Lin Yuan, an ordinary fresh graduate, once passed through the world of martial arts where martial arts is supreme.
When I became an adult at the age of eighteen, I thought I was doomed to be at the bottom and mediocre for the rest of my life.
But I didn't expect...
The beautiful wife is bound to accompany you at the beginning, and the [Martial Arts Real-time Map] awakens simultaneously!
See through the opportunities in secret realms, understand the flaws in martial arts, predict the killing moves of powerful enemies, and resources will come to you automatically.
Reader comments
The author's writing style is superb, the text is full of atmosphere, the description is delicate and vivid, the picture is full of sense, the story setting is very innovative, the golden finger is not obtrusive, the main line develops naturally, and the details are full. The reading experience is excellent and I hope the author will keep it up.
The protagonist gets an opportunity through the map, which should be the main plot. But there is not much space for description. There are many people who have the aura of the protagonist in the book. It feels like this protagonist is basically a supporting role for those people. The protagonist should be given some ceiling-level opportunities. Come on, author! Write a satisfying work!
The rating of 5.1 Is indeed a bit low. An 8.5 For this book should be fine. The writing in the early stage is a bit cowardly, which is understandable. It saves my life. However, it is indeed not good-looking. The more I write in the future, the better. Now there are two female protagonists, which is not bad.
It's good-looking, but not The Holy Mother. There's more foreshadowing in the early stages, but it's even better in the later stages. The author writes slowly, but the step-by-step development is pretty good.
It was very interesting, I stayed up late to read it.
The first part was fine, but halfway through I couldn't stand it. [Stare][Stare]
It's pretty good. I feel like it's more than such a low score.
Just, bland, very average, ah, as you advance, you advance, and so on, hahaha
Okay, it's worth a look. The pursuit is now over.
I prefer to watch, don't spray
The thinking is clear, but the pace is too slow and looks a bit tiring.
The writing is good and the reading process is quite comfortable.
The author's writing style is superb, the text is full of atmosphere, the description is delicate and vivid, the picture is full of sense, the story setting is very innovative, the golden finger is not obtrusive, the main line develops naturally, and the details are full. The reading experience is excellent and I hope the author will keep it up.
The protagonist gets an opportunity through the map, which should be the main plot. But there is not much space for description. There are many people who have the aura of the protagonist in the book. It feels like this protagonist is basically a supporting role for those people. The protagonist should be given some ceiling-level opportunities. Come on, author! Write a satisfying work!
The rating of 5.1 Is indeed a bit low. An 8.5 For this book should be fine. The writing in the early stage is a bit cowardly, which is understandable. It saves my life. However, it is indeed not good-looking. The more I write in the future, the better. Now there are two female protagonists, which is not bad.
It's good-looking, but not The Holy Mother. There's more foreshadowing in the early stages, but it's even better in the later stages. The author writes slowly, but the step-by-step development is pretty good.
It was very interesting, I stayed up late to read it.
The first part was fine, but halfway through I couldn't stand it. [Stare][Stare]
It's pretty good. I feel like it's more than such a low score.
Just, bland, very average, ah, as you advance, you advance, and so on, hahaha
Okay, it's worth a look. The pursuit is now over.
I prefer to watch, don't spray
The thinking is clear, but the pace is too slow and looks a bit tiring.
The writing is good and the reading process is quite comfortable.