Naruto: the Dead Wood Escaper Who Wants to Die

To sum up, I have read more than 40 chapters so far, and I can only say that there are good and bad ones. ①I think the setting of Dead Tree Escape is quite novel, and the protagonist's ability to trace back death is also quite curious, which is interesting. ② I can feel that the author wants to write well, but maybe due to the writing style, it is not expressed so well, that is, some plots are a bit stiff (personal suggestion, you can write more about psychological activities, small actions, etc., That is, the character creation can be written from the side, and you can try to use simple words to make big truths, because I think it is more in line with the appearance of the author's child) ③Personally, I think the writing style is a bit humorous, which is a plus for me. ④The update frequency currently seems to be three or two updates a day, which is pretty good. Keep it up. In summary, it is watchable, the plot is creative, but the writing is stiff and the performance is not very good. Keep up the good work, author Sang(•‿•) Suddenly I discovered that there was a typo. ②The last line should be the appearance of the protagonist's child, Smith Marseille Σ( ° △ °|||)

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it's very good-looking, Konoha's friendship is indeed well-deserved😋😋😋 It's a great honor to prostrate myself under Mr. Gang's pants😋😋😋😋😋😋

Yes, the writing is not bad, the setting of Deadwood Release is very novel, and Akatsuki has been added. The main love line at present is Itachi's, so it's a double arrow. Others' arrows are one-way and the proportion is not very large. It can be regarded as a bit of a heartthrob. When will the author open a side story about Itachi's confession? Pure love is also delicious! Anyway, give me a five-star lesbian rating [love] 8/27 edition I don't know how to express my feelings. I like this book very much, but unfortunately I have lost interest in Naruto. I probably won't be able to finish this book. I will come and spread flowers on the day it is finished.

There are no problems with the plot, and there are no poisonous points (in my opinion at the moment), but the psychological description and language expression between the characters still need to be improved a lot. It feels like the protagonist went through so much misery at the beginning, just like a normal person, which is not very real. Moreover, from the mental value on the system panel, we can guess that the protagonist must have died more than once. His mental state seems to be quite good. (Maybe it's a disguise?) The psychology of the illusion after the fight with Itachi at school can also be described in depth. At that time, I even vomited when I read the protagonist. In short, the logic of this book is up to date, and the thinking is very clear. It can be seen that the author is very careful. However, the description of the psychological state is not in place, and the character's experience and mentality changes do not match. It may be that the life is too normal to imagine, but this is also very good. If it is too much, it will be suspected of being a misfortune. But if it continues like this, there is a system, and there are clear requirements and guarantees for returning home. After reading the original work, isn't this an immersive large-scale ar game? Maybe the protagonist is the player's psychology. The fourth natural disaster is just from the chaotic and lawful camp.

It's extremely delicious😋, there are many heavy men for you to choose from, different perspectives, different tastes

The author's writing style is one that is fresh and humorous and has a very clear feeling that makes people feel very clearly. Then when you read it, you will know that the author is a very gentle, positive and optimistic kind of person. How should I put it? It is a very gentle and very similar writing style, often very kind, using very vivid and very sweet language to describe everything in life, just like the momentary feeling you enjoy when eating strawberries, you can't help but be brought into this sweet joy when reading the author's article. ✌︎ ॑꒳ ॑✌︎

I had rejected the book more than a dozen times before because of its introduction, but it just tied it. The characters are a bit OOC, and the plot is quite interesting, but there is no outline, or the writing is a bit messy. I hope the author will go well in the exam, and then I will come back for double updates and read all the comments. The 7 points are mainly because there are too few people. Book friends try their best to help recommend the book. Come on, author!

Delicious, very delicious! The interaction between Da Lan and Xiao Lan later is so cool! It's on par with "Naruto: Becoming Strong by Becoming a Beautiful and Strong Supporting Role" that I watched before, so go for it! [Adoration][Adoration] Come on all Lan! ! Arrogant little brown hair!

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I'd rate it between four and five stars. The writing is quite humorous, and I can even taste a bit of a self-deprecating writing style. You may often see some breaking of dimensional walls. ( It really feels like that kind of humorous and gentle writing style. It's actually pretty good if you watch it for a long time. Xiaolan must have charmed the people around her like this. It's up to you, dear men, to choose. Come on all Lan! 😋Just pull him hard like this, let the brown-haired puppy be entangled by the heavy man like this! Tribute to our legendary patriarch Itachi Uchiha (Actually, I feel like this Shisui is not inferior to Kakashi in terms of gravity.) (You, Gaara, are the last to catch up. In fact, you, Naruto, are not much better.)

Uh, I was seen through again😨. With the understanding of S1 experts😜, when the other party guessed that I was a perfect foodie😝, they also chose a violent move🥵Konoha's friendship😋 When I saw Chapter 99, I felt a little emotional. I want to ask Itachi. Itachi, do you feel distressed when you see Arashi hurt and sad? Do you hate yourself for not having enough ability to prevent this from happening, and you can only be powerless to make your best friend bear the infamy and not be able to confess the truth, which makes you suffer? [ Almost crying] Although you agreed to Lan's plan, you must feel a little uncomfortable in your heart. Even if you want comfort, you can only express it in a letter [crying] Now that the lovers are separated, I can only hope that I can meet Lan soon. Although Lan also wants to go home because of himself, and Itachi is Lan's best friend. This makes Arashi want to help him. But it is true that the protagonist suffered😭. In his previous life, Arashi was just an ordinary high school student, and he came to Hokage on the day he just became an adult. He had the love of his parents and relatives, but he was helpless in the world of Hokage at the beginning. It was not until the prison was blown up that he saw the light, and he gained the love of Shinichi and various uncles and aunts. After all, the protagonist came here The world is only six years old. He is still just a child. Although his mental age is already more than 20 years old. Readers have watched Arashi grow up step by step, and I really feel sorry for baby Arashi. Arashi has also begun to care about the ninja world [almost crying]. I want to change many, many tragedies. I really feel sorry for him, and I feel sorry for him to have to bear the infamy. Konoha is really famous for its unruly people, no one dares to say it [smile] I hope Lan Bao can go home and be happy in the end [almost crying]. In addition, the author should also pay attention to his health [sending my heart] I am old Feng Feng. I feel so embarrassed after writing this paragraph. [Crazy]

The setting of the main character, Dead Tree Release, is very novel, and the emotions are also described very delicately, especially the relationship with Itachi (but Konoha-style friendship is delicious!) [Shy] However, it can be seen that the author's writing style is slightly green, and he is constantly improving in the future. Even in the early stage, some parts of the writing were confusing, but most of the pitfalls have been filled in. In short, I must give a wave of praise [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's very delicious😋. It has many magical metaphors and is very interesting. The climax is very well written, I don't know why so few people have watched it, and Itachi's emotions are also very good. The main character, I want you to be mama, yes. The tone at the beginning is actually different from the tone at the end. You can take a look at the content at the end first.

It's quite good. Although the writing is not very good, I like to read it. [Blowing a kiss] Here, I hope the author can add more. Mainly because there are too few. The front part is very creative, but the middle part may feel a little boring, but you can get past it. After you look at some parts in the middle, you will feel that it is not bad, it is quite beautiful. I hope the author can work harder. [Blowing kiss]

A very good book! It can be seen that the protagonist has some hints of the fourth plague! Some players have some psychology! ? 🤔It's delicious, right? Overall good, the emotional line is mainly Itachi! (Itachi is a bit patriarchal) As for the protagonist, he has a relatively good personality, a bit mean-spirited but also cute. Anyway, I like this kind of character very much. ! I personally feel that psychological description needs to be paid attention to! In some places the writing is too simple. ! ! Oh, if you are interested, you can go to the book circle to see my creations. ! (Actually, we do it a little less now, haha.!) I will add a book review after I finish reading it. ! Hey hey hey, recommended!

More updates, more updates, I really want to see the defection,,, I was stunned by the friendship in Konoha, there are more updates to be made

I really like the introduction alone😋 I don't know how to praise it, but it's really beautiful👍

It's very heartwarming, and the protagonist's personality is also very lovable

The settings of Deadwood Escape and Death Rewind are very novel, and the writing is quite humorous. So far, not one of the important characters in the original work has died (because it was Lan Bao who used his countless deaths to try and make a good ending step by step😭 Author, please continue to kill the protagonist, I am not crying or sad at all), and the protagonist is equivalent to replacing Itachi's position in the original work, and destroys some radicals of Uchiha, which makes Erzhu both love and hate him. Also, Lan Bao seems to be a good drinker with everyone, but the official match seems to be Itachi Lan? No matter, anyway, Konoha-style friendship is like this, it exists beyond love, yes. In terms of shortcomings, I personally don't like the description of Mikoto and Izumi. It doesn't feel like a normal family relationship. I hope the author can maintain the current update frequency, and I will follow up on the review when it is finished. (Also, is the author interested in resurrecting the fourth generation couple after the finale...😭🥺)

This novel is so good. I really like the character of the protagonist. The protagonist and Itachi must fight each other. Otherwise, I will play elbow elbows with the earth and tug-of-war with the beams.

In Lan cute It's just that I was scared to tears by Konoha's friendship.

It's very innovative and beautiful. I hope you'll stick with it 😊 It feels so good. I like it. If I have to say why, I can only say poke me xp☺️

Tai Tama is so beautiful🥰Try it again and again, you will know the taste after eating the marrow😋I can't resist the charm of Lan Mi even though I try my best😜

It's nice. The end of the introduction reminds me of a certain bishop. Kakashi: He has no father, but he still has me. I can be his guide in life, right?

So pretty! The friendship between Konoha is well-deservedＯ(≧▽≦)ＯThe setting is also so novel

Awesome, Lan is not only awesome but also tender.

Not bad, come on

Great writing, good luck to the author [laughs]

Already tied, looking forward to updates [send heart][send heart][send heart]

Good food, delicious, love to eat