[Two Male Leads] [1v1] [Quick Transmigration] [Boys’ Love]
Xu Nian'an spent fourteen years alone in the hospital. After his twentieth birthday passed, he finally took his own life. After he died, something called the System came to him and said that if he helped repair bugs in the small worlds, he could not only come back to life but also have a healthy body.
First Small World.
Pretty school bully bottom VS top student top
Xu Nian'an is held in someone’s arms and kissed until he can barely breathe. He can only drape himself over the other person, panting and muttering, “No wonder you’re top of the class. You really learn fast.”
Second Small World.
Tough, rugged top VS beautiful, frail educated youth bottom
Xu Nian'an sits in the shade beneath a big tree, covering his lips as he glares at the person working for him in the rice paddy. “You bastard! You said it’d just be one kiss. Liar. You broke the skin.”
Third Small World.
Talented junior disciple top VS good-for-nothing senior brother bottom
After Xu Nian'an gives the junior disciple’s room to a newcomer, that night he’s cornered against the door by a giant puppy demanding, “Didn’t you say you loved me, Senior Brother? Why did you give my things to someone else?”
Fourth Small World.
Wealthy CEO top VS young master with autism bottom
A man many years older pins him to a chair in his office, holding a piece of candy as he shamelessly coaxes the naive child. “Be good, An'an. Give Uncle a kiss and I’ll give you this candy, okay?”
It feels very bland. There is campus life, but there are too many passerby plots. The plot between the two protagonists should be strengthened and some irrelevant plots of passersby should be deleted. We've all seen the last chapter, and then there was no budding emotion at all. I felt a tremor in my heart when they met, and then they got together inexplicably. There is no emotional drama between them. There are also some fights and then talking about being bullied by strangers. It can be included but it doesn't need to be so long. It takes up three chapters at once. In fact, I thought it didn't matter when I saw it. But the point is that there is no emotional scene between the protagonists. The result is that the plot of the other stranger characters is too eye-catching. You can say that plainness is your style, but you have to express the feelings between them through your plain pictures.
Very nice. Five stars to encourage the author. A relatively plain sweet article? ) Of course there are a few bad guys, but they are not so bloody. There is no threat of kidnapping and one of you must die. Although it is very long, it feels good to be involved. It does not have that torturous feeling. I finished watching the first small world. The memory was not cleared. The system forgot about it. I will clear it later. When the third world comes out, I will follow up and comment clearly to clear the mines for you. The attack and reception characters are pretty good, but there is no golden finger. The only one he has done is fighting. Personally, I think the male protagonist is not weak. I just help others to the best of my ability. Although the second world helped me, I was also injured. I don't mind too much. Some of you can run away. When the second world is over, I'll clear your memories. (I originally hated fast-forwarding through long articles. I could be persuaded to read them just by looking at the table of contents. But after reading several books, almost all of which were very long, I gave up. However, I don't mind the length because I have a good sense of immersion, so I can read very few of them. But it doesn't mean that the poor writing is just my fault. This book has a good sense of immersion for me)
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It's beautiful and beautiful 🥰🥰🥰, but it's just not enough.
What a pity, I saw the latest chapter, please update it soon)
Overall, this book is relatively good-looking. There are some sentences in the first small world that are not fluent, but they are not particularly big problems. They are all small problems such as missing words and missing words, but I still recommend it to everyone.