749+Foundation+Cthulhu+Containment+Shuangwen+Group Portrait
While others were containing anomalies, Li Yi was better off, walking the S+-class anomaly like a dog and eating the eight-winged angel as a snack!
No one thought that this ten-year-old child, who would be aggrieved even if his new clothes were burned, was actually an SSS+ anomaly that even God was afraid of!
His sister died tragically, and he was reborn from the ashes. He crushed the entire audience in his half-skeleton form, and his spatial abilities improved in seconds!
The beautiful agent of Bureau 749 dotes on him, and the skeleton army from another space protects him. He is cheated all the way on the road to revenge, and there is no delay in torturing the scum!
"Whoever dares to bully me, or bully Sister Yun, I will destroy him in ashes!"
Reader comments
The author's description is really okay, really.
But there are too many invalid words, and the description of a person's movements really doesn't need to be so detailed.
For example: the protagonist takes a knife and slams it into his chest. His chest was sunken and he vomited blood.
This sentence is enough, but you must write: I saw the protagonist quickly take out the best Taoist weapon long knife from behind, clasping his hands with his veins exposed, and slammed it towards his chest from above. The bones in his chest were shattered and most of them were dented. With a loud sound, he spat out a large mouthful of bright red blood.
It seems too wordy to write like this.
In addition, if you still have no results after writing 130,000 words, this book can be cut.
Good luck~~
The author's description is really okay, really. But there are too many invalid words, and the description of a person's movements really doesn't need to be so detailed. For example: the protagonist takes a knife and slams it into his chest. His chest was sunken and he vomited blood. This sentence is enough, but you must write: I saw the protagonist quickly take out the best Taoist weapon long knife from behind, clasping his hands with his veins exposed, and slammed it towards his chest from above. The bones in his chest were shattered and most of them were dented. With a loud sound, he spat out a large mouthful of bright red blood. It seems too wordy to write like this. In addition, if you still have no results after writing 130,000 words, this book can be cut. Good luck~~