An Overworked Employee Transmigrates into a Kitten and Cultivates Immortality Through Sign-In Rewards

The progress of the plot is a bit slow, the pace is faster, and the plot is clearer. I read the first 10 chapters, and they are basically in the ruined temple, adapting to the cat body, and unlocking basic sign-ins. The items are too daily, and the line of cultivating immortals is minimal. For readers who come here for the label of "cultivating immortals", for example, I easily feel that the pace is dragging, and the whole text is unfolded from the cat's short perspective. The restricted vision and actions make the plot scenes appear particularly monotonous, and the background is not very rich. Character creation There is only the protagonist, and there are very few supporting characters. I think the cat mother can be set as a civet, and the sign-in reward should be linked to the spiritual weapon as much as possible, such as a wisp of spiritual energy, a fragment of a spiritual weapon, etc. After all, this is a fairy tale, (the spiritual energy is basically exhausted and it is not good enough). It would be better to expand the world view and introduce the characters as soon as possible. To be honest, I can only talk about it. If I write it, it is probably just a piece of shit. I can only encourage the author [sending heartfelt] So the author should work hard.

I haven't finished reading it yet, so I'll give it five stars. After all, I don't have the ability to write. The author works so hard to please me, so he deserves five stars. The only bad thing is that there are many specious descriptions, which are not clear enough. The Riddler is a bit tired. I prefer the feeling of opening up and closing, and not being too wordy.

The writing is very detailed and not shoddy. I just finished the first volume. It was so difficult for the kitten. It feels like the story has just begun, and it can be expected to be a long one. Now I am looking forward to the real world of immortality, whether the golden finger sign-in system can start to show its power.

Although it was a little heart-wrenching and a little depressing to watch, I still admire the heroine very much. Even though she was dressed as a cat, she had a bumpy journey and suffered many hardships, but she still didn't give up!

I think it's very beautiful, but ꒦ິ^꒦ິ must be successfully transmitted this time, don't be unable to go again, the author is great

It's good to watch, but the progress is too slow. I guess it's at least a thousand chapters long... Because it's already over a hundred chapters and it feels like it's still a prequel, and I haven't even entered the novice village [laughing]

It's pretty good. Although Maomao Growth Diary has a system, it feels like it's only used as an auxiliary and you basically rely on yourself. Good

Cats have been suffering, can't they steal some food and save it? [Aggrieved] [Aggrieved] [Aggrieved]

I wanted to watch Cultivation to Immortality, but it ended before the kitten entered the world of Cultivation to Immortality, ugh

Can you give an ending to the cats who can't be found? As a side story