Gou Xiong Ridge Holy Grail War

Although at first glance it looks like Aha is calling me, the writing is really good. I have to say that he is the best writer among Tomatoes. The plot and character arrangement are quite reasonable, and Jin Shining is also the most frustrated I have ever seen. I'm serious, it's worth watching. I think it will be popular.

I thought he was the Star God of Joy, but I never thought he was a downgraded master. It is written about childhood and has shadows of childhood, but it uses adult pen and ink. It is not embarrassing and beautiful. You can see my tail spinning. This rating is too low. It can't be justified at all.

The theme is interesting because it can quickly break away the hostility between Xiong Xiong and Bald Qiang, and then set up some kind of enemy and use various black technologies from Bear Infestation together with the heroic spirits.

The humor is that this fun-filled book is better than most of the books on Tomato. After all, the ideas are your own, right? 39[Laughing]

I feel that Bald Qiang and Xiong Da's characters and ways of doing things are very consistent with their childhood memories. This is the biggest anchor for me to continue reading. The story is narrated naturally and smoothly, with almost no feeling of sluggishness. This also makes this novel particularly attractive to me. I hope there will be more mature novels with childhood memories in the future. Brother, why are you updating one chapter a day? It's so uncomfortable to stop reading halfway through, so I have to save it for a while every time to read again.

It was pretty good after watching it. Is it based on the movie? The fantasy is followed by Metamorphosis. I really want to see the shrinking battle of the heroic spirits!

I have to say that it seems to be quite consistent with the original work. The actual content can be seen that the author has carefully conceived it. It doesn't look like a book just to make a living. Overall, it is worth reading [laughter]

It's surprisingly good-looking, the plot is very smooth, and there are no poisonous points. Even a person who doesn't watch Fate can understand it.

Abstract, but unexpectedly consistent with the original work. [Laughing evilly] You can try some food for fun

After reading about ten chapters, it looks really good. The battle of wits and courage feels a little bit like the original version. It's already this time and you're still trapping a Shinigami elementary school student? Even though it only appeared in one or two episodes

I originally watched it out of curiosity, but now I feel that the writing is pretty good. Each summoned spirit fits the character's personality, and the main characters such as Bald Qiang are also growing up.

The plot flows smoothly and the writing is naturally excellent.

At first glance, it seems that Aha snatched a passerby's cell phone and wrote it, but after a closer look, I found that this book is really good. In short, I hope it can land smoothly. Also, I want to ask, is the heroine Artoria? Cp feels that he is really heavy.

It's worth reading, but it's only for those fans of Xingyue and Bears. This book will probably combine two delicious dishes with good character into a dark dish full of exotic flavor. In summary, if you want to watch it, I suggest you think of the style of the characters in Xingyue and Bears. Otherwise, it will give people a very fragmented feeling. However, I admire the author's imagination. The author knows how to attract attention? Being able to fuse these two unrelated themes together is already on par with Ding Liang. The key is that he can still fuse it quite well [face covering], but I still recommend that you treat this novel as a spin-off of Bears and a movie! Otherwise, it really feels abstract [laughs awkwardly]

If I really want to say how good this book is, it is not. It can be said that there are many areas that need to be polished, but it gave me a special feeling. It gave me a kind of correct outlook on life but not rigid, and the characterization is also obvious (except that sometimes the AI flavor is a bit too strong). I can't even criticize it as other novels. Even sometimes the adjectives are overly repeated and the AI flavor is too strong. I read it all the way. I can't describe this feeling, but I hope this novel can be written well and completed. And author, you can't leave Death of King Arthur stuck at this point! Forget it, rational evaluation The outline is good, and so is the plot arrangement. But there are still several shortcomings Including but not limited to AI adjectives that are too obvious and repetitive. For example, the corners of the mouth are slightly upturned, and they are as cold as ice. In major events, some characters disappeared out of thin air like NPCs, without any news feedback. The plot development and pacing were improperly grasped. I thought it would be very effective, but it ended up being solved in one sentence. As a result, a lot of the prerequisites written earlier felt a bit sloppy, and there was no gradual rise and fall of emotions.

It's surprisingly good-looking, and the plot is well integrated.

I thought it was just another quick article, but it turned out to be surprisingly good. The plot is pretty good, and it can be seen from the details that the author really likes bears. The characters are all restored, and some of the self-created heroes are also very good. The author is also very concerned about typos and has corrected many of them. , And the updates are also very fast. At its peak, it was five chapters a day. It was also a qualified codeword machine [laughing evilly]. However, it also has some shortcomings, that is, the description of characters, situations, and battles is a bit too heavy, which is a bit uncomfortable, but overall it is not bad, you can take a look.

The writing is excellent and the content is novel and perfectly integrates the two world views, but it is not as painful as the original plot of Fate. It is worth watching.

The only FGO fanfic with a wonderful storyline without OOC characters

The plot and writing are both okay, but what deserves my 4 stars is the nostalgia for childhood, and the fact that his handling of characters is as close to animation and games as possible, which is okay, but some of the detailed descriptions are a bit too redundant, and you don't have to use this method to highlight some of the characters' personalities.

It's okay, to be honest, the shaping is a bit bland. After all, this is a new path. In terms of logic, I can only say that it's okay. Jin Shining Shining is really a bit outrageous.

Well, this novel is very interesting, but based on my experience (not necessarily correct), this theme is suitable for short to medium endings. If it is too long, it will be easy to lose control. 🤔

This subject matter is very novel. Both Bears and Fate are my favorites to watch. If I can see these two merged together in my lifetime, this must be five stars. In terms of plot, I hope some of the plots in Fate can be added later [Adoration] [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss] [Flowing Kiss]

When I first saw the title, I thought it was a complete novel like Ultra's Son-in-law, but later I found out that it's quite interesting. The two themes together are unique.

This book is very well written, good luck to the author.

Judging by the name, the content is actually really good.

It's very good. If I have to find any fault with the latest chapter, it's obvious that the latest chapter uses AI (I don't know if it's true, so please don't scold me if it's not), but the plot is still very good. I hope that after this chapter of the Five Wars, I can use AI less. Although I can understand that the author uses AI after all, the author still has to work, but I still hope to use it as little as possible, so use it as little as possible.

I'm really curious about when they will have more daily life, and I really want to see them get along. What's more, what I'm curious about is, will Arlia be the heroine? [Adoration][Face covering], I know it's a personal feeling.

It's perfect, but the bald head is too weak. It's perfect, but the bald head is too weak. It makes me blush at every turn, hahaha! ! !

I thought it was some kind of curiosity, but after watching it, I thought it was still very interesting.