Miss Dementor at Hogwarts

To be honest, the writing is very good and I quite like it. At least it looks good now, the characters are well developed, the logic is good, and the writing is good. Moreover, she is a shrewd and thoughtful dark heroine, with a cute personality that is a bit dull when it comes to emotions, coupled with the shaping and description of Luna and Harley. The creation of characters is not as simple as saying a few words to the protagonist, smiling or blushing like in other Tomato novels. It is reflected in many small details, which can only be said to be quite good. The most valuable thing is that there are not many traces of AI, except for occasional typos. I don't know why so few people read it. I hope the author can continue writing it.

To sum up, it can be seen that there is no poisonous point for me at the moment. Maybe I have eaten too much poison and I have become more patient. At present, if we continue to update, there will be a long, long content. The second grade has not yet started. Then there is a sense of stream of consciousness in the plot. Now is indeed a fast-paced era, and I can't bear to read long paragraphs. This depends on whether the author caters to the times or maintains his own personality, but I personally feel that it can be broken into small paragraphs. The emotional line is progressing slowly. It is more like trying to rewrite the process of a dementor gradually understanding human emotions deeply and gradually losing the indifference in his bones. At least for now, it feels more like best friends, but the three ladies are already very important.

It's pretty good, but the battle descriptions look weird. Some of the character names have been wrong recently. I feel like it was written in a hurry. It feels different from the previous dozens of chapters. It's handwritten, not AI, and the writing style is pretty good.

A very delicious book. From my point of view, the story of this book is very concise, without complicated plot. It revolves around the protagonist's step-by-step transformation from dementors to humans. The story between the protagonist and Harry and others is also very cute.

The settings are very interesting. Have you added the dnd settings? (I ran DND once) The character of the heroine is also worth chewing. She is still looking for a way to regain her humanity while trapped in divinity. It's just the lack of some descriptive words that makes me look a little uncomfortable.

I have read Chapter 21 so far, and I feel that the protagonist has something to do. The writing in the article does not give me a clear sense of purpose, which makes some content a bit confusing to me. It would be better if it could be explained more clearly.

It's very palatable. It's not a mindless story, and it's not all about romance. The heroine has her own thing to do. I hope she doesn't always suffer.

For the protagonist of the dark style, the attribute points of the protagonist can be mentioned. If the force value is too low, it is easy to feel frustrated. The heroine can be more ambiguous, that's the main focus.

It would be too wild for Harry Potter to go to Slytherin, and there was no way Dumbledore would let her go.

It's good-looking, with distinct characters. It's not the kind of plot that progresses at the speed of light. It's written in detail. Each character's personality characteristics are well expressed. The plot is also very interesting. The protagonist is a type with no taboos and behaves like a dark wizard. All in all, it's good-looking, novel, and plot-oriented, not just a post. I personally like this kind of thing.

Although long paragraphs of text are rare nowadays, it awakened my ancient memories and made me feel comfortable. After looking at it for so long, I found that the quality is very good. The exploration and other parts are very well written, and the battle of wits part is even better (I'm running out of words...). The shortcomings are that there are too few battles and not enough blood, but they are just trivial problems. Finally, lovely Luna, kind Luna [shy][shy][shy]

It's a pretty good book, but the author doesn't consider material-free casting. When a mage/warlock uses a magic weapon (such as a wand) to cast a spell, he can avoid using non-consumable casting materials. Fireballs can be fired by simply throwing the wand [Thinking]

The emotional description is really detailed and just right. It is not superficial like other books. The interaction with Luna is really invincible. It is different from other HP novels. The number of views is really sorry for the quality [Like]

If the protagonist casts the Human Transformation Curse on all the other Soul Eaters, wouldn't there be a bunch of handsome guys and beauties in Hogwarts who kiss and gnaw on everyone they meet?

This protagonist is too fierce, blowing up Gringotts to steal the magic stone, and letting mercenaries blow up the school

Unremarkable cover title and introduction, but the content deserves full marks

It's very beautiful. It's rare to see such a beautiful book. It's just that there are too few. It would be best if the author could add more than a hundred chapters [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

It's particularly interesting. The heroine is like a little poisonous snake, using power to divide people and gain benefits.

I read it in one sitting, it's very interesting

The plot is online, looking forward to Shura Field [Adoration]

I want to see the posts coming, but there are almost none. But the plot is well written.

It's pretty good-looking and in line with the taste. I support it.

The content is very good, the writing style is amazing, and the author's emotional lines make people feel deeply involved.

It's very beautiful, very long and detailed, I hope to read it to the end.

It feels a bit jerky at the beginning, but the more you write, the better it feels, and the plot design is also excellent.

Very nice fanfic, the setting and plot are very interesting

Is this a hundred? Look at the label and there are multiple female protagonists.

It's very good, and the writing is very good, but there are many mistakes and typos.

The plot is surprisingly good, but the plot is a little lacking.

Huge, huge, beautiful [shy]