[Mortal cultivation + family development + farming + no System + decisive and ruthless + spatial realm]
A mortal family accidentally discovers a cultivator's relic while hunting in the mountains, and from then on embarks on the path of cultivation.
They build their strength and manage their clan, striving in the cultivation world with the help of a mysterious spatial realm and an immortal vine, growing stronger step by step...
Countless sects stand across the land, and through the vast path to immortality, a lone boat pushes against the waves!
Starting from humble beginnings, they emerge from the jianghu and rise in the cultivation world!
This is the history of a mortal family striving and growing in the cultivation world, a sweeping journey from an ordinary clan to an imperial family of the immortal path!
Cultivation stages: Qi Refining, Foundation Establishment, Golden Core, Nascent Soul, Deity Transformation...
It's pretty good so far. Although there are still some flaws in the handling of the characters, it is still a good online article in Tomato. Since it is a family article, the subsequent author should use more brains. Don't be like many authors and write a lone ranger under the guise of a family article. Group portraits must be arranged, even if they are pseudo-group. Everything is fine, but don't revolve around the male protagonist. In a real family story, everyone is actually the protagonist, and the male protagonist plays a role in promoting and leading. It doesn't matter if the development of the family story is slower. The more detailed the writing, the more people will give it a high score. The step-by-step development of the family, how it develops, and everyone's contribution, etc., Are the main lines. Not many people who can read the family story want to see you write as the Lone Ranger in the end. By the way, I have also read the Purple Mist Villa you wrote, but I couldn't see the real family. I felt that the entire family relied on the male protagonist, and the other people's role was minimal. I stopped reading halfway through! This time, don't follow the writing method of Ziwu Villa again! You can write the male protagonist's family as the sixth one, sinister and vicious, and vengeful. The next door family is also the Li family. They also developed from a mortal family. They have knelt down and cowed but never gave in. In his words: Our Lao Li family does not want the word "face" in the dictionary! That thing is useless!
The previous content is well written. I look forward to the super-expanding of the big map later to see how the author's settings for cultivating immortals are 😄😄
The author who broke the record of 10,000 chapters is very optimistic about you!
The plot is vivid and gripping, worth watching
From unexpectedly gaining the opportunity to cultivate immortality while hunting in the mountains, to slowly running a family and farming, this kind of down-to-earth immortality writing is rare. It is unsystematic and has room for success. I look forward to the follow-up work.
The writing is excellent and the chapters are clear. I have read three big books by the author in a row. It is very good. Come on!
Can I give myself a five-star rating?
So far so good, the logic is clear. The protagonist is also written as being brave, resourceful, and patient, and the author has certain literary skills. I wanted to give it a five-star rating, but after thinking about it I would be more conservative. Take a look and then talk.
Very good. Super exciting.
It looks really good.