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Keep this style, add a little sweetness between jokes and mutual criticism, keep this rhythm, and don't drag the chapters too long, otherwise it will be boring, so it is best to finish it after two or three hundred chapters. Come on, this book can be a god [please read carefully]

Well, I actually read the same plot next door. Comparatively speaking, your character description is not that different from that one. I think it would be better to write a book with your own style using your writing style. I originally wanted to give it 3 stars, but at least I met one author who said that 3 stars is considered a bad review, so I give you 4 stars. I hope I can see your masterpieces in the future.

It can be regarded as a slow-burning daily novel. Let alone sweet pets, it doesn't even count as a sweet novel. It just has a light and sweet feeling. And when I read this book, I personally felt that I felt very relaxed while reading it. It's also quite classic. I think the protagonist is not good at this or that, and is not worthy of the heroine (the male protagonist is also a pretty classic song writer) Note: The male protagonist is an aboriginal, but when he dreams at night, he dreams about entertainment on this side of the earth (the author is also quite smart, using this method) Later, a loli sister appears who likes the male protagonist (this character also reflects that the male protagonist has no sense of boundaries, although he has almost no relationship with the female protagonist. So I feel that this character may be okay if you put it in a regret article, but it feels not so appropriate in this article. (As for what others have said about two years of separation, indifference in emotions, incompatible personalities, how a strong person and a loose person got together, why they didn't divorce, the woman's desire to get back together, the psychological descriptions of the man and woman, and other plot ideas that expressed doubts and felt there was something wrong with the setting), my feedback is, please read the original article. Bai Muyang looked at the bustling crowd in front of him and the flashing neon lights in the distance, and suddenly sighed to himself: "Now think about it, life is so long, why do you have to rush to fall in love when you are a teenager?" He just finished speaking. The girl behind him, who had been sitting quietly behind the purple velvet, suddenly said in a very soft voice: "Didn't you say in your previous life that you wanted to meet sooner?" Her voice was too low, almost completely swallowed up by the noise around her. But as Bai Muyang and Yu Jianing were turning around to leave, their footsteps paused. They glanced at each other subconsciously. The answer is obvious, if we made an appointment in the previous life, we must be together happily forever in the next life. Thinking about it this way, I suddenly felt that I could write a prequel. Wouldn't that be just a regrettable article? Then write that loli into the prequel, and the plot can be changed into Hostess: If there is a next life, we must meet as soon as possible. I don't want to miss you again. I don't want to regret it anymore (words like this) Loli: Brother Muyang, thank you. If there is a next life, I hope you can be with Yu Jianing. But, even so, if there is a next life, I will still like you. Male protagonist:(っ╥╯╰╥c) Yeah, I don't know if it's because I have a cold or something else, but when I saw the two pictures of each other expressing sadness and touching, I really burst into tears. You can pretend not to see it, but I can't pretend to be stupid [I'm about to cry]

It's so good, but there are too few chapters. The author is adding more updates! What a blast! Don't wait for the short drama to come out. You haven't finished it yet.

After watching it for a while, I actually think it's okay, but there are some shortcomings. The male and female protagonists do have very different personalities, but don't engage in a harem. If this was a harem, I would definitely give it two stars.

It's pretty good. Although you may think the details are a bit toxic, it's okay (it's possible that I'm usually too poisonous), but overall I'm doing a pretty good job, with some tears (a little) and a lot of laughter. You can take a look at it, and it's not that toxic.

It's a very good book, much better than the same type of articles published by Yang Persimmon.

It's okay, no problem

Good reviews, worth a look After reading today's three chapters, I don't think I can say they are very good, but they are pretty good in the same genre. I haven't read this type of article for a long time. I hope I can write more, preferably seven or eight hundred chapters.

It might be a little bit weird in the early stage, but it's still pretty good in the later stage. Keep it up, author

The author has also read Ye Qingyang's book next door. It's very well written. Come on.

After watching it for a while, I feel like it's basically the same as Cat, a love story about ex-wives quarreling with each other.

The writing is pretty good so far

Very funny

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Good-looking. Love to watch. Like to watch.

Hope it doesn't end badly

The author is awesome

Quite funny. Keep it up

It's quite sweet. It's a good book.

Not bad, not bad. Don't worry, listen. Liangcao

Good! Very pretty!

Not bad, the plot is okay too

I rarely watch a female protagonist, but this one is okay.

How many times has the author turned off the cannon?

Very interesting, don't watch it in the middle of the night