[No cp+unlimited space+cheap finger]
[Lightning Protection: Non-Massive Heroine! ! ! Update as the occasion arises! ! ! There may be some omissions in the wording modification, it is not complete! ! ! Those who like to detail the gender ratio can avoid lightning. Many male and female characters have good and bad qualities. It is a waste of time for readers who like a large proportion of female characters, especially in the early stage.
The heroine has teammates, not a lone wolf, not an all-female team, and has the character name ABB.
Selective viewing based on lightning protection, hello, me, hello everyone.
One month after the end of the world, System 233 arrived belatedly.
With a smile on her face and a kind smile, Jiang Nianxi robbed the system completely!
System 233 is crying in pain, the apocalypse has begun, and there is no way to stock up on goods, what use are you using the unlimited space?
Space? Jiang Nianxi wants it!
Choose one with superpower? Jiang Nianxi never makes a choice!
Blind box? But Jiang Nianxi has a collecting habit!
Who said we can't store goods in the post-apocalyptic world? Jiang Nianxi was playing the old six way, and he was playing with a dark heart!
The rules of major bases in the last days are different, but one thing is that these bases never suffer losses, and no matter who enters, they must pay for supplies.
Jiang Nianxi waved her hand. When she came, she had only scraps of metal, but when she left, she made a lot of money.
The base develops my business, and the base is my gold business!
Reader comments
I strongly agree with and encourage all works with female consciousness. The author's writing is solid and not boring to read. The protagonist is strong, calm and unfazed by his beauty. He also has humanity and warmth, and is well portrayed. Many books are not popular right from the beginning and need time to ferment. What's more, the length of the book is not long so the author believes in himself.
The only pity is that after reading Chapter 70, there is still no independent female character with a full-fledged and stand-up character. On the contrary, Lin Er, the younger brother next to the protagonist, was given a lot of writing. Personally, I really don't like spending so much thought and writing on male characters in female videos.
In fact, if you think about it carefully, if Lin Er is directly replaced by a girl, the plot will not feel inconsistent at all. A girl who came out to join the society early to support her family, and watched as a fool, but she has been holding back the urge to become stronger, to be able to hold on to the bottom line in the end of the world, to protect her family, and to protect the people around her. With this stubborn and tough core, I really hope the author puts this charm and growth line on women. If this is changed, the tension in the later period when she follows the heroine to fight together and support each other will be much better than it is now, and it will be a more memorable point for people to remember this book.
If it is really set like this, the heroine and her will be able to form a contrast between two different growth paths in the later period. The character tension will be far greater than now, and it will be better able to support a work with a truly full female group portrait and a firm core.
The more I look at it, the more I think there is nothing wrong with being a woman. Nowadays, there are only the following types of female characters in novels: gentle, cowardly and naive, motherly and fearless, selfish, greedy and deceitful. There are very few works that feature a cunning female character who can do anything for a living, who is flexible and stretchable, and who has a simple sense of justice and a bottom line in her heart. This is too few.
But there are many similar characters on men. It can be said that the complex humanity of male characters has been vividly described in many works, so I really hope that the author can write a more multi-faceted female character. She may not be perfect, strong, or always brave, but she must be resilient and live for herself, instead of Aunt Zhang for her wife and Sister Li for her son.
It's really a coincidence. I came across a post about this book not long ago. At that time, I was just sighing that the author was so kind. I just clicked in on the recommendation page today. I forgot to rate it and found out that it was the one I read. It attracted me at the beginning. Lin Er, a contrasting and rare female character, also attracted me. I am more interested in reading. There are also many three-dimensional female characters that are well created, such as Luck Ouhuang's grandmother (I think she may have supernatural powers), Qiao Sisi, Xiaoliu and Manager Fang who have just appeared. In fact, there are others, but these ones are really impressive. And the heroine is smart and humane. She doesn't offend others unless they offend me. She is a good person to me. The storyline is quite clear and she also has a little humor. Anyway, it's worth watching.
The role of Lin Er is really good. I only found out after reading the comments that it was changed. What a great change. [Like] [Like] [Like] Excellent.
This is the first time I read a female character like Lin Er, who is like a tough tree. She is very powerful. I envy her courage to try various ways of living for herself. I also like the heroine, especially the part where she analyzes the psychology of the missionaries. The missionaries are to some extent the fourth natural disaster in the small world. The heroine can master this kind of power. I also like other female characters. I hope the author will get better and better.
It's very beautiful. The author's change of yellow hair is really a highlight.
Reward yourself with a five-star [laughs]
2026.6.10
I wish you all a happy life, see you soon, and good night.
Oh my god, I opened the tomato today and so many babies encouraged me. I was so touched. The data for this book is very poor so far, but there are a few kids who have been reading it, following up on updates, and even giving me gifts. I just thought that if someone would read it, I would finish it well. A few days ago, a very long book review suddenly appeared. I read it carefully and then reflected on it. I am not a talented writer, and my writing style is not very good. I am deficient in many aspects. I didn't expect that some babies would watch it so carefully, analyze my role, and then give me advice.
Thank you so much for this reader baby! I will finish revising it by this weekend at the latest! I'll give it a try when the time comes, and I hope I won't disappoint everyone.
Again, thanks 🥰
I hope that more female authors can create more multifaceted female characters, and don't be afraid to create female characters with flaws, because women are also human beings, and people definitely have their own character flaws. There are already many attractive male characters, and they are discussed and liked by many people. I hope more flesh-and-blood female characters can be created and be liked by more people. There are many female authors who say that when they create female villains, they are criticized for abusing women. However, I have read so many female villains written by female-conscious authors, and I have not seen anyone say that they abuse women. There are also many people who like female villains, so I think the female villains who are scolded may be written about male subjugation (female competition) for men. Therefore, the author should not be afraid to create some female characters with shortcomings. As long as the female characters are not harming the interests of women for the sake of men, I will definitely accept them as female characters! ❤️
It looks good, the author has a good attitude, and he changes the words quickly. The heroine is strong but not without warmth. Although evil female characters are very popular nowadays, I still feel that she can kill decisively but not lose her conscience. Helping people within the scope of your ability is not a saint, but being generous to others is. After reading the whole text, the female-male ratio is also very comfortable. I hope this can have a good result.
I saw it when I scanned the article, it's pretty good.
If the protagonist's blind box is upgraded to the top, wouldn't the lucky lady be able to prescribe a zombie antidote from the blind box one day [laughing]
At present, regarding superpowers, I feel that progress is a bit too slow. It can be said that the elderly do not understand the zombie culture, and the younger ones are not aware that superpowers may exist? There is no mention that anyone is curious about whether there are crystals in the skulls of zombies (I remember that this aspect was not mentioned), and no one wishes for the blind box ability (even if it is really impossible to unlock it, but no one has tried it?)
The main character is sometimes written a little unconvincingly. She has traveled through other worlds, and it makes no difference to say that she is originally from that world.
Characters like the supporting character Lin Er are 100% men in other novels, but it is quite interesting that he is a woman in this article. After reading the book reviews, I learned that the character Lin Er was originally a man, and the change was quite good.
I personally hate the fact that female videos always give the protagonist a male younger brother. As we all know, the only things men care about are women and power. Instead of believing that a man who has the resources and power given by the protagonist will not oppress other women behind the protagonist's back, it is better to believe that he is Wu Zetian.
And the image almost always satisfies one of the following words: sweet-tongued, able to coax, playful and smiling, providing emotional value, strong communication skills, rich second generation, stupid and rich, able to spread money, and handsome. This image can only be seen on the pig killing plate. [Laughing]
The author did a pretty good job with it, at least I think it's pretty good. Even if the younger sister wants to kill the pig, she will not persecute women or men in a sexual way. [Laughing]
I hope there will be more female characters in the future
The author was very persuasive. When I first saw the review saying that there was a male partner with yellow hair, I almost quit. But then I saw the author changed the comment below to a young girl with yellow hair. I was really surprised. I didn't expect that the author would directly change the article. I thought at most he would add more scenes of female characters in the back😭😭The heroine is not a completely cruel person. He is not a holy father. He has his own principles in doing things. He will help those who are friendly to him without harming himself, and he will not be soft on those who are against him. (Although the dark man has been wandering around for a long time, when the protagonist guessed that the man wanted to kill her, he immediately started to chase her in advance at night without any delay)
I came here to rate this because I really like Lin Er, the female supporting character. When I clicked on it, I found out that it was originally modified by a male supporting character? It can only be said that we have been tortured by stereotyped female characters in literary works for too long. The author has done a good job in changing it. It can be said that I continue reading because of Lin Er and the old lady, two supporting characters that I like very much. The heroine design is also good, but she is just a common strong heroine. In addition, I have seen a fitness man named Zhong who lives in the same building as the heroine. In fact, this character can also be a 1.9-Meter-9, muscular fitness woman... I really like this kind of character. There are obviously many in reality (very tall and strong female athletes, etc.), But they are rarely seen in novels.
It's tied, the author, cheers! The plot is very interesting and the new character Fang Qing is amazing! ! The several supporting characters written by the author are all types that I have liked before but rarely seen as female. I have been looking forward to seeing someone write them, and this time I have found a soulmate! !
Everything else is pretty good. The female-to-male ratio is not great but it's okay. The lyrics are flawless and there are a few female supporting characters that are more focused on. However, the pace is too slow. At chapter 86, I haven't even fully mastered the building where the protagonist is. There are often several chapters at once, and skipping them all does not affect the plot at all. The heroine's character is a fast-traveling boss that the system is afraid of. As a result, the current ordinary zombie world with supernatural powers has been in the community for almost a hundred chapters, fighting wits and courage with local gangsters. It is burning, but I don't know what is burning.
It is an authentic female channel (including those who love women, and have no obligation to charm men [rolls eyes]). There are many female characters, all with their own unique charm [love] (the characters are plump and three-dimensional without facial makeup [shy]), and the supporting characters have their own growth [admiration] [admiration] The author is also very obedient and will correct it in time if there is any inappropriateness [laughing]
It looks good. As a later reader, I really won't feel awkward because Lin Er is a woman. It is very vivid. People are inherently multi-faceted. Women and men originally did not have character templates. On the contrary, the social environment and the people around them have the greatest impact on a person. The female characters created by the author so far are all very, very good and great [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]
The heroine is very good! This character is suitable for building a huge city in the apocalypse and becoming the city lord. He is decisive in killing but has a bottom line. While working hard to protect himself, he will also lend a helping hand. He is always self-disciplined and has a kind heart but is not stupid. He has a strong sense of community. I feel that he will be a very responsible person who protects one party and persists in fighting against the apocalypse. He will not give up any survivor who has a chance of survival. He can afford to take and let go, and has a clear sense of love and hate.
After reading it, I don't know why there are no ads today. It's strange, but I can post comments normally. The author may have originally favored men, but he changed a lot, but there are inevitably some omissions. I hope readers and sisters in the future will be more tolerant. I asked other authors. If there are too many changes, it will not be easy to publish. Jiang Jiang is so cute. Huahua is also so cute. Lin Er is also very cute after becoming a girl. Now there are more girls than boys. I hope the author will get better and better. This book is very beautiful. Jiang Jiang and Fang Qing both feel very charming. , I saw a comment before that said that there is no flesh-and-blood female character, but I feel that the author has read it and is working hard for it. Moreover, the author really writes very well, and some places are very funny (but the author is sometimes a little careless and does not change the words of disobedient women. Most of them have been changed. She usually misses some words hahaha). There will be a few uncomfortable parts, but at least the girls have a better way out (the male victims are not clear). The writing is really good. I hope the author can do it faster.
It's not very enjoyable to watch... The plot settings other than the characters are quite interesting, but there are a lot of men. The supporting characters jumping around include wives, husbands, sons, muscular men, etc. It's annoying to watch, and I really like the character Lin Er.
It's very beautiful. Everyone's portrayal is very three-dimensional. Even the villains have flesh and blood, but the perpetrators still deserve to die. I heard that Lin Er has changed it and it is very successful. 233 Is also very good. The heroine has her own set of bottom lines. She is hard-spoken and soft-hearted, giving many people a chance to survive. , Has become a way of survival for many people, and there are also middle-aged women who awaken. When they were young, they were unconsciously coerced into creating life. In middle age, they wake up and realize that they are responsible for life and death. They kill their husbands and children. She has nothing but two things that belong to her, the child that crawled out of her belly and the knife that just came out. There are no words to humiliate women, and the order is comfortable. They are sisters, brothers, aunts, and uncles, and there are many female highlights. Author, please update it quickly. I thought of an animal donkey sculpture for you. How about it? Don't stop and get up and update it quickly.
Because the article has been changed, I have deleted the previous comment and commented again. Continue reading from Chapter 55.
Regarding the words disobedient to women, the search terms are commonly used. There was only one before Chapter 55.
Regarding the gender ratio (the protagonists are not included in this), there are one or two more women on a one-to-one basis, if I remember correctly. (Here we mean the number of appearances, not the number of scenes).
He is a neutral word. This article uses it for men, while women use she. Did the author intend to use (nan) or (tuo)? Although the pronunciation is different, this word can be pronounced as ta.
The current plot is pretty good, and the narrative rhythm is just right. The small drawback is that there are a few mistakes in writing. For example, the lipstick was given by the fitness instructor at the beginning, not from a blind box. It is only Chapter 54. I look forward to the follow-up development.
As for ordinary human rights, the writing should be passable. The author also listened to the advice and made a lot of changes [laughs], but there are some omissions that he did not change. Overall, it is mild to me. I personally don't like to read it (the slow pace is one point, it is not exciting at all, and it is not very enjoyable to watch) and then ran away.
The newly found treasure, reading the latest chapter in one breath, is still unfinished. I like Lin Er the most. This role has been changed so wonderfully! ! And the flower girl is also wonderful, with such a cold face and cuteness, she blows everyone away [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] without any bad intentions towards the other girls. Everyone has flesh and blood, even the villain. It's so good. I love to see if the author can release another 100 chapters [crying] [crying]
The use of blind boxes, which is widely advertised but kept secret, is handled very smoothly, and it is also a novel point of view.
Nothing poisonous. The heroine and the friends around her are quite memorable. The plot has always been light, and the heroine is relatively comfortable with it.
It has two controversial characters, which is quite good. It's the younger brother Lin Er (cunning, flexible, although I know from the comments that it was changed from male to female, but when I looked at it, I couldn't see any trace of the change, it's quite silky), and Fang Qing (can control the mind, influence the direction of the spirit, and finally lead everyone to the base). At first I thought she might be a villain, but later on I realized that her approach was really uncontroversial from her point of view, and others really couldn't do it. Although she had to take the initiative to sacrifice some people, she was indeed doing it for the sake of the country and the people.)
I saw some comments saying there are too many male villains. I don't even remember any men. Just one named Wen. The others I don't know are probably just straws. Are they considered villains?
I don't even remember any men. Just a villain named Wen. There is also a friend of the heroine. There are four other female characters with memory points, not counting the heroine: Lucky Grandma, Little Brother Lin Er, Chicken Girl, and the Leader.
If I really want to elaborate on the male to female ratio. There are five men, one woman.
The only thing in the middle made me want to stop watching. It lies in the other systems that the heroine has drawn. In the past, I showed my determination not to use it, but in the end I still used it. Therefore, the author should actually want to show that the heroine is thoughtful and clearly expresses the hidden dangers first, and then finally decides to use it. After seeing this, I didn't feel any more uncomfortable.
After seeing the author's reason for discontinuing updates, I noticed that the rating was so low at six points. Although I came to see it from Wenhuang, the rating is not so low. Qiao Sisi, I don't see where this argument is? (Because I saw many articles being serialized, but even so, I still remember the heroine and her friends. Where did Qiao Sisi come from and who is the controversial one? I don't even remember this person.)
Ah, it's almost 5 a. M. And I still haven't slept. I wanted to sleep, but then I saw the reason for the author's loss and noticed the low rating.
So. Decided that I must give a five-star review now. Then let me talk about my impressions.
This book is really very comfortable to read, because I saw a lot of characters, and it takes a lot of patience to create many characters.
And a very important point is that every person created is of flesh and blood. It can create the kind of women who are very market-oriented, and there are also some impulsive people who are trying to be smart but are actually not very smart.
But in the end it seemed that everyone woke up and had their own ambitions.
I think they are all very good, except for Lin Er, who everyone likes very much.
Those who are ambitious, "stupid", and those who seek revenge and live for themselves are also rare.
And I believe that after writing these obvious keywords, everyone will be able to think of them immediately after reading them. The shaping of people is relatively successful, and it is not very one-sided, nor does the article emphasize how beautiful people are, or how humble they are? How soft and bully is he? None.
They don't wake up the same way, though. All woke up, I really like this way of handling it. Well, because I always like to be more tolerant of people. They have already suffered so many grievances in society. So I hope to give them a chance, a chance to be truly treated as human beings.
The author did not create a perfect character, but it is precisely because of those small personal characteristics. Let them shine. People of flesh and blood.
As for the wording, um, you can tell. Very attentive.
Of course, because I have seen the kind that is more direct and female-oriented, it is definitely not perfect.
But the author himself is constantly improving.
Rather than saying that the flaws do not hide the good points, it is better to say that it is a friendly work in itself, whether it is for people or men, it is a friendly work.
What a new novel, only 100,000 words long, but it still feels pretty good, the heroine is Renyi! I really like this approach of leaving a line for those who come after me.
The psychological descriptions of some villains are unnecessary, but others are quite good.
The evil people here refer to evil people, those "good brothers", if they don't want to see this kind of psychological profiling, they might as well kill them.
The heroine is particularly nice. She is decisive in killing and very kind. If she doesn't lack supplies, she won't take them all away. But she is so anxious. Why didn't the landlord or the neighbors warn the perverted man that something was wrong? It made me very panicked and always afraid of something happening.
The subject matter is very novel, and the author is very good, and the wording is very advanced. It is very worth reading.
The protagonist is the strongest, and Lin Er's image is also very three-dimensional, and he plays a funny role with the system. The protagonist takes revenge on the spot, and there will be no content that would cause myocardial infarction. I hope it will be updated more often and that more people will discover this treasure book.
The heroine of this book is really good. I really feel relieved to have such a person in the last days. He is a soft-hearted person who will not put himself at a disadvantage and can help others if he is able. The villains come off the line quickly, and the women are also very three-dimensional, such as Lin Er, Fang Qing, Qiao Sisi, etc. The author really writes well. I hope this story can be completed and the author will be happy. You are already great! Maybe one day I can meet them again and see them reach the top and live the life they want!
I strongly agree with and encourage all works with female consciousness. The author's writing is solid and not boring to read. The protagonist is strong, calm and unfazed by his beauty. He also has humanity and warmth, and is well portrayed. Many books are not popular right from the beginning and need time to ferment. What's more, the length of the book is not long so the author believes in himself. The only pity is that after reading Chapter 70, there is still no independent female character with a full-fledged and stand-up character. On the contrary, Lin Er, the younger brother next to the protagonist, was given a lot of writing. Personally, I really don't like spending so much thought and writing on male characters in female videos. In fact, if you think about it carefully, if Lin Er is directly replaced by a girl, the plot will not feel inconsistent at all. A girl who came out to join the society early to support her family, and watched as a fool, but she has been holding back the urge to become stronger, to be able to hold on to the bottom line in the end of the world, to protect her family, and to protect the people around her. With this stubborn and tough core, I really hope the author puts this charm and growth line on women. If this is changed, the tension in the later period when she follows the heroine to fight together and support each other will be much better than it is now, and it will be a more memorable point for people to remember this book. If it is really set like this, the heroine and her will be able to form a contrast between two different growth paths in the later period. The character tension will be far greater than now, and it will be better able to support a work with a truly full female group portrait and a firm core. The more I look at it, the more I think there is nothing wrong with being a woman. Nowadays, there are only the following types of female characters in novels: gentle, cowardly and naive, motherly and fearless, selfish, greedy and deceitful. There are very few works that feature a cunning female character who can do anything for a living, who is flexible and stretchable, and who has a simple sense of justice and a bottom line in her heart. This is too few. But there are many similar characters on men. It can be said that the complex humanity of male characters has been vividly described in many works, so I really hope that the author can write a more multi-faceted female character. She may not be perfect, strong, or always brave, but she must be resilient and live for herself, instead of Aunt Zhang for her wife and Sister Li for her son.
It's really a coincidence. I came across a post about this book not long ago. At that time, I was just sighing that the author was so kind. I just clicked in on the recommendation page today. I forgot to rate it and found out that it was the one I read. It attracted me at the beginning. Lin Er, a contrasting and rare female character, also attracted me. I am more interested in reading. There are also many three-dimensional female characters that are well created, such as Luck Ouhuang's grandmother (I think she may have supernatural powers), Qiao Sisi, Xiaoliu and Manager Fang who have just appeared. In fact, there are others, but these ones are really impressive. And the heroine is smart and humane. She doesn't offend others unless they offend me. She is a good person to me. The storyline is quite clear and she also has a little humor. Anyway, it's worth watching.
The role of Lin Er is really good. I only found out after reading the comments that it was changed. What a great change. [Like] [Like] [Like] Excellent.
This is the first time I read a female character like Lin Er, who is like a tough tree. She is very powerful. I envy her courage to try various ways of living for herself. I also like the heroine, especially the part where she analyzes the psychology of the missionaries. The missionaries are to some extent the fourth natural disaster in the small world. The heroine can master this kind of power. I also like other female characters. I hope the author will get better and better.
It's very beautiful. The author's change of yellow hair is really a highlight.
Reward yourself with a five-star [laughs] 2026.6.10 I wish you all a happy life, see you soon, and good night. Oh my god, I opened the tomato today and so many babies encouraged me. I was so touched. The data for this book is very poor so far, but there are a few kids who have been reading it, following up on updates, and even giving me gifts. I just thought that if someone would read it, I would finish it well. A few days ago, a very long book review suddenly appeared. I read it carefully and then reflected on it. I am not a talented writer, and my writing style is not very good. I am deficient in many aspects. I didn't expect that some babies would watch it so carefully, analyze my role, and then give me advice. Thank you so much for this reader baby! I will finish revising it by this weekend at the latest! I'll give it a try when the time comes, and I hope I won't disappoint everyone. Again, thanks 🥰
I hope that more female authors can create more multifaceted female characters, and don't be afraid to create female characters with flaws, because women are also human beings, and people definitely have their own character flaws. There are already many attractive male characters, and they are discussed and liked by many people. I hope more flesh-and-blood female characters can be created and be liked by more people. There are many female authors who say that when they create female villains, they are criticized for abusing women. However, I have read so many female villains written by female-conscious authors, and I have not seen anyone say that they abuse women. There are also many people who like female villains, so I think the female villains who are scolded may be written about male subjugation (female competition) for men. Therefore, the author should not be afraid to create some female characters with shortcomings. As long as the female characters are not harming the interests of women for the sake of men, I will definitely accept them as female characters! ❤️
It looks good, the author has a good attitude, and he changes the words quickly. The heroine is strong but not without warmth. Although evil female characters are very popular nowadays, I still feel that she can kill decisively but not lose her conscience. Helping people within the scope of your ability is not a saint, but being generous to others is. After reading the whole text, the female-male ratio is also very comfortable. I hope this can have a good result.
I saw it when I scanned the article, it's pretty good. If the protagonist's blind box is upgraded to the top, wouldn't the lucky lady be able to prescribe a zombie antidote from the blind box one day [laughing] At present, regarding superpowers, I feel that progress is a bit too slow. It can be said that the elderly do not understand the zombie culture, and the younger ones are not aware that superpowers may exist? There is no mention that anyone is curious about whether there are crystals in the skulls of zombies (I remember that this aspect was not mentioned), and no one wishes for the blind box ability (even if it is really impossible to unlock it, but no one has tried it?) The main character is sometimes written a little unconvincingly. She has traveled through other worlds, and it makes no difference to say that she is originally from that world. Characters like the supporting character Lin Er are 100% men in other novels, but it is quite interesting that he is a woman in this article. After reading the book reviews, I learned that the character Lin Er was originally a man, and the change was quite good. I personally hate the fact that female videos always give the protagonist a male younger brother. As we all know, the only things men care about are women and power. Instead of believing that a man who has the resources and power given by the protagonist will not oppress other women behind the protagonist's back, it is better to believe that he is Wu Zetian. And the image almost always satisfies one of the following words: sweet-tongued, able to coax, playful and smiling, providing emotional value, strong communication skills, rich second generation, stupid and rich, able to spread money, and handsome. This image can only be seen on the pig killing plate. [Laughing] The author did a pretty good job with it, at least I think it's pretty good. Even if the younger sister wants to kill the pig, she will not persecute women or men in a sexual way. [Laughing]
I hope there will be more female characters in the future
The author was very persuasive. When I first saw the review saying that there was a male partner with yellow hair, I almost quit. But then I saw the author changed the comment below to a young girl with yellow hair. I was really surprised. I didn't expect that the author would directly change the article. I thought at most he would add more scenes of female characters in the back😭😭The heroine is not a completely cruel person. He is not a holy father. He has his own principles in doing things. He will help those who are friendly to him without harming himself, and he will not be soft on those who are against him. (Although the dark man has been wandering around for a long time, when the protagonist guessed that the man wanted to kill her, he immediately started to chase her in advance at night without any delay)
I came here to rate this because I really like Lin Er, the female supporting character. When I clicked on it, I found out that it was originally modified by a male supporting character? It can only be said that we have been tortured by stereotyped female characters in literary works for too long. The author has done a good job in changing it. It can be said that I continue reading because of Lin Er and the old lady, two supporting characters that I like very much. The heroine design is also good, but she is just a common strong heroine. In addition, I have seen a fitness man named Zhong who lives in the same building as the heroine. In fact, this character can also be a 1.9-Meter-9, muscular fitness woman... I really like this kind of character. There are obviously many in reality (very tall and strong female athletes, etc.), But they are rarely seen in novels. It's tied, the author, cheers! The plot is very interesting and the new character Fang Qing is amazing! ! The several supporting characters written by the author are all types that I have liked before but rarely seen as female. I have been looking forward to seeing someone write them, and this time I have found a soulmate! !
Everything else is pretty good. The female-to-male ratio is not great but it's okay. The lyrics are flawless and there are a few female supporting characters that are more focused on. However, the pace is too slow. At chapter 86, I haven't even fully mastered the building where the protagonist is. There are often several chapters at once, and skipping them all does not affect the plot at all. The heroine's character is a fast-traveling boss that the system is afraid of. As a result, the current ordinary zombie world with supernatural powers has been in the community for almost a hundred chapters, fighting wits and courage with local gangsters. It is burning, but I don't know what is burning.
It is an authentic female channel (including those who love women, and have no obligation to charm men [rolls eyes]). There are many female characters, all with their own unique charm [love] (the characters are plump and three-dimensional without facial makeup [shy]), and the supporting characters have their own growth [admiration] [admiration] The author is also very obedient and will correct it in time if there is any inappropriateness [laughing]
It looks good. As a later reader, I really won't feel awkward because Lin Er is a woman. It is very vivid. People are inherently multi-faceted. Women and men originally did not have character templates. On the contrary, the social environment and the people around them have the greatest impact on a person. The female characters created by the author so far are all very, very good and great [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]
The heroine is very good! This character is suitable for building a huge city in the apocalypse and becoming the city lord. He is decisive in killing but has a bottom line. While working hard to protect himself, he will also lend a helping hand. He is always self-disciplined and has a kind heart but is not stupid. He has a strong sense of community. I feel that he will be a very responsible person who protects one party and persists in fighting against the apocalypse. He will not give up any survivor who has a chance of survival. He can afford to take and let go, and has a clear sense of love and hate.
After reading it, I don't know why there are no ads today. It's strange, but I can post comments normally. The author may have originally favored men, but he changed a lot, but there are inevitably some omissions. I hope readers and sisters in the future will be more tolerant. I asked other authors. If there are too many changes, it will not be easy to publish. Jiang Jiang is so cute. Huahua is also so cute. Lin Er is also very cute after becoming a girl. Now there are more girls than boys. I hope the author will get better and better. This book is very beautiful. Jiang Jiang and Fang Qing both feel very charming. , I saw a comment before that said that there is no flesh-and-blood female character, but I feel that the author has read it and is working hard for it. Moreover, the author really writes very well, and some places are very funny (but the author is sometimes a little careless and does not change the words of disobedient women. Most of them have been changed. She usually misses some words hahaha). There will be a few uncomfortable parts, but at least the girls have a better way out (the male victims are not clear). The writing is really good. I hope the author can do it faster.
It's not very enjoyable to watch... The plot settings other than the characters are quite interesting, but there are a lot of men. The supporting characters jumping around include wives, husbands, sons, muscular men, etc. It's annoying to watch, and I really like the character Lin Er.
It's very beautiful. Everyone's portrayal is very three-dimensional. Even the villains have flesh and blood, but the perpetrators still deserve to die. I heard that Lin Er has changed it and it is very successful. 233 Is also very good. The heroine has her own set of bottom lines. She is hard-spoken and soft-hearted, giving many people a chance to survive. , Has become a way of survival for many people, and there are also middle-aged women who awaken. When they were young, they were unconsciously coerced into creating life. In middle age, they wake up and realize that they are responsible for life and death. They kill their husbands and children. She has nothing but two things that belong to her, the child that crawled out of her belly and the knife that just came out. There are no words to humiliate women, and the order is comfortable. They are sisters, brothers, aunts, and uncles, and there are many female highlights. Author, please update it quickly. I thought of an animal donkey sculpture for you. How about it? Don't stop and get up and update it quickly.
Because the article has been changed, I have deleted the previous comment and commented again. Continue reading from Chapter 55. Regarding the words disobedient to women, the search terms are commonly used. There was only one before Chapter 55. Regarding the gender ratio (the protagonists are not included in this), there are one or two more women on a one-to-one basis, if I remember correctly. (Here we mean the number of appearances, not the number of scenes). He is a neutral word. This article uses it for men, while women use she. Did the author intend to use (nan) or (tuo)? Although the pronunciation is different, this word can be pronounced as ta.
The current plot is pretty good, and the narrative rhythm is just right. The small drawback is that there are a few mistakes in writing. For example, the lipstick was given by the fitness instructor at the beginning, not from a blind box. It is only Chapter 54. I look forward to the follow-up development.
As for ordinary human rights, the writing should be passable. The author also listened to the advice and made a lot of changes [laughs], but there are some omissions that he did not change. Overall, it is mild to me. I personally don't like to read it (the slow pace is one point, it is not exciting at all, and it is not very enjoyable to watch) and then ran away.
The newly found treasure, reading the latest chapter in one breath, is still unfinished. I like Lin Er the most. This role has been changed so wonderfully! ! And the flower girl is also wonderful, with such a cold face and cuteness, she blows everyone away [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] without any bad intentions towards the other girls. Everyone has flesh and blood, even the villain. It's so good. I love to see if the author can release another 100 chapters [crying] [crying]
The use of blind boxes, which is widely advertised but kept secret, is handled very smoothly, and it is also a novel point of view. Nothing poisonous. The heroine and the friends around her are quite memorable. The plot has always been light, and the heroine is relatively comfortable with it. It has two controversial characters, which is quite good. It's the younger brother Lin Er (cunning, flexible, although I know from the comments that it was changed from male to female, but when I looked at it, I couldn't see any trace of the change, it's quite silky), and Fang Qing (can control the mind, influence the direction of the spirit, and finally lead everyone to the base). At first I thought she might be a villain, but later on I realized that her approach was really uncontroversial from her point of view, and others really couldn't do it. Although she had to take the initiative to sacrifice some people, she was indeed doing it for the sake of the country and the people.) I saw some comments saying there are too many male villains. I don't even remember any men. Just one named Wen. The others I don't know are probably just straws. Are they considered villains? I don't even remember any men. Just a villain named Wen. There is also a friend of the heroine. There are four other female characters with memory points, not counting the heroine: Lucky Grandma, Little Brother Lin Er, Chicken Girl, and the Leader. If I really want to elaborate on the male to female ratio. There are five men, one woman. The only thing in the middle made me want to stop watching. It lies in the other systems that the heroine has drawn. In the past, I showed my determination not to use it, but in the end I still used it. Therefore, the author should actually want to show that the heroine is thoughtful and clearly expresses the hidden dangers first, and then finally decides to use it. After seeing this, I didn't feel any more uncomfortable. After seeing the author's reason for discontinuing updates, I noticed that the rating was so low at six points. Although I came to see it from Wenhuang, the rating is not so low. Qiao Sisi, I don't see where this argument is? (Because I saw many articles being serialized, but even so, I still remember the heroine and her friends. Where did Qiao Sisi come from and who is the controversial one? I don't even remember this person.) Ah, it's almost 5 a. M. And I still haven't slept. I wanted to sleep, but then I saw the reason for the author's loss and noticed the low rating. So. Decided that I must give a five-star review now. Then let me talk about my impressions.
This book is really very comfortable to read, because I saw a lot of characters, and it takes a lot of patience to create many characters. And a very important point is that every person created is of flesh and blood. It can create the kind of women who are very market-oriented, and there are also some impulsive people who are trying to be smart but are actually not very smart. But in the end it seemed that everyone woke up and had their own ambitions. I think they are all very good, except for Lin Er, who everyone likes very much. Those who are ambitious, "stupid", and those who seek revenge and live for themselves are also rare. And I believe that after writing these obvious keywords, everyone will be able to think of them immediately after reading them. The shaping of people is relatively successful, and it is not very one-sided, nor does the article emphasize how beautiful people are, or how humble they are? How soft and bully is he? None. They don't wake up the same way, though. All woke up, I really like this way of handling it. Well, because I always like to be more tolerant of people. They have already suffered so many grievances in society. So I hope to give them a chance, a chance to be truly treated as human beings. The author did not create a perfect character, but it is precisely because of those small personal characteristics. Let them shine. People of flesh and blood. As for the wording, um, you can tell. Very attentive. Of course, because I have seen the kind that is more direct and female-oriented, it is definitely not perfect. But the author himself is constantly improving. Rather than saying that the flaws do not hide the good points, it is better to say that it is a friendly work in itself, whether it is for people or men, it is a friendly work.
What a new novel, only 100,000 words long, but it still feels pretty good, the heroine is Renyi! I really like this approach of leaving a line for those who come after me.
The psychological descriptions of some villains are unnecessary, but others are quite good. The evil people here refer to evil people, those "good brothers", if they don't want to see this kind of psychological profiling, they might as well kill them.
The heroine is particularly nice. She is decisive in killing and very kind. If she doesn't lack supplies, she won't take them all away. But she is so anxious. Why didn't the landlord or the neighbors warn the perverted man that something was wrong? It made me very panicked and always afraid of something happening.
The subject matter is very novel, and the author is very good, and the wording is very advanced. It is very worth reading. The protagonist is the strongest, and Lin Er's image is also very three-dimensional, and he plays a funny role with the system. The protagonist takes revenge on the spot, and there will be no content that would cause myocardial infarction. I hope it will be updated more often and that more people will discover this treasure book.
The heroine of this book is really good. I really feel relieved to have such a person in the last days. He is a soft-hearted person who will not put himself at a disadvantage and can help others if he is able. The villains come off the line quickly, and the women are also very three-dimensional, such as Lin Er, Fang Qing, Qiao Sisi, etc. The author really writes well. I hope this story can be completed and the author will be happy. You are already great! Maybe one day I can meet them again and see them reach the top and live the life they want!