Under One Person: Shake Fruit, Build a New World

Yes, the author's protagonist is full of courage. The key is that the author did not overpower the protagonist, and the writing was enjoyable throughout. Good author, please update soon. Author, please don't follow the plot. Later you can go to sea, stand on the islands, build a navy, or conquer Burma. Don't follow the plot of one person. It is easy to end. When I saw the new chapter, it was a bit unfinished.

Explosive! If you don't suppress your fighting power, you will be a natural disaster in human form, and you will be invincible in the world. Go to sea to build a new world, punch Japan, kick the United States, and become the emperor of the sea. When you go to sea, you can avoid the beasts of harmony and establish your own "world government". Some settings from One Piece are introduced here, which is very amazing. The only thing I feel awkward about is my attitude toward my "hometown". I can be silent, nostalgic, and looking forward to it, but I can't be timid, panicked, or concerned about one thing and the other. (I used to be able to do it calmly and effortlessly, but now I am in a hurry, rolling and crawling) It is suggested that the settings of One Piece can be further explored and learned from, such as: children awakening to the overlord color (others should not have it, it can be used as a symbol of the protagonist's family), sky gold, heavenly dragon people...

I saw chapter 35, a very good beginning. A slightly dusty start. It's like a bright sun at this point. The protagonist's strength increases rapidly. The battle with Zhang Zhiweina shocked the alien world. Recover the Caobang and demonstrate his thunderous skills. He is not afraid of artillery and one person can defeat ten thousand people. Looking forward to facing the majestic appearance next and resisting the invasion of foreign enemies.

The writing is good, it really shows the power of the Zhenzhen Fruit. I'm looking forward to a wave of it that will flood my little life.

The writing is indeed good, and the pressure of the battle is not too much. It is just right and I can continue writing. However, the update is really a bit slow. How can two chapters a day be enough? I'll tell you, ten chapters will be updated every day [laughing]

Love to watch, powerful plug-ins, well-developed protagonist Strong and powerful! It's great in a big scene, it's great Seven-star review. The latest chapter, Chapter 100, is a blast. This is a cool article.

Up to 115 top-notch cool stories, in Shuang the whole movie is cool. The protagonist eats the Zhenzhen Fruit at the beginning and works as a coolie at the dock. Because the ninja exposed his strength, he joins the Cao Gang and wants to invade China soon, unify the Cao Gang and resist foreign enemies. After several years of accumulation, he has become invincible in the country. His subordinates want to The protagonist becomes the king, and then the protagonist goes abroad and conquers the East. The most exciting thing is here. Various treaties are signed. Later, the protagonist becomes the emperor of the sea. Fast forward in time, single heroine, the heroine is pregnant. Fast forward in time later, it is purely daily life. I think it is almost over, but it is indeed well written. If you don't finish it, it will be unfinished and become a nanny book. It's over after seeing 115 pictures. After that, the protagonist is old and the child is invincible. It's a waste of time with nothing to see. There's nothing to say about the five-star rating.

Although the book is very short, the author must have written everything he wanted to write. This book is very good and has many battle scenes, and you can delve deeply into the effect of just one skill. The story is based on a one-man world in 1944. The male protagonist is a replica of Whitebeard, subduing the Cao Gang and beating up the Japanese. It's just that the hang-up is a bit too big and the male protagonist's growth is too unreasonable and lacks a sense of excitement. It lacks a bit of feeling in terms of upgrading and growth. Skill mining and visuals are well received! It may be worth looking forward to writing a devil fruit ability in each world of Zhutianliu [exploration] In fact, if I don't want to extend it to write the story of the male protagonist going to sea, it should be finished. Maybe it would be good to write an open ending. It would not make much sense to delay it until the modern day without a story to connect one person.

So cool. The most domineering second creation I have ever seen. The whole article is really full of domineering. From the beginning to the end, there really are no flaws. Except that I don't dare to write boldly about tactics. It was written from the time of the Anti-Japanese War as a starting point, and the seniority and so on are completely reasonable. The male protagonist is completely an honest man who is loyal and patriotic but has the strongest strength in the world. There is no question about the third outlook. Most of the original tragic characters had a happy ending. This is definitely the most enjoyable second-generation novel I have read this year. After reading this second creation article, it is really boring to see other second creations under one person.

Very good looking. This is not only the best but also the most awesome fanfic I have ever seen. It can be said that the author writes according to the reader's heart. There is no pretense or trick of pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger. Can the author make it longer instead of ending in two or three hundred chapters [crying]

It's actually pretty cool, as long as you put your mind down. But there is one thing I still want to say. In fact, the protagonist is hegemonic, which is exactly contrary to China's ideals. Of course it's just a novel, it doesn't matter. Anyway, he is not arrogant in China, and it is very satisfying to bully the Japanese. But I still want to say it after reading it. If it does happen. In fact, the one who wants to kill the protagonist most is the one who talks about equality. On the contrary, it is the hegemonic emperors in the West who most want the protagonist to stay alive? I dare not say more. Fear? Enter Xiaowen's dark room. Therefore, the author also dares to write and act. Fortunately, it is also a Tomato platform.

It's really good, especially the plot at the end, which is well integrated with the original work. It doesn't just serve it up like other fans, and it doesn't have the kind of cunning operations that forcefully suppress the combat power and forcibly lengthen the plot.

Give it four stars~ The plot does not overwhelm the fighting power, and the inclusion of feelings about family and country can retain many people. After all, we were invaded back then~ Hey~ I felt a little happy in the novel~ about the war of resistance and the next plan. Counterattack! I can't spray this, it's really cool! ~ You can understand the old age state in the second half as the (One Piece) setting. A lot of plot references or clones of One Piece plots appear~ But I don't think the ending is that good. There are many ways to live forever under one person. The protagonist does not choose immortality~This is a pity~[awkward laughter] In general, this book has a lot of bonus points, which is the war of resistance! Fight! Still fighting!

The writing is really good, especially the fight against the little devil, which is full of joy.

It is a very good-looking fanfic of Under One Person. It does not focus on describing Zhang Chulan and Feng Baobao. It is purely based on the perspective of the protagonist. This is very, very good. Most other fanfics of Under One Person cannot bypass Feng Baobao and Zhang Chulan, but this book does it. The appearance rate of Feng Baobao and Zhang Chulan is very low. It can even be said that they are not supporting roles and can only be regarded as supporting roles.

This is a good book, with a complex about family and country, and joy and hatred. I don't understand how this rating came about. From what I have seen so far, this book can be rated 9.5 Or above.

After reading Chapter 103, I have to say that the rest of the book is really fun. Yes, that's what it is. It's very well written. I have to say that the author really dared to write. I almost thought your book would be lost. It's so interesting.

Very good, I feel like it's more than just food and grass [laughs evilly]

Nice! Atmosphere! Readily! The protagonist is now unifying the Cao Gang, becoming the sole master of the rivers and lakes, and then starting a national war with Japan.

The writing is very stable and coherent. I hope the author can keep it up and keep working hard.

This book is really good and worth reading, both from the beginning to the end. Although there are some flaws in the middle, it can be seen that the author deliberately suppressed his own mentality, and it is harmless? Looking forward to the author's next book

Update it quickly, it can be regarded as Tomato's best novel. As for the later trend, it doesn't matter if the anime fandom dominates. Author, you know what I mean. [Cool]

Very good, it depends on what happens next. Just be more steady now. Let's see what you write later. But it's really good, come on!

It's pretty good. The accumulation in the early stage is too thick. When the main plot of 36 Thieves and Zhang Chulan begins, it's like child's play for the protagonist. Things can be solved with one punch. It can be said to be a very good one-person fanfic.

It's very interesting. I hope I can continue writing.

It doesn't stress the combat power, and the start is different from others, not so cookie-cutter, support it.

Okay, finally there is a book that integrates the forces of Gossamer Little Days

Klass is awesome, it's great not to have to fight anymore. It depends on how the author arranges it later. It should be fine if you don't touch sensitive areas [please update]

The refreshing writing is quite good. Now I have changed it to write about a more popular world starting from under one person. If the fruit of Zhenzhen is like a dragon, it is easy to write. It is equal to the fusion of laws.

The most beautiful fanfic I've ever seen