Traveling Through Ancient Times: I Picked up a Witch

For the author, the characteristic of writing is to empathize with readers Regarding the development of the plot, I am curious about what happened between the Warcraft naturally using magic power to lose the sovereignty of the planet, and the witch unable to restrain the magic power to take over the sovereignty of the planet... As for the writing style, there are some parts that are not well expressed in the previous chapters, but there are also better parts. There is nothing abrupt or strange in the later chapters. For me, the comment at the beginning of each chapter is indeed true [smile][smile][smile] At present, I don't feel that there are any big problems with this book. There are still many doubts and pitfalls that have not been solved. I don't know how it will develop. I will first give five stars to support the author who has worked hard [like]

First of all, 1. The setting is about what "colorful magic" the male protagonist Luo Bai can use to go back to the past, and at the same time, he can go back to the present. The hero's power can resist all kinds of damage and absorb the witch's magic power. Witches will leak from time to time when they are minors, which will affect the environment, so society rejects witches. In addition, the power of witches (as far as the top ones are concerned) are very powerful and they never age. Some of them seem to be at least 5,000 years old (good guys are cultivating immortals). I won't talk about anything else. 2. In the plot, the protagonist seems to want to create an environment where witches and ordinary people coexist... But how is that possible? [Hang face] I'm afraid I'll give up on my fantasy in the end and choose a more compromise method. (I guessed [laughing evilly]) There is pure love on the label, maybe I don't quite understand what this label means. It feels a bit like walking in the direction of the harem later? Do these two conflict? [Rolls eyes] The witches in it seem to have had an affair with the male protagonist (one of them is too small), and it feels like they were all redeemed (in the past) with the help of the male protagonist. For the rest of the plot, interested readers are asked to open the book and read it for themselves [laughing evilly]. 3. Lyrically, I think it's okay. I am the kind of person who likes to cover up my feelings with logic. The previous interaction between Luo Bai and Ling was quite "interesting". If there were more foreshadowing (there wouldn't be so much foreshadowing in the early stage), the relationship would be even better. The main purpose is to make readers recognize Ling as "the poor little daughter I picked up outside". After watching Ling skillfully use magic, they will have the sense of accomplishment that "my daughter has grown up". This needs to be piled up with details and interaction. 4. Personal orientation Ling is cute and cute, silly, white and tender, fragrant, soft and glutinous cake😋, my heart melted when she stuffed her head into Luo Bai's chest. I am a human supremacist, and I find it very uncomfortable to watch Witch Fentian. In such a huge world, with more than 100 years of research, I still haven't figured out the effective means of sanctioning Witch 🙄. Looking at the rapid development of science and technology in reality, has this country's research and development, especially the military industry, been corrupted by Smith officials? Finally, my favorite part is the plot of Luo Bai taking Ling, because it reminds me of a book I loved when I was a child, "Robinson Crusoe" [laughing]

It's really good. Please read a few chapters. Trivia, Tomato can't find any books of the same type.

After reading the author's words to all readers, I lamented the author's misfortune, and also lamented that the author could at least keep himself alive by writing books. But after reading the ending of this book, I still feel that it's not a happy ending. Why can't the male protagonist save everyone? I just want to see a happy ending. This only shows that the male protagonist is not strong enough.

It's worth a look, there's nothing toxic about it so far. To sum up, it has multiple female protagonists, and the author's emotional lines are well written, with more emphasis on daily life. It mainly talks about learning the knowledge of witches in the modern era and bringing supplies to the ancient times (the memories of modern times and ancient times are not connected, but there are still memories when you think about it carefully). The plot is more about writing, meeting several witches in ancient times and surviving together. I prefer the plots of ancient times. Although there are occasional twists and turns, there is also the joy of harvest. It is not the kind of mindless and refreshing novel.

Really worth reading

The subject matter is good, innovative, and can be cultivated

It's a pity that I don't know why it's a bit dead.

It's a little bit toxic, but overall it's good. I'd like to give it a five-star rating and encourage it.

Okay, it looks very comfortable.

Rin is quite cute. However, I saw that there are multiple female protagonists. Can you tell us who the other female protagonists are and how many there are? And what are the approximate configurations?