If You Rely on Your Own Female Account to Guide You, Does That Count as a Soft Meal?

Don't let there be a plot where the male protagonist uses his sister's body to get married. I see that there seems to be this trend now. It's better to stay single.

It has been changed to a single version at the moment, and the writing is excellent, with good descriptions of women's clothing and bodies, and almost no description of female abortion. It is a very excellent transformation text that affects the reality of online games. It has a perfect world view, a secret writing method, a lot of foreshadowings such as the protagonist's transformation secret, the disappearance of his sister, etc. The most important thing is that the writing is very detailed, especially the battle scenes are full of descriptions and have a sense of substitution. Several supporting characters also have distinct personalities. Judging from the current plot, there will definitely be a huge crisis in the real world in the later period. The protagonist must raise both accounts to level 50 to unlock new information. Regardless of whether there is a love line or not, this book must be updated! Very interesting, the writing is worth collecting.

The main plot is clear and reasonable, the world view setting is relatively traditional but still complete, the characters are vivid, the emotional bonds and conflicting plots are reasonable, the narrative and wording fluency are not bad, and there is no abrupt feeling of a running account. The character creation and transformation of the protagonist are pretty good compared to other transformation novels. The atmosphere of the scene is a bit stiff, the way the female body improves her performance in the first few times is a bit awkward, and the pace is too slow. Sometimes the daily chapter cannot even cover a complete plot, and the content is too little [face covering]

I saw the latest and asked my questions. The target audience is unclear. You said you wanted to write slowly, one chapter a day. After all, no one is reading it. If you want it to flow slowly, that's okay, because the ones who can keep following it are the ones who have the patience to follow your updates. But the target audience has not been identified accurately. After 200 chapters, everyone does not know whether your core audience is single/hundred/narcissus or married. What I mean is that the core audience is not a single target audience. If you want to eat them all, you must have a main core audience, because this affects the outline and writing style. To put it bluntly, if you write the order, you can start your career with peace of mind, discover the conspiracy behind the game, improve your own strength, and become a strong woman. If you are Narcissus, then there must be interaction between the male and female accounts in the plot. Regardless of whether the male and female accounts are pretending to be ambiguous or really ambiguous, at least there must be a plot, and this is also what is on your profile. However, there is basically no progress after 200 chapters. This has nothing to do with your slow update, because I am talking about 200 chapters, which is the progress of the novel. Then there is marriage, which corresponds to Shan. If you look at Dan's novels, they don't write too many feminine words. They mainly talk about the beginning and then start a career. In your novel, the male protagonist needs to adapt to multiple female characters and he is just acting. How do you control it psychologically? What kind of person do you want the protagonist to be? Judging from what you wrote, I am definitely not a devil with broken shoes, nor a strong woman who only pursues strength without physical desire, nor is she a woman who really likes others. To put it purely, it would speed up the independent progress of the female account, and write about the interaction between the male protagonist and the female account to build a career. Isn't it good to fit the title and the introduction? Moreover, it will not affect your writing about fighting monsters and people in games. Now you want to bring each character to life and write in depth, so the progress is slow, but because of this, you want to finish writing everyone, and it will take until the year of the monkey. What readers dislike most is not that the update progress is slow, but that the novel is too watery, and there is currently no interaction with the male protagonist. All in all, the core writing point of playing the role of a female protagonist to support the male protagonist and making the male protagonist a soft meal was not reflected.

It's good. It's indeed slow-paced. The sunk cost of reading this kind of book is a bit high. Don't stop updating it. Heart] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

So beautiful. Slightly toxic, mainly because there are too few books of this type. And it looks like this book still has potential. The author's writing is getting better and better. Things changed later. There is a yandere. Chase and kill the protagonist.

Lao Zuo, I came here after seeing the emotional interaction between male and female accounts in your profile, but now it has been updated to 182. Let alone emotional interaction, male and female accounts cannot even appear at the same time. To be honest, it is more or less a profile fraud. I'll give you five stars first. I'll look at it later.

It's a pity that no one is watching. I still like this slow feeling. But it is indeed a bit too slow. Can the update be faster? I'm a little anxious as I wait. I hope you can write to the end

There are no big problems with the plot. It looks good and the pace is not too slow. It's just that the mode will make it frustrating for those who want to see Lily. In addition, the cover doesn't have the feeling of making people look at it forever. The main reason is because the cover looks too ordinary. It is too difficult to attract readers with the cover now. Anyway, I am following this book, I hope I can stick with it.

Judging from the content of the introduction, the author has a big plan for this book, and the content is also very rich. Judging from the content, the author's writing style is also very good, and he does not deliberately delay the plot. The content of the story is not slow to advance (objectively speaking, the update speed of one update per day makes the plot feel very delayed, which affects the judgment and makes it easier to maintain the book). I also hope that the author can persevere and finish the book.

Although the book is not particularly superb, and is even quite awkward in many places, but it suits my taste, so give it a five-star support. At least there are no poisonous points in the 100 chapters so far, and I will continue to support you to prevent sudden death [please update]

Good-looking (๑• . •๑), Love to watch Divine power? Divine benevolence? Gods, here and now, all you have to do is listen! [Order] will eventually have flaws. Respect this decree and cut it off. [Memory] will disappear in a moment. Respect this decree and cut it off. [Hunting] It only increases the suffering and evil, worship this decree, cut it off, [nothing] has nothing left, worship this decree, cut it off, [open up] knowing it is impossible, worship this decree, cut it off, I command with perfect music, create Paradise again, there is no god here, the one who created Paradise is the [King of Men] The tuner of the praises, chorus of chorus, Dominicus

Still pretty good If I have to say it, other clones are slower to come out. Also, when there are few avatars, one time can end. What will happen if there are too many avatars after changing to another avatar? [What]

I want to see Xiao Chunan being attracted to the female body, but I can only watch the female body falling into the arms of the male body and then smearing little pearls on the corner😋

It's good, but the rating is only around 6.0, It's a bit short. After reading it, I feel like I'm still reading it (sad) [I'm about to cry] Waibibabu! ! ! I want fresh and delicious novels! ! ! ୧( ˵ ° ~ ° ˵ )୨ Come on! ! Ollie give it! ! ! (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤ I want to show my strength¿ ! (Fog)

Beautiful, beautiful! ! ! The author needs to keep updating

Looks good, looks very comfortable, please support me

Potential stocks, support a wave [blowing kiss]

It's pretty good. Give it 5 stars to support it. The author liked it, please give it a follow-up review. First of all, I have finished reading it now, and I personally feel that there is nothing toxic about it. There is no problem with the resource allocation of the game account. After all, it is the protagonist himself, and it is the same for everyone. Even if a certain account is ahead for a while, it will be made up for later, so don't worry about this. And personally, I quite like this kind of transformation story (perhaps to be more rigorous, it's half a transformation story). After all, the protagonist can't change back. It fits the description of both men and women mentioned in the introduction, but don't worry, it doesn't feel very gay. It's the kind of plot description that is common in transformation novels to attract boys. Then there is the vest attribute, which I quite like. Regarding the fact that some people in the comment area said that the trumpet is too slow to open, it's a matter of opinion. The author can just follow his own pace. I hope the author will continue to work hard, and I also hope that the results of this book will get better and better. The current rating is indeed a bit low.

This is definitely a potential new work with excellent writing

It looks good, just what I expected, but it would be nice if there were more things I wanted to see. Maybe the author hasn't written it yet.

I personally think the early rhythm is okay, it's not the same cookie-cutter template, keep it up [like]

The writing is good, and the protagonist's character is also good, but the plot feels a bit draggy. We have just built the town after more than 200 chapters, but the plot is followed up well. Come on, author.

The writing is good, the emotional flash points are set, the pace is comfortable, and the setting is interesting. Come on author [shy]

It seems very clear at the moment, (part of the text is omitted below), in short, it is a good book, worth reading, but the volume is a bit small, if possible, I recommend two updates

The logic is clear, the structure is reasonable, and there are no big poisonous points so far. It's a pretty good book in this genre. Come on, don't stop updating [Like][Like]

Looks good, I like it

Now that I see it, I'd better give it 5 stars.

I originally wanted to give it four stars because the pace was too slow and there were too few updates. But after thinking about it, I decided to give it five stars to encourage the author.

The book is very good, support it