see the real family. I felt that the entire family relied on the male protagonist, and the other people's role was minimal. I stopped reading halfway through! This time, don't follow the writing method of Ziwu Villa again!
You can write the male protagonist's family as the sixth one, sinister and vicious, and vengeful. The next door family is also the Li family. They also developed from a mortal family. They have knelt down and cowed but never gave in. In his words: Our Lao Li family does not want the word "face" in the dictionary! That thing is useless!
The previous content is well written. I look forward to the super-expanding of the big map later to see how the author's settings for cultivating immortals are [laughs][laughs]
The plot is vivid and gripping, worth watching
From unexpectedly gaining the opportunity to cultivate immortality while hunting in the mountains, to slowly running a family and farming, this kind of down-to-earth immortality writing is rare. It is unsystematic and has room for success. I look forward to the follow-up work.
The writing is excellent and the chapters are clear. I have read three big books by the author in a row. It is very good. Come on!
It's pretty good so far. Although there are still some flaws in the handling of the characters, it is still a good online article in Tomato. Since it is a family article, the subsequent author should use more brains. Don't be like many authors and write a lone ranger under the guise of a family article. Group portraits must be arranged, even if they are pseudo-group. Everything is fine, but don't revolve around the male protagonist. In a real family story, everyone is actually the protagonist, and the male protagonist plays a role in promoting and leading. It doesn't matter if the development of the family story is slower. The more detailed the writing, the more people will give it a high score. The step-by-step development of the family, how it develops, and everyone's contribution, etc., Are the main lines. Not many people who can read the family story want to see you write as the Lone Ranger in the end. By the way, I have also read the Purple Mist Villa you wrote, but I couldn't see the real family. I felt that the entire family relied on the male protagonist, and the other people's role was minimal. I stopped reading halfway through! This time, don't follow the writing method of Ziwu Villa again! You can write the male protagonist's family as the sixth one, sinister and vicious, and vengeful. The next door family is also the Li family. They also developed from a mortal family. They have knelt down and cowed but never gave in. In his words: Our Lao Li family does not want the word "face" in the dictionary! That thing is useless!
The previous content is well written. I look forward to the super-expanding of the big map later to see how the author's settings for cultivating immortals are [laughs][laughs]
The plot is vivid and gripping, worth watching
From unexpectedly gaining the opportunity to cultivate immortality while hunting in the mountains, to slowly running a family and farming, this kind of down-to-earth immortality writing is rare. It is unsystematic and has room for success. I look forward to the follow-up work.
The writing is excellent and the chapters are clear. I have read three big books by the author in a row. It is very good. Come on!
Good, keep up the good work. .
It looks really good.
Very good. Super exciting.