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Give yourself an evaluation... The popularity is getting lower and lower, and there is no improvement in collecting and updating... But don't worry, I won't be a pigeon. My poor score... [Full] finally increased by 0.1 Points, but it actually disappeared [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying].

Very good, very good among the Tomato One Piece fanfics I read, no system, no bloodline, steady improvement, not a genius but a stronger ordinary person, occasionally a little climax, the only golden finger is the Wax Fruit and the memory of the past life can play new tricks, which is good. Finally, I would like to ask the author, should the navy go all the way to the end, followed by the Western Sea and domestic revolution, or should he become a pirate later?

A good pirate novel, excellent among similar themes! Fruit development does not have that kind of cheating mode, it is delicate and thoughtful. I've read half of the comments, I hope there won't be any issues with the content crashing later! Come on, author!

The plot setting is very good and the ability development is also very novel. Is it possible to interact with the female characters without making each of them ambiguous? I hope there will be more friendship. The female characters all become ambiguous, all smile knowingly, all talk half-heartedly, I can't stand it anymore, goodbye.

It's very realistic, but I'll write less about seasickness in the future. The world of Pirates is full of islands, and not many people will get seasick. As long as there's no physical problem with seasickness, you won't feel sick again after wearing it for a week.

The protagonist is a marine. It's a drama style, not a brainless piece of writing, it's very well written ~

It would be nice to have less AI flavor

After reading the first hundred chapters, I think it is a very good book so far. I can be considered a bookworm with more than ten years of reading experience, so this book is more to my liking. Come on author, I think he has the potential to become a god

Not bad. . Personally, I prefer this style. . . One step at a time. . Although it may be slower. . But it's real. Come on

Little people step by step

It is rare to describe the world of pirates from this level, and the description is very realistic.

This is the caution of a time traveler. I'm tired of seeing the system.

I think it's very interesting, and it would be even better if it could write more than a few million words.

It's pretty good. This is one of the better-looking One Piece fanfics I've ever read. It's okay. I recommend it! Come on, author!

Not bad, quite down-to-earth

Very nice, five star support

Surprisingly beautiful and very detailed.

Sister sister sister sister

I just want to leave the harem [crying]

It's the style I like to see

It suddenly occurred to me that candles could also be phantom beasts, candle dragons. Going one step further, both candles and candle dragons seem to be related to time. It's like I discovered an amazing devil fruit right away.

I have finished the first volume so far, and it is very well written. It is a rare anime fan with a realistic writing style. The more detailed scene descriptions, character interactions, and supporting character backgrounds all add to the realism of the pirate world.

It's okay, author, come on [love]

What the hell? Most of them are five stars. How come they are rated less than six? They are still unique [smile]

The protagonist should have a domineering look. Without the Overlord color, there is no hope for the protagonist to become a top powerhouse.

It's very beautiful, but it's a pity that I'm just following up on the update. I wish it had been updated earlier [crying]

It's very appetizing. The writing style is very good. Just don't be a eunuch.

Just for the realistic style of One Piece, he deserves high marks. Before this, I had only seen the Pirate Code

It's very interesting, but one chapter a day is a bit torturous.

See it's okay so far