National Fate Survival: The Rookie Has a Survival System

The content is quite good, but can the punctuation be changed? Is that how the comma is used? Listening to books makes me uncomfortable

The heroine travels through a system and enters the national fortune game The heroine is relatively calm and rational, not very good. The system is a big bug, but it can help a lot. There are various rewards for completing tasks. The heroine grows up quickly. The white-eyed wolf left the country, and the remaining citizens were very united. The heroine did not hide her differences too much, and everyone would see through it without saying anything. There is a lot of infrastructure and the writing is very detailed. I didn't read too carefully. There are also a lot of delicious food. The quality of life is high. There are many types of game tasks. It's great that the heroine always comes first. There are many manifestations. The tiger cub is also super cute. It's not frustrating or disgusting, there are no plots and plots, the progress is fast, the ending is a bit rushed, and it's quite satisfying. The sentence fragmentation is rather strange. It breaks only a few words, but there are no outstanding points. Four and a half stars.

At the beginning, I was almost dissuaded by the format, but after reading it through, it is a good national survival story, with a logical plot. The main problem with the writing is the inexplicable comma breaks and line breaks. It does not seem to be the product of mature AI novels, but more like the author's own writing habits or the result of voice input. Ignoring these problems, it can be regarded as a good idea in the environment of Tomato. In terms of plot, the author has a very clear idea. Through cheats, he can quickly improve his physical fitness, obtain various skills and materials, and build a shelter. The subsequent parts can be regarded as a stand-alone management story. After one year of the timeline, there is a lack of new content to write and the end will be fast forwarded. The overall rhythm is well controlled. What is commendable is the statistics and use of various materials, which is rare. There are errors and omissions, and of course there are some obvious shortcomings in the article, such as physical fitness. The reward at the beginning allows the heroine to reach the level of fighting giant beasts with bare hands and never appears again. The heroine's combat power is suppressed to be invincible, but it is not invincible. Of course, if she really strides into the extraordinary realm, the gap between her and other survivors cannot be described. Readers who are concerned should be careful. This article is worth a try and can be read as an invincible stand-alone daily management article.

It's a very good book, please update it soon.

It took me about half a day to read it. It is really good. It feels a bit like a farming novel and then adds some survival games. It feels quite good. People who like infrastructure or farming may like it. Finally, I want to say that it is really good to watch. Of course, I must have skipped a little bit, because personally, the plot behind it is a bit boring (only my personal opinion), but overall it is really good to watch. Finally, I would like to say that the sentence fragmentation at the end is a bit weird. Can the author modify it a little (o((*^▽^*))o It would be better if possible (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤

Must be five stars. Although the author has some problems with her sentences, reading the article according to her commas can make people choke to death 😂, but she completely destroyed the country by writing about her childhood. This is super cool 😂 The article is overall positive and has a positive outlook on life. Although it is a little difficult to kill in my little life, I still killed it. It's very enjoyable to read 🤭 I just hope the author can change the sentences.

This is the first time I have seen a purely supportive national luck system. The novels I have seen before are all national luck games where advanced civilizations try to experiment. This kind of setting for restoring the pre-apocalyptic ecology is really great 👍👍👍👍

It's pretty good. He always takes the lead again and again. He is worthy of being a person with golden fingers. Except for the few times I worked with the second placer, the heroine worked hard to stock up on supplies and cook delicious food, which was quite comfortable.

It's very good-looking, and this survival game is very friendly to humans. As long as you work hard and don't mess up, everyone can survive well in the future. In the end, the ecology of Blue Star was restored. It's the first time I've seen such a good survival game. The rating is low. Sure enough, you can't just look at the rating.

From a novice to a boss through the system, it is very exciting, but there is a problem with sentence segmentation, and it is not convenient to listen to the book.