Heroine: Scumbag, Scumbag, the Hero Has Fallen

It's tied. Overall, I feel pretty good. The plot develops relatively smoothly. I also quite like the heroine's strategizing character. But some details can actually be changed. For example, the word "female" can be removed from the words "female maid", "female general" and "empress", and there is no need to emphasize gender. After all, this is a female world view, and it should be assumed that these are women. Just like in reality, no one would say "male emperor" or "male general". Of course, this is just my suggestion. Regardless of flaws, the author's writing is still very good. Well, yes, probably because even though she is the heroine, she still calls the heroine a girl and calls the hero a boy. Second Editor: The author has changed

[Five stars for the description and the overall atmosphere] I have only watched the first world for the time being, and will briefly talk about my thoughts. The heroine is more like a piece of cold jade that can never be warmed...? In fact, the author obviously has more action and psychological descriptions of the male protagonist and other characters than the female protagonist, probably because he wants to maintain the lazy buff of the original protagonist. Regarding the setting of the heroine, I thought it was very novel when I first read it. She looks at the entire world (including the system) from an omniscient and omnipotent perspective. The female protagonist doesn't speak as much as 1/5 of the male protagonist, but she can turn the male protagonist into a dog. Whether it's purely emotionally or career-wise, it's a completely superior perspective. She only needs to issue instructions, or express a direction in vague terms, and the internal friction will always be with the male protagonist/others. [Working on draft] This heroine gives people a chill to the bone, which reminds me of some very painful past events. A long, long time ago, I read physical romance novels in which the male protagonists were like this, torturing the little sun heroine I liked to death [face covering]. The male protagonists in them may not be completely omniscient and omnipotent. I got many clues from the perspective of the little sun heroine. The charm of the male protagonist comes from some unknown imagination. I have obtained the results of some problems in this article. For example, the female protagonist from the perspective of the male protagonist in this article is a bit like a cold goddess. After getting married, he realized that some of his behaviors were just because of laziness. [Requesting updates] I am very grateful to the author for producing more in the female protagonist channel. I don't feel bad for the male protagonist, but I am very curious about this female protagonist. The curiosity brings me some memories of previous works. It would be great if the female protagonist can also write some ancient little sun heroines [almost crying]. . . . . .

Everyone told me to read this book. I saw two worlds. When I was young, I read a lot of bg sadistic stories. Even now, I still stop reading them sometimes. But really, this book written by the author has torn apart the superficial love and love. The second world, Shen Da's epiphany, is really like the routine in some sadistic female videos. Why do you do this even if you know the grace of saving your life? It is the heroine who has set up a bigger plot. Tsk, the writing is limited and there is no gorgeous rhetoric. Everyone, let me read it. Thunder is good-looking.

It's surprisingly good-looking. Although the heroine is a scumbag, she is not a "scumbag" in the ordinary sense. She is very charming, beautiful and powerful. No matter what, I am too stupid to express it, but I think it is very nice. Keep up the good work, the author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

I have read more than 30 chapters so far. After reading the first story, I feel that every word is questioning why the man has wronged himself and lost himself. Is love so important? From novels to reality, from men to women, from others to yourself, ask yourself, is love so important? It's so important that you would rather compromise than get out of the quagmire. Overall, I think this story is quite good for people who haven't completely gotten rid of the brainwashing of restored love. There are other flaws with the wording, so I give it four stars.

Super invincible and beautiful, our Mr. Jiang is the female among females, the woman among women. She is good at controlling men. Although her harem is small, each one has its own merits. The Little World is relatively short, and too many male protagonists is not good. The number is just right now.

Personally, I like the heroine's distinctness and the author's writing style is very good. As for the first world, just like Schrödinger's cat, the heroine has not traveled through it to complete tasks and has no personality charm of her own. Then the journey to the male protagonist will definitely end with a second marriage. But when the heroine comes, it's like opening the observation box, and the hero falls in love with the heroine because of her charm. Why bother with the fact that he was married a second time before? If you are confused about whether a man is clean or not, as long as the female protagonist is at the beginning of the mission, the male protagonist will be clean. The main thing is to see the interaction between the heroine and the hero. The author just needs to write this step by step. [Facepalm] Anyway, I don't mind this personally. If you don't like it, you can just leave it. Why give people bad reviews? If you don't like it, it proves that you are not the audience for this book. Give other people respect for the author's hard work in writing. You can give it three stars, but I don't think it's necessary to give it one star. We all understand each other, and if you don't like it, just leave it.

The author's writing style is very online, the female protagonist has a high IQ, and the male protagonist is also well-shaped, not a petty person, and how can I put it, in both stories the male protagonist has transformed and matured, which is really a plus 😄

It's good-looking and doesn't follow the usual routine. The heroine is sensible, gentle and controls people's hearts. Her beauty is just a stepping stone. Her personality charm and wisdom are the reasons for you to continue to like her. I like to see the heroine look strong, a bit scumbag, sensible and gentle. The heroine is an adult who will not be wronged. The identity in the first world is better. Lazy people like it [send heart] [send heart]. The identity of the second world is noble. It looks good and I will read more [send heart] [send heart] I look forward to the author's follow-up works [send heart] [send heart] But to be honest, I only read the first ten or twenty chapters of each world, and then jumped to the ending. I feel that the setting is quite interesting, but I don't want to read it in detail, haha, but I still look forward to the author's follow-up works [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

Not bad, the writing style is quite mature, but in some places I can feel that the female character is not thorough, the wording is still male-oriented, and even the man can be a general. Let me give you some encouragement. The heroine has a very charming personality.

The first world is very well written, and I'm going to read the next one. The female protagonist is a very charming person, and the male protagonist has a love brain. After watching the first world, I decided to continue reading~ I like watching scumbag girls. Men rush to the heroine like moths to a flame without hesitation, looking forward to more interesting plots and worlds. The heroine is lazy and scumbag is also very interesting. I like bad women to get everything😈 But the world consciousness is too bad. If the heroine is amazing, she must remember to k.

This is a heroine quick travel novel with a relatively novel theme. Judging from the first two worlds, it is among the top five heroine quick travel novels in my mind. There is a saying that Yitomao writes about this subject and there are too few good ones. Recently, I have become tired of sweet stories. This kind of novel is not bad. There are not too many vulgar routines. It is still good to follow the line given by the author.

The heroine in the first story was made very weak. She had no choice but to lie flat, but she has a good brain but not enough physical strength. The male protagonist made up for everything by his own brain, haha. I look forward to reading the rest of the story. Please write it better🍉

Jiang Yu did not regret what she had done, but she really had no way of walking into the next small world as if nothing had happened, taking over the next task, saying "hello" to the next person with a smile. When others treated each other sincerely, she calculated that there were still a few nodes left to close the network. So the reason for resignation is simple. She has a guilty conscience.

Five-star praise encourages the author. I think the heroine is really good and has a very charming personality! Personality characteristics are like water and ice. It's really fascinating! In the first world, I felt Qingzhu was very pitiful, but this is already the best ending, isn't it? She still has a chance to have a place with the heroine. The second world is very well written! The three male protagonists are all very well portrayed! However, I actually like the other two more than the male protagonist.

It's great to read. It's tied for the first time. I haven't seen such a sober female protagonist for a long time. The male protagonists are also very good. I like the author's writing style and the plot is also very good. I hope the author will make more updates. I can't bear to finish it.

It's really good to read, and the heroine is particularly charming. I highly recommend it (the reading time is shorter because I watched it on another mobile phone, and I tied it). I really recommend it, please give it some heat. Otherwise the author would have to conclude the article

That's how cool it is! I just love watching the heroine strategizing and having a super IQ! In line with the personality, make a lot of money!

This is really good-looking for kids, the logic is very smooth, and a little bit of textual controversy doesn't hurt. Don't lie to your own people.

It looks good, but I don't know why the score is so low. The heroine is very strong and calm

Beautiful and beautiful, she is the heroine I love. The heroine is indifferent and the hero loves her so much. Self-guided strategy

It's good-looking, it's a heroine theme, the content is very novel, it's delicious [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Great, you wrote the type of heroine I like [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

Super super super super super super beautiful! ! Big update soon! ! ! I really like the great writing and the well-developed characters and plot! ! Very top! ! !

It's super good-looking and super delicious. Just read it and you'll be rewarded. Give the author more rewards. You swipe it over and over and it always looks good, so cool!

It's well written. The female protagonist is very gentle and helps the male protagonist find himself and grow up without being addicted to feelings.

You must stick to it, it's really beautiful.

This book is very, very beautiful. I hope that rich people can give the author a reward~ Don't finish it. It's only two worlds and I haven't read enough [crying]

It's okay, but it's too bland and doesn't look that exciting.

Absolutely amazing, super pretty, we big women!